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| Casino heist writing contest | Started by: Matt_Murdock on Apr 27, '20 20:18 |
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Want to take part in a writing contest? Well, now you can. All you have to do is write a story that starts with this:
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I notice there are only three days left. If no one else tells a story here, I will personally split my winnings with all of you. Lets work together to become rich, we could very well make at least $300,000 per person.
There you have it. Your first and last entrant. I'll take the money early, if that's okay with you? |
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| Reply by: Sisyphus at May 01, '20 08:44 | |
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It might not have been the smartest choice but the offer of a quick payday was hard to turn away from. If it was done the right way, taking all the factors into play then it should go off without a hitch. Going in guns blazing to knock over a casino wasn’t smart in any way shape or form but if I waited for the trucks to be loaded with the days take then it was far safer. Having scouted the place the perfect time to hit it was right before they had loaded everything to drive off. It was quite the entourage though which would have to be considered a problem. Two trucks, with one driver and and two guards each. A total of six people to be controlled. I could most certainly not do this by myself. Fortunately I had the perfect people in mind. Four people was probably going to be enough. At least for the plan that was under construction. Having invited Stoney, Aramil and Furiouswolf for a quick meeting I laid out the plans for the upcoming heist. It wasn't the most elaborate plan. More a simple one and straight to the point. I had never been one for stealth and finesse. "- Guys, welcome. We have an opportunity. Riches beyond belief. Tomorrow we are hitting the casino. Truckloads of money. Aramil and Stoney, you're in charge of taking care of the drivers and the getaway. I and Furious will take care of the security helping out with the loading of the trucks. We go in guns blazing. Any questions? Thought not. Lets all get some rest tonight." I had a good feeling about it all. Things surely would work out perfectly. As we all woke up the next day we gathered by the car Aramil had stolen the day before. Everyone seemed focused on the drive over there. No chit chat at all, only game faces. Aramil parked a few minutes walk away from the loading dock. It would get a lot more difficult if we were noticed too early driving up close. I could feel the adrenaline starting to pump as we started walking with our Tommy Guns well hidden under our coats. We watched the security as they were loading the last of the money bags onto the trucks. As they were getting ready to drive off I gave the sign. Everyone sprang into action. A complete bloodbath, mayhem. Bullets started raining towards both sides. Fortunately nothing hit us and we could slowly make our way towards the trucks. When the last security guard dropped we all jump onto the trucks. There were bullet holes everywhere. This was not going to be an easy escape. Anyone laying their eyes on these trucks would have a pretty good idea what was going on. We drove off hastily. Everything seemed to be going nicely. The score of a lifetime. Getting closer and closer to the warehouse, where we would spend the upcoming days laying low, our confidence rose. Relaxing a bit in my seat I glanced backwards. Out of nowhere it seemed like the coppers had caught up to us. This was not over yet. I felt how my entire body stiffened and got ready for the upcoming fight. "- Fuck." |
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| Reply by: Latom at May 01, '20 11:04 | |
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It might not have been the smartest choice but the offer of a quick payday was hard to turn away from. If it was done the right way, taking all the factors into play then it should go off without a hitch. Going in guns blazing to knock over a casino wasn’t smart in any way shape or form but if I waited for the trucks to be loaded with the days take then it was far safer. But there had to be another way, a way that would make my friends and me rich - Rockerfeller rich. What was it? We'd been doing into that casino, day in, day out. Trying different games, watching, waiting. All we had to show for it was debt. We started a book - loansharking to the gambling addicts. Sure, that brought us some cash, but not much. But it did get us an in. We were studying their patterns - how they played, when they played, who they played with. And then we noticed a guy from a casino down the road betting big ... and losing. So, we followed him, offered him some cash. I didn't beat about the bush - I came right out with it; "we know you work at the Goldust down the strip, and we know that you need money." He looked at us like he'd been waiting on us to make the move. He said "buy me a drink" so I bought him a drink. Then he started talking, about how people had owned casinos for years without realising that they could be skimmed. Skimming wasn't the problem - it was moving the money about. He said he'd taken some money off for himself, here and there, but never a lot. This guy, let's code-name him Punk, broke it down. We would have to get jobs in the casino. So we did. We realised that some of the money from the tables gets put in a room prior to being counted. We'd have to pay off the guard in front, but we could skim it no problem. So, we did a dummy rum: a suitcase of money. Boom, done. Then two, then four, then two of us with holdalls. Punk was right, it was getting to be so big that we didn't know what to do with the money. We invested some, but it came back double. We bought huge coteries of bodyguards. We threw a lot around. We got greedy. We got stupid. We should have done it for a while and stopped. But we didn't. And that's why I'm telling you this story from jail. Now, if you wanna hear about what jail is like, that's a whole other story... |
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| Reply by: Kirsty at May 01, '20 19:27 | |
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It might not have been the smartest choice but the offer of a quick payday was hard to turn away from. If it was done the right way, taking all the factors into play then it should go off without a hitch. Going in guns blazing to knock over a casino wasn’t smart in any way shape or form but if I waited for the trucks to be loaded with the days take then it was far safer. The trucks were late, fuck. Looking over to Ricky D I sighed in displeasure. "Well what the fuck happened to the truck?" I asked, it was rhetorical. We knew what happened to the truck. Apparently the bitch couldn't keep her mouth shut and by bitch, I meant none other than Madam Monte Salvatici. Two months ago we brokered a deal. If I allowed her to skip a few months protection dues for her and her whores safety then she would do me this one little favor, but apparently we have a failure to communicate. Taking a long inhale of my cigarette I looked towards the only family I had known since coming to these shores. Ricky D my 1st in command stood at my right, Carlito stood at my left with Davido flanking Carlito's right. Grinning with maniac delight I said, "Lets go rob a casino.." Allowing my words to trail off for a second the team waited knowing that I was not quite finished, "But first lets go teach the Madam a lesson on Omerta." |
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| Reply by: Aislin- at May 02, '20 03:06 | |
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It might not have been the smartest choice but the offer of a quick payday was hard to turn away from. If it was done the right way, taking all the factors into play then it should go off without a hitch. Going in guns blazing to knock over a casino wasn’t smart in any way shape or form but if I waited for the trucks to be loaded with the days take then it was far safer. Brute force was all I needed. Yeah, brute force from a 5 foot 6 woman who weighed a little over 120 pounds. That should scare them into submission. Shaking my head, I figured I shouldn't be focusing on my shortcomings but rather playing to my strengths. Intimidation and strength may not be my strong points, but manipulation and seduction definitely are. I took one last look at the trucks being loaded with copious amounts of bills before driving away, taking the loss for tonight but planning the next moves for tomorrow. When I stepped out of that limo and onto the entrance of the casino, I felt like time slowed down. Necks turned and jaws dropped as all eyes were on me -- clad in the slinkiest and tightest black dress I'd ever donned in my entire life. The fabric clung to every curve of my body and flowed like liquid as I sashayed into the casino and straight to the high-rollers poker table, where three men sat with a mountain of chips in front of each of them. But no matter how rich a man is, they can never be immune to a woman -- especially one that wants a seat at their table. "Sorry babydoll, we've got no seats open that you can afford. I'll let you sit on my lap though." I forced a smile even though every fiber of my being wanted to rip this man's eyes out with my fingers. Alright, assholes, you can leer now but I'll be the one laughing later. Buying my way in, I flipped my hair, batted my eyes, and grazed their arms into submission, distracting them from what was really happening. You see, while they were busy nursing their hard-ons and thinking the lewdest of thoughts, I'd been sharing knowing looks with the dealer, who was more than willing to, err, "help me out" for a cut out of my winnings tonight. In the flurry of flirting and seduction, the men seemed to have thrown all caution to the wind, not once wondering how I got full houses, five rounds straight. And whenever one of them would run out of chips, I'd just have to pout and whine about wanting to spend more time with him and he'd be back in a heartbeat with another million in chips. By the time they'd caught on, I was already peeling off the godforsaken dress I had on and was safely back at my apartment, a duffel bag filled with hundred dollar bills sitting on my coffee table. I wish I felt pity for those men, but honestly.. they had it coming -- they should have known better than to underestimate a woman in a little black dress. |
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| Reply by: Taiga at May 02, '20 09:05 | |
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It might not have been the smartest choice but the offer of a quick payday was hard to turn away from. If it was done the right way, taking all the factors into play then it should go off without a hitch. Going in guns blazing to knock over a casino wasn’t smart in any way shape or form but if I waited for the trucks to be loaded with the days take then it was far safer. There was no reason to take any unnecessary risks at this point. The owners of the casinos were usually cutthroats. If even a meager amount was missing than they would pick up on it and hunt down whoever was responsible. This needed to be done with a subtle touch, one that would point fingers in a different direction. It wasn’t terribly hard finding an identical truck that made the pickups. They were always from the same company and they had enough on their lot that if one went missing it would take some time for someone to notice. I waited for the night before, I didn’t need to be displaying it all around town that I was driving one of their trucks, and hopped the fence easily enough. The security was much more lax than I thought it would be but I wasn’t going to complain about that now. I got luckier as I went on and slid into one of the trucks in the back row, the keys tuck up in the visor, dropping into my lap as I opened it. The next step was all about timing. If I showed up to early than it would set off red flags but if I showed up to late than I’d miss the score completely. I found the truck that was supposed to be picking up the days take and discreetly slashes the tires without being seen. That should throw them off track enough that whenever they did manage to make it to the casino I would be long gone and on my way to comfortable living. Fortunately enough for me, they always used different drivers so a new face like mine wasn’t out of the norm. I stayed in the drivers seat as I felt the weight shift in the back. Before too long I heard the loud rapping of knuckles on the back, indicating that the haul had been loaded. I pulled away as casually as I could, fighting off the urge to jam the gas and peel out away from the loading dock. I needed to keep things as normal as possible before I was well away from the place.
*I am in no way, shape or form entering my own contest, just wanted to get some writing in. I am clearly not eligible to win any of the prizes.* |
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| Reply by: Matt_Murdock at May 02, '20 17:42 | |
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It might not have been the smartest choice but the offer of a quick payday was hard to turn away from. If it was done the right way, taking all the factors into play then it should go off without a hitch. Going in guns blazing to knock over a casino wasn’t smart in any way shape or form but if I waited for the trucks to be loaded with the days take then it was far safer. Green, a tall man and well-muscled, rushed to the passenger door. I reached across Allen and threw open his door as he sputtered awake. Before he knew what was happening he was halfway out the door with Green's hands around his throat. "Don't be a wimp," Black growled. I clammed up.
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| Reply by: MickeyTheRat at May 04, '20 12:59 | |
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The casino heist writing contest is now closed. Thank you to all that entered. I’ll be announcing the winners and dishing out the cash shortly. It’s been a pleasure ladies and gentlemen. |
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| Reply by: Matt_Murdock at May 04, '20 14:37 | |
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