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Love is Dead Started by: Buble on Apr 20, '20 05:24

Dear Muse, please guide my hands.

 

Love is Dead

 

You better go now

Because I like you very much
But there's no hope, I'm sure
This might be our final touch

So you should go now

I don't wanna be hurt
Don't wanna see you around
Please blind me, oh my love

...

Within I'm dying, I deserve it
I need to learn from my mistakes
I give up on trying to find a purpose
And trying to endure the pain

I wonder now if it was worth it
Telling you, love, how I felt
I'm sure now that it wasn't
I fell in love with you, I fell

I fell and now I'm lost
You left me in the dark
And you didn't say a word
Nor had second thoughts

Dr. Love, you see the scars?
Dr. Love, don't leave me too
Dr. Love, please heal my heart
Dr. Love, please I need you

I fall in love too easily
I fall in love too fast, it's true
Doctor, look what she did to me
Is there anything left to do?

Doctor, I can't believe she played me
She played me oh so well
      (Maybe she never played you
       Boy, you may have played yourself)

No, I can't just believe that
She hurt me, yes she did
      (Boy, put that in the past)
I can't, I love her, it's

Such a shame she isn't mine
Her name is on my mind
All the time and it kills me
To know she has another guy

Another guy who gets her kisses
Another guy who gets her hugs
Another guy that she'll miss when
-ever she leaves to go back to work

Because you know she's oh so busy
Yes, dear, I do understand
And she's the walking definition
of commitment to her man

But who am I to judge?
I fucked up so many times
Girl, I just wish I had your love
At least once in my life

You left me and you feel great
But great can turn to better
All there's left for me is hate
Because love has died forever

As my tears drop on the page
My hands shake and my head hurts
I see nothing was the same
Ever since I met her

So many things remind me of you
Wonder what reminds you of me
I hope you know that I still love you
And I will do endlessly

You're my muse, my inspiration
I was fooled by the temptation
That you could be mine
I was wrong and losing patience

It was wrong of me to rush
It was wrong of me to break up plus
It happened every night, you remember?
Me too, great then

I wish that we could start again
Or that this was a world in which I have you
But I guess that we can't be friends
I love you too much and that's sad too

Brokenhearted and you're gone
Baby, I just can't pretend
That's why I've been writing songs
where I die in the end

Hope you're happy, hope you're safe
Hope you're having a good time
If you ever feel my pain, all I ask is please don't mind

...

So you should go now, girl
Just know my heart belongs to you
A love so profound
A love that felt so new.

 

- A.

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Right was delighted that Buble had kept his word

I love it when a man keeps his word, and by coming out on the Streets here, and simply starting to sing, you kept the promise you made to me when you just arrived.. Well done, Bubble!

Right scratched his chin

It was an é....
Right?

Clearing his throat, he commented once more

Well done, Bubblé!

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Damn did you write this if so get a copyrighted or some shit like that
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Hi, thanks. Yes, I wrote this, not sure if this version is final though, I got sad and kinda rushed it. I wrote this thinking of my muse who hides so well around here and also, of course, there's a song I heard that inspired me to write this too due to the rhythm. Here it is: https://youtu.be/pZDzK4CShNk
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Frious were stunned after reading those good lines and were very happy over seeing  that any have such skills writing a good poem like this.

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Nah it’s good and if it’s how you really felt then you should keep it the way it is
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I appreciate it :) thanks.
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