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"A New Start" ( Issue I ) Started by: Reaper_of_Dreams on Aug 01, '10 18:01

Panting almost out of breath leaning against his bedroom door .22 pistol in his hand Reaper stares at his hands covered in blood

 

 

 

Reaper: .....What have I done, ... Oh no what have I done!!!

 

 

 

Reaper begins banging his head against his door hard when an abrupt screeching of a car from out side and the lights flooding the house three car doors slam shut quickly he leaps over his bed and tares open the closet lugging out a huge box he pulls out two homemade Molotov cocktails and a silver lighter

 

 

 

Reaper: Im not going without a fight you filthy bastards!!!

 

 

 

Reaper opens the window and tosses one after the other has they explode engulphing two men in flames 

 

 

 

screams of agony echo through the chilly night fading quickly has they fall to the ground.

 

 

 

The other two remaining men hide behind the car and open fire onto the house shot after shot until their clips were empty.

 

 

 

Reaper heads back to the closet lifting the panelling in the top of the closet pulling down a thompson and a clip, loading the gun he leans half way out the window and opens fire showering the car  with bullets tearing through it like butter; a loud whimper comes from one of the men behind the car as he gets hit "CLICK!, CLICK!, CLICK!"

 

 

 

 hearing the clicking noise of the gun the two remaining men take their cue to run they quickly hop in the car and speed off down the dark road bullets ringing off the back of the car has Reaper empties his .22

 

 

 

plopping on his bed reaper pulls out a cigarette from his shirt pocket lights it and takes a long drag thinking to himself for a few seconds he then flicks the cigarette out the window and rummages for two duffel bags out from the bottom of his closet he begins to load one with his clothes and remaining cash the other one with his guns

 

 

 

setting the bags outside he draggs the two burnt bodies barely alive into the house then runs up stares carring back down two canisters of gasoline and begins pooring it all over the house and outside until he gets to the walk way strikes a match grabs his bags and leaves his house to a blaze.

                                   To be Continued.....

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Very nice Reaper, I cant wait for the 2nd issue, hope its as great as the first;) Good Luck!

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Thank you felix it will be along soon

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Good story nicely written

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GReat story, can't wait for the next part of the story. It better be as good as this you got it.

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=P HAHA what if i said the end =] na more will becoming once i get enough reviews on this one

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Reaper up to a post carrying a note and tacks it on the street poll; it reads

Notice:to all my fans the II issue will be coming shortly please keep sending in your reviews and constructive criticism thank you all.

REAPER

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Nice read Reaper, keep it coming

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