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| The Rifle | Started by: Premeir on Apr 11, '08 22:37 |
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In my personal opinion one of the most beautiful and fulfilling things in this world, is watching someone, through a scope. Watching them live their life, go about their daily routine. They have no idea someone is watching, 250 yards away, on the roof top or hill, who knows the scope can be anywhere. You probably don't know this, but I've been watching you for a while. I have seen what you did to those mobsters, and those kids, tsk tsk you're a sick person. You have been a bad boy. At first I liked to watch the carnage but then I realized that you were getting out of control. I used to watch you through the scope, with the safety on and no magazine in. I have begun to watch with a live round in the chamber and the safety off, just in case the moment presents it self. It has been 20 days since I started watching you with a loaded chamber, you were quite careful. I liked the constant friends you would have around to keep you safe. I had a few moments where I could have taken my shot, but I would have been quickly gunned down, my location had no escape route and the shot or flash would have rung out for at least a mile. *smiles to myself as I attach a sound suppressor to the end of the muzzle* I found a way to take care of that problem as you can see. My next major problem was deciding where to put a 164 grain polymer tipped projectile. In the heart, head, vital organs? The head was the obvious choice to ensure the kill. The heart would also guarantee my victory and my trophy, but I believe it would be to as the American says, clich 'shot through the heart'. I then decided what would be best for you, so I did my research. A lung shot, I would aim for your right lung, take a deep breath and let it out slowly, pause for a moment as I gently squeeze the trigger, as I squeeze the last bit of slack I say to myself, Carpe Diem. The bullet would easily pierce and collapse the lung. This is the fun part and its also where the polymer tip comes into play, it is going to expand and shatter on your rib cage causing shrapnel to cause multiple wound channels and cause internal bleeding, it will also send a shock wave hopefully effecting your other lung. You will lie on the ground, bleeding profusely from the inside out. You will try to take deep panicky breaths but all you will hear is a sucking sound from the hole inside your chest from the air escaping your lung. Your lungs will start to fill up with blood, you will begin to spit and cough up blood violently. You put your hand over the hole and try to stop the bleeding; it's no use you are losing too much oxygen to the brain you begin to pass out. Not only will you pass out but your central nervous system will start to overload and shut down.. Your friends start to panic, they can't get in touch with 911 they feel your pulse weaken; they see your eyes roll back in your head. I pull the bolt handle back slowly and catch the ejected round and sat it next to the rifle. I slide another round into the chamber, I could end any one of your friends right now, BUT I will spare them for now. I break the rifle down and put it into a book bag and put my hat back on. I make my way down to the street level and wipe the sweat off my face and give myself a little smile. Witnesses would later tell police they saw a man possiblbly19-21 coming down the side of the stairs, they didn't notice him much; he was dressed in white shirt with some design on it and some baggy jeans and a hat. They said he looked like an everyday person, little did they know he was a calculating professional. One of the detectives owed the family a favor and told them, the shell casing was found on top of a piece of paper with a kind of sick poem attached it read: You destroy the bridge you've built underfoot, to quicken your fate below. Falling into unknown depths; will the waters be deep or shallow? If the badge you seek red or yellow? To escape your fears or to stand your ground. Will you ever step into the ring for another round? No matter where you hide you'll still be found. Don't you know that even cowards get crowned? The crown you'll wear won't be gleaming gold. The kingdom you will rule is six feet below. Your reign will be forever from your wooden throne. Too bad you won't be aware of your eternal home. There is no reward for bringing your life to an end. No quitters of life were ever meant to win. Listen to the advice of the Apostle Paul... "The easy way out" isn't so easy after all. They also told you the shell casing was inscribed, your unintelligent family said you mean written on? The detective said no, it was inscribed as if specially made for this purpose. It read You shouldn't have fucked with the family, love The Boss. There was another name on the shell possibly the hitter but it was scratched off and 666 was inscribed over it. We have seen it in a few other cases, this guy is a ghost we have no idea who he is and each time he is described the same way, around the age of 20, it's scary. Your goons say we have killers who are 15 what is so special about being 20 and a hitman? The detective looked at the men and said the first reported case of a shell like this was in 1821... |
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| You know, I wouldn't be surprised if that's what you do all day. I love the poem and I can't wait to read even more! | |
| Reply by: Vanimanov at Apr 11, '08 22:57 | |
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| Damn man, I thought I was old. It's the life in your years, not the years in your life. Or whatever. Rock on. | |
| Reply by: Mr_47 at Apr 12, '08 01:34 | |
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| What is this Premeir can't read or write... | |
| Reply by: PrinceofCheese at Apr 12, '08 06:42 | |
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He can read and write,he just spends too much time being "The Monster" Well done again Premeir,nice peek into therecesses of your grey matter. |
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| Reply by: Apathy at Apr 12, '08 12:03 | |
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| Prem is my hero! | |
| Reply by: Vanimanov at Apr 13, '08 06:05 | |
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| i had to look for more from you...you truly are an artist with words | |
| Reply by: the_white_mammy at Apr 23, '08 12:28 | |
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