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| What do you want to hear? | Started by: Gavin-9Lives-Gambino on May 24, '11 20:56 |
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I've been walking around these streets for a few days. A few longer then |
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More or less all of the above. But what I would like to see most from the streets is for people to act upon them selves and say what is on their mind, and not so much say what others would expect them to say. I guess in general I would like to see things on the street get shaken up a bit. Ask questions that haven't been asked and say things that never been said. I grow tired of the same old debates and stories being carried over from one group of people to the next. |
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| Reply by: Tyrant at May 24, '11 21:43 | |
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I know what I dont' want to see, but alas its what is easiest to jolt down or get up and talk about.
I'm talking about the endless debates about Loyalty to your boss, your crewleader, going down with the ship etc.
I'm intrested to hear about your exploilts. Take what this particular Thing of Ours offers you and translate it to a living experience.
I can talk more about that with examples, but we would have to hang out together at the OCC bar.
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| Reply by: LuckyAlphonse at May 25, '11 15:50 | |
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I would most like to see action, packed with more action, emphasized with suspense, with a streak of imagination.
Length only bothers me when the things being described are not related to the storyline, and the story starts to slow down. I like a long story when I'm enveloped in it. Just not when I can't put myself in the position of the character and the situation.
I love a well crafted personal style of story telling. Anyone can describe what's around them, but not everyone can input their personality into decribing what's around them.
Those are my tips. |
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| Reply by: Alesia at May 25, '11 16:40 | |
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