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| The man in the brown trench coat | Started by: Sunrise on Jul 09, '22 04:54 |
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*bang* a man’s body falls to the ground as the rain carry’s his blood into a near by drain. Unknown: sorry jack things shouldn’t have turned out this way. The next morning Two men walk up and notice the police warding people off Unknown: hey what’s going on Cop1: none of your business move along. Cop2: sir look at that brown trench coat I think that’s Sherlock. Cop1: I don’t care if he’s the president Sherlock holds no authority here in the states. Cop2: but captain richards he could help with the case Richard: fine if you want to help then be at it but be quick got to move the body before rats get to it. Sherlock: come Watson let us examine the body. Watson: yyyyes sir Sherlock Sherlock examines the body and noticed traces of gun powder on the head as well as a note stuffed inside the bullet hole Sherlock: this man was shot up close and personal they knew each other and is wearing a golden bandana the symbol of the rushka gang Sherlock unfold the note stained in blood The diplomat sends his regards Sherlock: mr. Richards who is the diplomat Richards: he’s a man we can’t touch they say he runs bronx but has never done a crime himself so we can’t do much. Sherlock: he’s that high yet he dosent do the dirty work who would follow such a man? Richards: he may seem cowardly but trust me he’ll make your own friend betray you and shoot you in the back his words are his weapon. Two nights latter one a back ally Unknown: so we got a deal my guy takes the fall and you off him? Unknown2: yes The next night Sherlock: Watson I think we finally got enough evidence to prove that the diplomat plotted the murder finally a big shot will be behind bars. *bang* Sherlock looks at his chest a massive hole and blood come in he out of it. Sherlock falls to the ground Sherlock: I never figured he would get you no one else managed to buy the reason why maybe you didn’t want to be my shadow no morzz Before he could finish talking Sherlock was dead Two days later Watson: and this is why the killer was none other then myou nogogi Myou nogogi: I would have gotten away with it to if you weren’t so damn clever Watson. Watson quickly became one of the “best” detectives around and for many years prospered. |
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Sunrise, I'd like to option the movie rights to this thriller. I hear they're doing a lot of exciting detective stories in Hollywood these days, you could be sitting on a goldmine. Let's get our lawyers together. What do you say? I'm seeing Dick Van Dyke in the starring role. He does a good English accent, doesn't he? And a memorable cameo for Coach as 'Cop 1'. I could nail the part, Sunrise, I can feel it in my bones. |
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| Reply by: HeadCoach at Jul 09, '22 17:05 | |
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Let’s do it headcoach we can turn it into a trilogy where we start off in the middle act2 the man in the brown trench coat. Part3 the rise of Watson Then we introduce part one the diplomat where at the end one of the guys kills the guy in the act 2 |
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| Reply by: Sunrise at Jul 09, '22 18:13 | |
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Hmmm, an interesting format. So you want to do part 2 first, part 3 second, and then part 1 as a prequel? Do you have the other two parts written and ready for inspection? I'll buy the whole package. I want it all. I want to be a mogul, Sunrise. Do you have anyone in mind for Cop 2? I'll need someone beautiful, charming, yet understated to bounce off in my celebrated cameo. Someone capable of rousing incredible jealousy in Mrs HeadCoach, who returned from a brief, unexplained absence with a plump, melon-sized doll dressed in tiny, knitted athleisure wear, who she keeps poking with a needle while muttering. She's in a weird mood, Sunrise. I think those wiccan yoga classes are a bad influence on her. |
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| Reply by: HeadCoach at Jul 10, '22 10:36 | |
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"Hello gentlemen, I was one of the first people to view this script and shared a drink with the author on it publish. Therefore, I feel I emotionally invested in this journey. I offer my services to your enterprising minds. I believe I am perfectly suit to a roll in your organisation. My unique skills include reading and writing. I know this is something upon within Detroit, whoever HeadCoach gave me a special dispensation as long as I wrote his wife some romantic letters in hope to rekindle the fire within their marriage. If you gentlemen will have me on board I believe I can find you the best damn Cop 2 that the world has ever seen. So what do you say Sunrise and HeadCoach? Do we have a deal?" He begins to do some lunges as he waits. Because you never ever skip leg day or so Imperium told him and everyone knew Imperium had a booty that just didnt quit. |
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| Reply by: BBB at Jul 10, '22 11:21 | |
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| I say let’s do this I have basic scripts written for part 3 and the prequel but we can expand upon later I will be ready to get started when you are I can send the basic scripts and we can have a professional writer arrange them | |
| Reply by: Sunrise at Jul 10, '22 16:07 | |
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The fashionably attired gentleman returned to the fray as soon as he heard the good news. I was looking very stylish in his best suit, navy tie and he has gotten himself some of those fancy sunglasses all the cool mobsters had. I decided he would wear the fedora too much in public just yet. He shook both men firmly by the hand. "Great stuff, Im delighted you accepted the offer Sunrise. HeadCoach I cant wait to work with a man of your genius. I hope we arent going to have any of those Chicago degenerates in it. They would ruin everything". He wiped his brow with his BBB handkerchief. Looking at it he smiled. "If you guys need anything let me know. Actors, scripts, casting agents, posters. A better script". He laughed jovially and gave Sunrise a pat on the arm. "I kid, I kid. Whatever you need just get in touch. Gentlemen the Better Blockbuster Bureau is now at your disposal". He took off his sunglasses and winked because he thought it was cool. |
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| Reply by: BBB at Jul 10, '22 19:36 | |
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Gentlemen, Headcoach and BBB, I know you both to be honourable and upstanding members of the community. Complete degenerates and obsessed with kicking the shit out of your mates but coaches of the highest order and honour. I suggest you discard this proposal of working with Funsize immediately. He is not one of us. He does not operate in the manner that we do. I bet he doesn't even mug. Do you Bumprize? He will have your pants down, con you out of any investment you make and give it to a friend from New York. You certainly can't rely on him for any help and guidance. I found this out first hand unfortunately. |
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| Reply by: Henson at Jul 12, '22 08:56 | |
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| You better shut your fucking mouth henson just because you don’t know how to read dosent make it anyone else’s problem | |
| Reply by: Sunrise at Jul 12, '22 14:55 | |
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Reading is for pussies and losers. We play sports and do cool stuff like work out and I'm proud of Henson for standing up for himself. On a side note, HeadCoach I think I'd like to try out to be the Man in the Brown Trenchcoat for the movie. I know what you're thinking. I'm just too handsome and good looking to be believable, but I think I can pull it off if I really try. |
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| Reply by: Conqueeftador at Jul 12, '22 15:50 | |
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sunrise, what upstanding member of our community conducts himself in that manner, with such profanity and aggression? You could learn a lesson or two from Grin-22 |
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| Reply by: Henson at Jul 12, '22 16:54 | |
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| henson what member of our higher order hands and up conducts him self by throwing a fit because he can’t read | |
| Reply by: Sunrise at Jul 12, '22 17:08 | |
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If you like FunSize, I’ll put in a good word with the HeadCoach to give you a few tips on diplomacy and leadership. You’ll be able to give motivating team talks like he does too then! |
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| Reply by: Henson at Jul 12, '22 17:28 | |
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Idk if that would work seeing as how headcoach can’t keep you in line henson why anyone would want you as their lhm I will never understand 1. You can’t read 2. You act like a baby when your told you can’t cheat 3. You throw a fit when you lose cause you didn’t read the rules or even ask questions 4. Idk if headcoach has talked to you and told you how inappropriate your actions are but if he had the amount of times You continued you would have been shot in my crew. Cause your way past the 10s and haven’t stoped once |
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| Reply by: Sunrise at Jul 12, '22 17:37 | |
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Despite the negative energy you are feeling from what I am saying, I seem to have succeeded in bringing out a positive revelation in you. For the first time since you donned the suit you currently wear, you’ve actually just displayed a pair of balls and acted like a CL. I consider myself well told. All HeadCoach will do is give me laps. Lap after lap after lap. Then maybe a lap dance and a firm pat of encouragement on my surprisingly firm rear. Skidmark is currently busy trying to Rob galleries too. He’s failing though, I might add. |
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| Reply by: Henson at Jul 12, '22 17:42 | |
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Sunrise, you have been made to look like a total clown by the dregs of Detroit. You basically have zero honour left intact, and I urge you to blow your brains out right here on the Streets. Henson was known as 'DETROIT's dumbest, but he still comes out of this looking hip and square. Sunrise, I can help you. Do you want help? " |
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| Reply by: BaronGreenback at Jul 13, '22 08:53 | |
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