You walk buy a newspaper stand and something catches your eye, on the front page it reads:

THE START OF IT ALL

A Biography by Se7venControl

Taking interest, you buy a copy and lean against a wall, you begin to read.

Se7ven grew up in the small town of Prizzi, Sicily. His father left to America when he was young and Se7ven was taken care of, along with his three brothers by his siantly mother. When Se7ven was going to school he ran his own group of bullies, they stole money from kids and handed out beatings when necessary. Se7ven was smart though, and he made sure he was never to get his hands dirty, that way he could brush the blame off on the boys that worked for him. That is why, when Se7ven was older and still had his group of now petty thugs, he was never imprisoned for the murder of two elderly people in their home during a home invasion. The problem was, the couple were good friends to the local Don, and althogh the police had no proof it was Se7ven, the Don had been watching his acts for years. To escape the Don and his men Se7ven, at the age of 16, flew to Chicago with all the money he had. Once in Chicago, Se7ven found a rundown apartment complex and began his new life in America.

OOC: My first writing and more is to come, sorry if it's a little short.

I thought it was really good. You just need to work on grammer. Everything is cramped together and it's a little hard to read. Other than that, it's great.

Thanks for the feedback :)

Yeah. It's too bad you had to leave your brother, Ni9ne back in Sicily.

*Unhappy face, frown, cry, toke*

Doc stands back and listens to the man recount his youth.

Sounds very interesting, i'll be sure to stop and listen again if you decide to tell us some more.

Doc then turns to another passer-by named Rex

I believe you mis-spoke there sir, did you mean grammar?

LOL Doc, did you just correct the corrector? Rex its all good we knew what you meant :)

and Seven good job, I want to hear more.

Will do, whenever I get some more free time :) And I work grammer nao?