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| The Night Before Christmas | Started by: Toke-N-Choke on Dec 19, '10 20:39 |
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Twas the night before Christmas, when all through the house, not a creature was stirring, just Toke's fucking tommy gun.
The ropes were hung, with not a hint of care, the parents were hoping, soon the cops would be there.
The Children were crying, pissing their beds, while visions of that crazy madman, were stuck in their heads.
The mother sobbing, her head in papa's lap, Toke put a bullet in their brains. "It's time for a nap."
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Toke sat in his vehicle, waiting for his partner, Pablo to arrive. Finally a car pulled up beside his, and Pablo hopped from the passenger seat.
"Get in." Toke told him.
"Ok, here's the plan. Fat Toni is in there right now. He just laid his kids down to bed, and now he and a few goons are talking about their attack on our business." Toke told his parter.
"Let's go ice these bastards." Pablo said. The two got out of the car and ran to the door.
"On my count."
"One...Two...Three!" |
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Dude that is hilarious |
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| Reply by: HannibalLecter at Dec 19, '10 20:40 | |
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On the third count Pablo kick the door, immediately he sees one goon sat on chair at the bottom of the stairs |
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| Reply by: Pablo at Dec 19, '10 20:49 | |
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Toni runs up the stairs, sending the rest of his goons down to fight his battle. Toke removes his .357 magnum from his waistline and fires two shots into the skinny tweeker's face. Rolling into the kitchen for cover, he pops his head over the counter and put a bullet in one of the goons' legs, who'd been trying to run. |
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| Reply by: Toke-N-Choke at Dec 19, '10 20:53 | |
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Pablo takes aim at the group coming down the stair's, he pops one, first in the chest, then the shoulder, the man spins and topples over the banister. All of sudden a hood dives into Pablo from a room to his right, sending him careering across the floor into the door way of the kitchen, his gun falling loose and sliding across the kitchen floor, coming to rest by the feet of the surrounded Toke. Pablo spreadeagled on the floor is about to call out to his buddy, but he's jumped upon by the hood that knocked him down, he grabs Pablo by the hair and precedes to bang his head against the hard floor. |
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| Reply by: Pablo at Dec 19, '10 21:46 | |
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Toke grabs the gun that had what seemed to magically appear. Aiming it at the first hood he saw, he popped two in his chest, one his head. He did the same to the next man who'd rushed him. Finally taking down all threats to himself, he looked around. He saw Fat Toni standing at the top of the staircase. Glancing around the room once more, he noticed Pablo getting the shit beat out of him. Taking aim with his firearm, he put a single bullet into the gangster on top of Pablo and tossed the gun to his friend. |
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| Reply by: Toke-N-Choke at Dec 20, '10 01:10 | |
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Pablo heard gunshots, the goon who was on top of him, smashing his head into the floor suddenly stopped and slumped to one side, pushing him off, Pablo shakily got to his feet. He caught the gun tossed at him. Toke was saying something, but the words were muffled and indistinct, his head was still pounding from the beating he had taken he. He saw Toke head for the stairs so he followed. He was halfway up the stairs, his hearing coming back, when.... |
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| Reply by: Pablo at Dec 20, '10 19:00 | |
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Toke landed in the mud below the second floor window. Slipping, he cursed himself. He staggered back to his feet and started at a full sprint to the dark figure running across the lawn. Hopping fences and outrunning dogs, he finally got tired. For a fatass, Toni could run pretty fast. Toke slipped again in the mud. A barking dog urged him to hop to his feet even faster. The dog was a few feet behind him when Toke hopped onto the chain link fence. The dog grabbed his leg, forcing him to stop. |
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| Reply by: Toke-N-Choke at Dec 20, '10 21:29 | |
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"TOOOOKE!" |
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| Reply by: Pablo at Dec 21, '10 02:12 | |
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He held his wounds in agony. He'd never had injuries this fatal before...He wouldn't make it...He couldn't... |
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| Reply by: Toke-N-Choke at Dec 21, '10 07:30 | |
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Great story did you guys ever catch fat toni or is there going to be a sequel? |
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| Reply by: Alesha at Dec 22, '10 12:02 | |
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