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Write Club: Show Don't Tell | Started by: Frankie-Messina on Jan 23, '18 16:44 |
"Just the facts Ma'am"
What Is "SHOW DON'T TELL" And Why Do You (a writer or reader) Care?Okay, so if you're thinking you've heard this in a creative writing or composition class - you probably have, but don't run away! Some of these SUPER EASY tricks can take your writing from "pretty good" to "bad ass" if you just start using them every now and again. Telling: Tyler Durden woke up on a storming morning. Showing: Tyler Durden was woke a dim gray light entering his hotel room. He wet his cracked lips and peeled his face off the green shag carpet to look around. Somewhere in the distance thunder rolled on endlessly. A heavy rain drummed upon the window pane incessantly, reminding him why he should never mix tequila and vodka ever again.
Places we show sometimes instead of tell Words that can cause you to have weaker writing As with anything there are always exceptions and I'm not saying NEVER use the above words... but if you see them, just take a moment to ask yourself, can I say this another way? Is there a stronger way to make my point and describe the scene to the readers?
Advice - Instead of including a paragraph to describe what your character looks like in a bit of writing, work a bit of it here and there into what the character is doing.
Avoid using weaker adverbs with your verbs (and don't run away because I used composition/writing class terms!)
Resources You Can Use (Cheat Sheets!) - Body Language Cheat Sheet {1} {2}
MafiaReturns To that end, and to help us all hone our craft, I/We will be sharing tips and tricks from time to time on how anyone can up their writing a-game. If you've got more to say about this topic "Show Don't Tell" or resources to share - please add them in replies below. Not only will others appreciate them... I do too! Writing is a craft and like any craft, it can always be improved. Watch for a full Write Club announcement coming very soon to the OoC board. |
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Some great advice here for writers and aspiring writers! I am looking forward to hearing more about this Write Club Venture, as well. |
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Reply by: KateLogan at Jan 23, '18 16:59 | |
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Some great info here for even veteran writers!
Thanks for coming out and posting this Frankie, I'm looking forward to taking some of these tips towards my next piece of writing. |
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Reply by: Shaggs at Jan 23, '18 17:56 | |
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Ahhhh refreshingly great info and advice! We writers need this because sometimes we get lazy in exposition. After all, a fantastic exposition siphons your willpower because you have to dig internally onto the character's mind, heart, and soul. But then again, once the writing piece is over, the sense of relief and satisfaction is blissful enough! |
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Reply by: Stefano_Cavelli at Jan 23, '18 21:04 | |
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This is going to be huge! *Puts on reading glasses* |
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Reply by: Jones at Jan 23, '18 21:57 | |
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I think even JacquelineBlack is postulating a return for the "Write Club"! |
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Reply by: SullivanBlack at Jan 24, '18 04:25 | |
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The idea that Write Club brought her back to us makes everything even more worth it. :) So glad that this is getting a positive response. |
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Reply by: Frankie-Messina at Jan 24, '18 04:33 | |
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