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Redemption Started by: Aldo on May 11, '11 21:10

Hopefully some of the bro's are gonna meet us here pretty soon. 

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Few mins later someone was knocking on door, it was Bonasera. Friend of Alonzo who wanted to take place in bank business Alonzo was planning.

Hello my friend. How are you doing guys. I have my piece with me and i am ready when you are ready.

Bonasera sits in room, lights up cigar and watches confused faces of other mates.

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Maestro had been struggling with his OCD problem since he was a teen, there was a pile of cleansed' guns in one corner and Aldo had no longer had a uni-brow...

Hey thanks for the sambo man, ooh cheese!... yea it should go to plan with all this, wonder what the payouts gonn'a be like.. Aldo stops him,... yes it should be a memerable day,... hey...what the...my eyebrows... Maestro quickly jumps in...

EH...YES.. WELL ANYWAY someone wake Tommy....

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..aww Bonasera, good to see you, should be a breeze now!.... need your guns cleaned???...anyone?? guns?? please for god sake give me a gun to clean!!!.... Bonasera quickly hands him hims colt revolver!! Thanks...well is this it then?

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Alonzo opens the door to find his good friend Bonasera. He welcomes him in, hands him a cup of tea and introduces him to the other men. 

Guys, this is Bonasera. Solid Guy. Known him ever, since I was a kid and when we left the marines, got me a few contacts from within. Were definitely going to need the help of Bonsera. Cheers for coming mate. That guy there with his feet up, is Aldo. The guy with the brown hat, is Tommy. And you know remember this doughnut, Maestro, haha. 

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Hey can a doughnut do this! ...(Maestro then does a hand stand, 2 back flips and then flys around the round with a rainbow behind him)...Alonzoe walks over to MAESTRO, HEY MAN ARE YOU OK.. looking at Maestro twitching on the floor... Anyway Aldo says pleased to meet you man!... Maestro stands up.. What just happened to me??? Bonasera looks at Maestro with a smurk...HA HA says Bonasera you havn't changed one bit!....yea.. anyway what now?

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Alonzo helps Maestro get back up. And picks up the sandwich he now squashed and lobs it in to the bin.

SCORE! 

Alonzo, shouts. Hoping that would wake them up, but their pretty heavy sleepers.

Now we wait, for Tommy and Aldo to wake up. Hopefully, they'll be up soon and we can get cracking. 

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hey i was eating that!! Maestro rumishes through the bin.. ah good as new!..

Why don't we just wake them up? its not a fucking playschool (Kindergarten) were running it's a heist now c'mon it will be bright soon!

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Tommy wakes up at Maestro shouting. 

Jesus, what's the fuckin' racket for? 

He stretches a little in his seat and stands up

So, when do we head out?

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Well me and Aldo loaded up the cars, i'll bring Bonasera and Alonzo You and Aldo go in Aldos car!

Ok is everyone packing! ok get your shit and be ready within the next 20 minutes! I'm goin out to the car to check the stuff! does everyone know what your doing?...

Tommy your the safe cracker once were in you know what to do,

Alonzo and Aldo will go in first, hold everyone up and keep an eye on th eoutside also! Tommy and Bonasera will go to the basement for th evault i'll wait by the cars and sound the horn if theres any cops!

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O.k.  that sounds good. As soon as you drop us off at the front. Were going to need you to drive to the back of the vault. Right behind it exactly. But stay backa coupleof metres. Were gonna blow the back of the wall after we take the money. The police won't be expecting that. We'll then drive off a couple of millions richer. 

Alonzo, walks over to the gun racks and picks up two .38 snub noses and puts them into their holsters. A shotgun, which he hung on his back. And a tommy gun, in his hands.

Yo, where's the grenades. You know I love my grenades.

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Maestro gets some frag grenades and some quility 1897 C4 for the walls..

hERES YOUR GRENADES! ok Aldo's gonna drive up beside my car we'll carry the money in mine! now all we need to do is get organised..

Maestro, Alonzo and Bonasera get into Maestros Ford, Tommy and Aldo get into Aldos Mercedes...

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Aldo stirs, and tips up his hat.

You boys and your fancy plans. What don't ya'll get? It's a concrete box with one exit, the front. On ALL other sides are buildings. Well, let's do this.

He stands up, feels for his .38, then runs downstairs to grab a customized Thompson 1928, dubbed by the media as 'the Chicago Typewriter'. He got into his coupe and started the car.

Come on Tommy, you others! Get in the cars! We're burning daylight!

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Maestro starts the car.

Ok you follow us! to Alonzo driving down 12th street,"so you and Bonasera go in get out yea? Bonsera you go down to the basement.. (Maestro swerves).. "Fucking cat!" Alonzo says "let me do the talking you concentrate on getting us there in one piece!"........

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They all gather into the two cars, and follow Aldo to the bank. They both pull up in front of the bank, and get out of their cars.

Maestro, this  is what you're about to learn... Tommy, Al, get the two crates..

They all walk in the bank, Bonasera following, Tommy and Al with the crates, Maestro trying to look sneaky, and Aldo with his Thompson drawn. He raises it into the air.

EVERYONE ON THE FUCKING GROUND NOW! THIS IS A RAID YOU COCK SUCKERS!

He looks around the room and sees a guard trying to pull a gun, Aldo rushes him, butts him in the stomach with his Tommy Gun, and aims it at the crowd of bystanders.

NO ONE MOVE A FUCKING MUSCLE!

He looks at Al and Tommy.

Drop the crates, cover the crowd, I'll get the lobby safe, then me and Tommy can get the vault while you guys cover it up here, then we cover the lobby and you guys go get a haul from the vault.

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"Maestro, just sitting in the Ford,fixing his mirriors looking around and looking at his watch, nothing moves everything is silent"

While on the inside...

Aldo; Get the fuck away from that door bitch!! ok Tommy to the basement, Alonzo, Bonasera stay here!

While down in the basement Aldo struggles with his anger

wHERE THE FUCK IS THE vAULT??? goes up stairs grabes a female clerk......

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Alonzo finds a civilian trying to act like the local hero and rushed towards Tommy with a bic pen. Alonzo aimed his tommy and shot him in the thigh. Which made him fall on the ground and writhe in pain.

YOU HEARD WHAT HE SAID, NO BODY, I MEAN NOBODY MOVE A FUCKING MUSCLE. YOU THERE, STOP HIDING BEHIND YOUR KID AND BE A MAN.

Alonzo, begins to slowly aim his weapon at everyone around the room, and wonders how long until the police get here. 

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Aldo picks his head up to see Maestro not there, he goes out to see Maestro asleep in his car, or day dreaming.

Wake up, you stupid fuck!

He walks back in to see Al fire off one bullet into a man, which resulted in the Alarms going off.

FUCK! We have to hurry! Al, can you pick a lock?

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Rudely awoken by Aldo, Maestro really does concentrate this time!

oK stay calm, do,da doo da dom.. stop and fucking cocnetrate!!!

hEARS SHOTS IN THE BANK!

Fuck... Then Maestro starts the engine...

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Alonzo takes off his rucksack. And runs off to join Aldo. 

I'll try, this is going to be a lot harder than the last bank I robbed. This has got the new CX2000 hinge-lock along with double barrel door with steel reinforcement. It's going to take me atleast six, seven mins at the max. Just cover me, that's all. 

Alonzo brings out his blow torch, along with a whole array of tools specially for breaking and entering. And gets on with the job almost immediately.

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