Get Timers Now!
X
 
Sep 22 - 00:59:55
-1
Page:  1 
Buisness District Competition Part II Started by: Death-Knight on Jul 15, '09 13:40

Harold steps upto the stage once more...

Good Afternoon everyone. Once again.

Me and the judges haven't really had to think about this much as there were only two entries to the whole competition. However so that it wasn't a waste of time for those two we have decided that we are going to let both of them 'battle' it out for the three prizes which are...

# Best Presented Business. This prize is the way the business is presented like, the overall blueprint and the way it all goes together.

# Best Customer Support. This prize is the way that the owner of the business replies back to his/her customers like the way they serve them or chat to them.

# Most popular Business. This prize is how popular the business is. However I understand that some people might think oh yeah lets just get as many replies as you can, well it doesn't work like that. Its not about how many times you can get your friends to make it look popular. Its about how many customers you can attract daily and how many people you can attract overall.

So.. Yes. One of the buisness's will be winning two prizes. The prize for each title is..

$700,000 and 10 Crackdowns.

The two people that will be creating their buisness's in Detroit Buisness District are Starshine and Toni_Sipriani. Congratulations on making it to this stage you pair. Not much challenge for you to get here but.. still Congratulations.

You are to create your buisness as soon as you are ready. The longer you take the less time you have to win the titles.

The judges will be watching these two buisness's closely. I shall be in Detroit as much as I can to watch them progress over the next week.
After that week is up then Me, SkullCandy, LilWayne_ and Marietta will be going through the two buisness's looking for the which one deserves which title. We shall start looking at those buisness's from Day One all the way to Day Seven. The competition has begand starting from now, and It will end on..

22 July 13:40

I would like to say that if you are in Detroit them im sure these two people would love you to drop by their buisness. Also I would like to lay down a major rule.
No Sabotaging each others buisness's and I would like No one to sabotage them either.

With all of that said I would like Starshine and Toni_Sipriani to build their buisness as soon as possible because the time has began.

Good Luck You pair.

Harold walks away from the front of the stage and goes to sit down

Report Post Tip

Scipita is strolling down the streets she hears DeathKnight annoucing the remaining competitors.


Ooh this is interesting, well done you too ! Another fine reason to visit Detroit more often.

No sabotaging aye? You're no fun DeathKnight! Telling gangsters not to sabotage stuff, pfft...

Rightio then, I wish both Starshine and my own member Toni_Sipriani goodluck in this competition.

Are you ready for the jungle Detroit? Are you ?!?

Report Post Tip

Errr... Im pretty sure we are ready Scipita. Rourke has a jungle if you know what I mean ;) So Im sure we will manage.

Harold chuckles

Report Post Tip

I'd like to say good luck to the both of you and I can't wait to see your businesses up and running in Detroit.

Report Post Tip

Oi fantastic!  Thanks so much for this opportunity to set up shop!  I promise no sabotage but is checking out the competition and doing business there allowed?

Report Post Tip

If you want to Starshine. You can always visit your competitions buisness.

Report Post Tip

Ok the competition is over. I shall be traveling to Detroit when I can to look over the business's and talking with my judges. Sorry about me being late but I wasn't around much yesterday.

Report Post Tip

Marietta smiles at the small crowd and nods her head.

I also look forward to reviewing the businesses, and am excited to see who takes the prizes in this competition. Thank you to Starshine and Tony_Sipriani for their participation, and expect to hear from Harold again soon!

Report Post Tip

This Forum Is For 100% 1950's Role Play (AKA Streets)
Replying to: Buisness District Competition Part II
Compose Body:

@Mention Notifications: On More info
How much do you want to tip for this post?

Minimum $20,000

(NaN)
G2
G1
L
H
D
C
Private Conversations
0 PLAYERS IN CHANNEL