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| The Line | Started by: Premeir on Apr 25, '08 22:24 |
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Every now and then, you meet the type of person who is scared of nothing, they are especially not scared of someone like me, a killer. They will surround themselves with body guards; dare you to come for them, send people looking for you. I am quite sure you are smitten with yourself currently. *removes a patch from my side soaked in blood and replaces it with a fresh bandage* To be honest im quite smitten with myself, it has been quite sometime since I have hurt or seen my own blood, it feels good reminds me that im still alive. I guess it was me getting too comfortable maybe I was slipping up, and this is my wake up call, so in a way I thank you. I should have known that job was a fake, it was too easy and worth to much money. 50,000 for a low end enforcer and specific instructions on where and how the job was to be done? Would have been in and out, but as I should have known it was a trap; but for whom? When I arrived at my destination to do the job, I made entry into the house; I was quite surprised when the lights were turned on in the room I was in. It's all quite a blur now, I remember the flash of the guns going off, but the sound there was none, all I could hear was my own breathing... Then nothing. I must have woken up 4 hours later I was in my car in a back alley. No idea how I had gotten there or even when, I had lost too much blood, I was weak; a thing that doesn't happen often. A few days later when I regained a margin of my strength I read in the paper "GANG LAND SLAYING" I continued to read 5 people found dead in a bloody shoot out, shooter wanted for questioning. I'm sure you know it was me, you sent 5 guys, and they couldn't get me still. Amateurs to say the least. One of your thugs got lucky with a shot to my side, I had to remove the bullet and give myself stitches, a pain I will give you ten fold. That moment I had decided I will use you to send the ultimate message; I am going to take out your entire family, to teach the others they should leave me a lone, if they don't want me killing them or their families they should have hired me first. You took it as a joke at first, your low level thugs and goombs' dying every now and then, thinking it was either over drugs or me trying to get back at you by "doing the best I could" and take out your lowest people, your heavies are to well protected for me to get anyway, right? I decided to send the first real message, your capo, maybe then you will start to believe. Maybe then you will remember who I am. By the time im done they will think of me as Freddy Kruger, just forget about him, maybe he will go around, pretend he isn't real, if we remember him he comes back for us. I need to make the first kill a good one, so you get a little nervous. Your capo sure does like to stay in shape. I noticed he goes running on Tuesdays and Thursday and then the gym the rest of the time. I debated where I should take him for my collection. At the gym? Maybe the house while I let his wife watch. The opportunity presented itself while I was watching him. He decided to go for a run through the woods, the perfect place for me to take my victim with no one seeing. As he was running he ran into a small thin wire, tripping him up, before he knew it he was injected with a mild tranquilizer, from what the police could tell. He was tied up to the tree. They reported that every finger nail was pulled out; he also had an X slit with a razor blade on each eye ball and then shot twice in the chest. They said the most baffling thing was the skin on his face was cut off and had not been found. They later solved that mystery when they took a look at a surveillance camera in a bar shooting later that night. Witnesses say a man walked in and gunned down two people and calmly walked out, the suspect had blood and cuts all over his face. The organized crime unit was called in. They two men gunned down were two of your wise guy's. When the tape was reviewed the police found what they were looking for. That is right I cut your consig's face off and wore it to a shooting. I thought it looked quite well on me. Now im coming for you. I heard you are quite upset that your friends and family were so easily reached, and I heard you were really upset about the face thing. Time for you to be the victim. I decided while I was doing my other work, I wasn't going to take your life from you. I'm going to leave that up to you. With all the murders of your family, the police and feds were looking at you, looking more into the heat you were bring down on the town. Other families told you to settle this beef with me, pay me off to leave you alone. You are too proud for that, and I wouldn't allow it anyway, you will pay with other things. I followed you out of town when I heard you were going to your family cabin. You took your wife and son with you to the cabin. That wasn't smart, you had to assume id come for you here. I figured you wanted to die in nature. I guess your not as smart as I assumed. You wife has quite the cocaine problem. How do I know? I killed her dealer and sold her the ounce she bought before you left. I assume she hasn't taking any yet, being around your son and all. The majority of the ounce she bought has finely shredded glass into it. Im sure it will be quite the surprise when her throat and insides begin to bleed from the inside out. While you were on one of your nature walks I was sitting and waiting for you, in a ghille suit, all you remember is the ground moving then a plastic bag over your head, then all faded to black. No you're not dead yet, you are quite alive, like I said im not going to kill you. While you were sleeping I took the liberties to set up your punishment. It's something I have never done before, but yet it had to be done, so you understand the severity of my name. While you were passed out I took a PVC pipe and inserted it inside of your ass. I then took a line of razor wire and fed it into the pipe. I then removed the pipe and tied the line off to a tree. Quite sadistic isn't it, should have never thought you were untouchable, you and your inside are about to be touched. I doused the tree that the line was tied off to with gasoline. I'm sure you know where this is going. When you awoke screamed in pain, I smiled when you looked at me, you tried to stand but fell due to the horrible pain. You screamed and yelled at me. I smiled as I set a small flame on the tree. Make your descion if you live or die, you can ether burn or walk away. Hahaha, I am going to go visit your son. Maybe I will see you there. Tell you what, let's race. You yelled your meaningless empty death threats as I made my way back to your cabin. I could hear screams of pain and agony. I wanted to turn around and see what option you chose to take, but time shall tell. I deicded to be kind and let your son live, I took him 15 miles into the woods and told him if he is still upset when he grows up, to come look for me, so I can add him to the collection. I left him to find his way back. I wonder to this day what option you picked, and how your son did. Maybe ill see both of you soon :) |
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Wow...I am never going to double cross you unless all of my family and friends die first...that way I'm the only one who dies by your hand! Great read! |
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| Reply by: Vanimanov at Apr 25, '08 23:21 | |
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Wonderful wonderful wonderful.. Once again Premeir you satisfy us all. You keep coming with these wonderful RPs. PLease don't stop what you are doing. I would of RPed in this but I was totally speechless. I had nothing to say. This is great. :) TheDealer, |
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| Reply by: TheDealer at Apr 25, '08 23:21 | |
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| Prem you blow my mind (Among other things :P) with theses RP's very well written! | |
| Reply by: Maurizio at Apr 25, '08 23:52 | |
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| that was fire man great job | |
| Reply by: Rize at Apr 26, '08 12:56 | |
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| Please keep these stories coming Premeir.Very good read and very entertaining AND thought provoking.Apathy glances over at the annoying Gommba across the street | |
| Reply by: Apathy at Apr 26, '08 15:20 | |
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Chris walks down the street, minding his business when a street vendor approaches him. It was a young boy selling news papers, his close ragged and shoes torn. Chris smiles at the young man, pulls his billfold from his pocket and hand the kid a couple bills Chris messes up the kids hair as the kid is excited by the payment. He then continues to walk down the street. Not paying attention to where he was going, distracted by the headline on the front page Premeir Does it again! In the small print it reads: Premeir comes to the streets with stories of his life, simply amazing. More on page A2 Chris arrives at the coffeeshop, takes a seat outside with some fellow family. He quickly shares the paper with everyone he can see Very good read Premeir thanks. |
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| Reply by: ChrisPaul at Apr 26, '08 15:41 | |
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