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| The Cop | Started by: Premeir on Apr 28, '08 16:30 |
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After meeting with Rize, I had begun watching our friend the police officer. I had come to the conclusion it would be best for the police officer to come to me. I contacted Rize and let him know he would need to assist me on this job. Rize agreed to the plan. He told me the contacted the officer, and gave him a tip about a rival gang unloading stolen merchandise into an abandon warehouse. I was sitting in the dark, awaiting your arrival. I have done quite a bit of work in this warehouse. Many people better then you have fallen here. You made your way inside through the front door as I presumed you would. You held your flash light at eye level. I watched you in the dark as you walked. I heard a loud clang of closing steel, and sound of flesh tearing and bone breaking. Then your deafening scream. I knew you had stepped into my well laid trap. I picked up my gun and turned the lights on. You were rolling on the ground grabbing at your now mutilated leg. You begun to scream at me as I removed your gun from the holster and tossed it aside. Hello officer. If you haven't noticed by the searing pain or broken bones, that you have stepped into a bear trap. You continued to scream and spit at me, "IM A FUCKING COP, DO YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE FUCKING WITH". Of course I know you're a cop, quite a dirty cop if information serves me correctly. None in the less your badge of honor means nothing to me. You were going to go against the very people that kept your kids in those private schools and helped you make all those busts. You will be for your disloyalty today officer. I struck you over the head knocking you unconscious and removed your mangled leg from the bear trap and placed you into a chair strapping your arms and legs to it. When you awoke, I was just setting my tools out for the day. Ahh hello sleepy head, im glad you decided to join us, are you ready for some fun? Rize instructed me that this cop needed to suffer for his endeavors. When your eyes came into focus and you realized where you were, you could test rusted melted and could not open your mouth. I inserted a double sided metal file between your teeth and tapped your jaw to your head nice and tight, so you can not open. I grabbed the end of the file and ripped it from between your teeth, instantly grinding and ripping the top covering of your teeth off, exposing the ever so sensitive nerves. You bellowed and screamed in pain. Ah, how did that feel officer? As I took a sip of ice cold water. Mmmm, that's satisfying. Here have some, as I poured the water into your mouth the coldness and mere presence of the water on your nerves sent you into a screaming fit. As I leaned down and looked into your eyes, normally id save you the pain but I quite enjoy it, and strict rules I was to make you suffer. Even though the immense amount of pain you passed out, I allowed you to sleep for some time so I could prepare for your next round of fun. When you awoke all you could think about was the immense of pain every time you took a breath in and out and how badly your mangled leg felt. You began to sob and beg for your life. As I whipped the hair and sweat off of your face I said, now now officer we have quite a bit more to do before we are done, save the begging for the end. You only cried harder. Have some more water officer, you shook and yelled in pain as I poured water into your mouth again. I removed a razor from the table and held your eye open as I put a small X across your eye. You tried not to yell as the immense pain sent through our nerves in your teeth made the pain worse. I then took a cup and poured gasoline into the cut inside your eye. You begin to beg for god to save your life. I said I will make you a deal officer, I a going to give god 30 minutes to save you. If so I will let you go. I then went to my back room. I sat down in the dark and listened to your screams of agony and pain, quite relaxing to be honest. I returned right on the dot, 30 minutes later, and found you shaking your head and still begging for god. I see still no luck from above officer. Looks like it was meant to be. I removed my gun from the holster and said wonder if you will make it to heaven. The bullet entered the front of your skull and excited with most of your brain matter through the back of your head. I called Rize and let him know the job was finished. |
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| Damn it, Prem, that made my teeth hurt. But, still, a good read. Thank you for helping to keep the streets alive. | |
| Reply by: Mr_47 at Apr 28, '08 16:33 | |
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| I feel you were way to soft on him. Stupid cops. | |
| Reply by: Obs3rvant1 at Apr 28, '08 17:12 | |
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After getting off the phone with Premeir, I hang up the phone and leans back comfortably in my chair Ahhhh this is going to be the start of a beautiful partnership. |
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| Reply by: Rize at Apr 28, '08 17:36 | |
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After getting off the phone with Premeir, I hang up the phone and leans back comfortably in my chair Ahhhh this is going to be the start of a beautiful partnership. |
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| Reply by: Rize at Apr 28, '08 17:36 | |
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| wait...did I hear an echo? hmm thats strange, o well. | |
| Reply by: Rize at Apr 28, '08 17:38 | |
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| What a sordid tale of woe, I loved it. | |
| Reply by: Draize at Apr 28, '08 19:53 | |
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| Once again we realize why you are called THE MONSTER | |
| Reply by: Apathy at Apr 28, '08 20:23 | |
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I can always tell when some one really enjoys writing a story, the spelling could use some help near the middle, but other wise a fun read. Another spine chilling addition to your collection. |
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| Reply by: Ivory_Ice at Apr 29, '08 05:58 | |
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Damn Premier, my whole face hurts now. Teeth, eyes watering, I don't know if I can read any more of these! But being the masochistic gangster that I am, of course I'll read more! |
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| Reply by: Vanimanov at Apr 29, '08 19:30 | |
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