"Well look what we have here"
Furor looked at him
"I said you were a dead man next time you came back to this part of town"
Furor grabbed him by the throat
"You obv don't know who you're fucking with do ya?"
Furor smashed a bottle on the counter and shoved it in the man's mouth
the man's buddy pulled out a .38
"Any last words before I put you out of your misery...?"
Furor threw the guy at his buddy and at that moment his buddy pulled the trigger shooting his friend....
"Now you're mine" Furor pulled out his .44 and shot the guy in the kneecap......

Furor was on the run he'd had a few close calls as well he was a wanted man by hitman alike and the law as well, there was a hefty sum on his head he always seemed one step ahead of them though. One day a local officer happened to be passing the local bar Furor spotted him, he always was able to do that as he would often sit where he had a view of all of his surroundings.

Furor stood up and and walked towards the door pulling a knife out and as the officer opened the door, Furor thrusted the knife into his neck and then put the officer's head in the door slamming the door a few times....

Interesting story buddy, enjoyable as always but i think maybe you need some councilling.

Listening to every word uttered from Furor's mouth he scribbles them down, and makes notes for his paper.

You will see my review soon my dear friend.

Prophet smiles, and walks off.

You continue to keep me entertained, one heck of a killing spree. Thanks i'll be looking forward towards reading your next adventure!

I love the intensity that is poured into this story it keeps me on my toes and I feel the adrenaline pumping in anticipation for your next move.

I couldn't agree more on the comments that was given already.You my friend has mastered the art of ending life.

Good work with those punks. Why is it they don't take you seriously until you're standing over them dead? Hopefully the example you've made of those guys will teach the rest.

Ruthless.. I bet his days are numbered - life in the fast lane.. but only time will tell huh.

Good story, keep it up