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| Another Writing COMPETITION! Win $28M! | Started by: CommissarZverev on Oct 27, '19 18:01 |
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“One shell, two shell, red shell, blue shell.” Aegor muttered to himself as he loaded his model 12. There comes a time in every person’s life where they must draw a line in the sand and decide enough is enough. That if someone were to cross said line, they would regret it. It was a blistering July night. The streets were dead, and the air was calm. Aegor lifted his head and moved the window blinds to the side. He squinted for a bit as his vision adjusted to the difference in light. Bingo. They were there just as expected. It was time to draw a line in the fucking sand. He never believed he’d find himself in a deli at three in the morning with a shotgun in hand as sweat raced down the side of his face, but Aegor couldn’t let the disrespect go on any longer. It could have been a coincidence that they only started hitting the delicatessens in this neighborhood once they were under his protection or maybe, just maybe, there were some people out there that thought Aegor was an easy mark. Someone, you could make a fool out and get away with it. Well, no more. No one was pilfering his prosciutto tonight. “They just got out of the car. They’re coming.” said Danny “The Beefcutter” Danielson, the proprietor of the delicatessen. “How many?” asked Aegor as he took a deep breath. “Just two. One’s got a crowbar, the other’s got a pistol.” said Danny. “Wait until they’re inside. Then we’ll take them.” said Aegor as Danny nodded. So they waited and waited and waited. Enough time had passed that Aegor’s anxiety began to die down. At least two minutes had passed. Where the fuck did they go? Aegor yet again opened the blinds. There was no one there. Did they leave? No. Their car was still parked across the street. Before he could speak he heard a loud crack and the back door flew open. Aegor ducked down behind the outer part of the counter. Did they see him? Do they know he’s there? “Well, what do we have here.” said one of the men as he pointed his gun at Danny. “Thought you could get the drop on us. Huh?” said the other one. “What the fuck is that? Is… Is that a tire iron? Did you think that would get the job done? You should have brought something else.” said the thief with the gun as they both began to laugh. They don’t know. They didn’t see him. Aegor took a deep breath and placed the stock on his shoulder. “He did bring something else. Nice, to meat you.” said Aegor as he squeezed the trigger. |
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| Reply by: Aegor at Oct 28, '19 23:49 | |
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(My story is about someone waking up in the distant past, and coming too) Unknown Date and Time
Nicholas would begin to faintly awaken, and roll onto his side using his hands as a pillow, his head pounding from the many drinks he enjoyed the night before. |
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| Reply by: Andrew_Connolly at Oct 29, '19 01:11 | |
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Why is the prize less? I’d guess this in the Financial News 4 days ago, Hedge funds lose another $30bn as performance fails to convince. |
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| Reply by: revenant at Oct 29, '19 02:40 | |
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There was really no reason for Orion to be there, not one at all. He had spent enough time by now working his way up the ranks that he didn’t have to be out slumming it. There was always going to be that nagging little voice that danced around the corner of his consciousness, “Why aren’t you doing more? Why aren’t you better involved?” Orion shook that thought away as he pulled a cigarette from his breast pocket. He drew in short shallow breaths as he flicked his lighter open with a spark. Drawing a long inhale before letting out a large puff of smoke he surgically slid his knife from its holder around his waist. Jamming the blade in between the piece of wood he began working it back and forth, the creak of the nails working their way out filling the otherwise empty warehouse. It took longer than he cared to admit but eventually the top of the crate popped off. He let out a long tired sigh as he slipped his weapon back away before lifting the top off and sliding it until it tipped off and slammed against the ground. Quickly stuffing his arms into the shredded paper that filled the open space his fingers wrapped around the handle of a heavy metal cooler. He wasn’t expecting the sheer weight of it as he had to steady himself by placing the soles of his shoes against the bottom of the carte for leverage and lifted with all of his strength. He let out a groan as the cooler lifted upwards before slamming down onto the concrete floor as he finally freed it. At this point, Orion had bent over, resting his hands in his knees and panting slightly. Two hundred pounds of cocaine in each cooler was heavier than he had originally anticipated. It probably would have been a better idea to grab a few non suspecting hands but these days it was easier to just avoid any prying eyes than have to pay for their silence. It had taken him the better part of the unusually quiet night but he finally finished unloading the fifteen crates that had been shipped and signed for. Large stacks of bags filled with white powder where lined up along the far wall, some three or four bags deep. Orion let out a tired yawn as he stretched his hands high above his head, his knuckles popping and snapping as he did. He certainly wasn’t the math guy but, if he moved any of this at even the slightest of mark ups, he was looking at a hefty pay day. Finally content with the days activities he kicked a milk crate over with his foot before plopping down on it. He lit his smoke almost as soon as he sat, letting his mind wander to the potentially large payday that was coming his way. |
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| Reply by: OrionByrne at Oct 29, '19 03:22 | |
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Some great entries here, guys! I wish I could give you ALL $28M, but I can't. Winning announcement to be made before the end of today! I love you all, very much. |
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| Reply by: CommissarZverev at Oct 29, '19 08:19 | |
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| I have to agree, the stories here are truly profound and manifest as the greatest talent this generation has to offer! We all owe it to CommissarZverev in bringing out the best and brightest out into the public eye, and enduring the self-sacrifice required to motivate, foster, and encourage life to these streets! | |
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