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| Family values V2 | Started by: Major_Jerkovski on May 15, '08 19:49 |
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Narrated, Directed, Written and Produced by RobinBanks. Illustrated by Major_Jerkovski (What do you mean there are no illustrations? On with the story. That has zero pictures btw. We start off a few years after our last story ended.... Curtains open Growing up in Brooklyn with no father to keep an eye over you was hard but my Uncles done their best. Being in High school was the hardest, i was on my own. I was the kid with no family to those on the outside but inside i had a big family. "Hey punk where's my lunch money?!" Frankie The Bull as he was known in those days, he was the school bully standing a good 4 inches than anyone else the biggest survives right? "I haven't got any, i spent it at recess" I attempt to hold my ground, something my father tried to teach me when we played catch "Hog the plate son, that's your plate don't let anyone tell you otherwise" He would shout before whizzing a fast ball past me "Bullshit! You lying to me? If i catch you lying to me do you know what will happen?" Before i can answer my world starts to go dark and i collapse to the floor, i have been hit with what can only be described as a boulder of a fist. Frankie spits out "Tomorrow pay up or you'll be sorry!" I don't even raise my head. This carried on for 2 weeks day in day out.....not a word and Frankie The Bull never took a penny until... "Hey shithead i am getting tired of this just give me MY cash" He throws me up hard up against the lockers followed a swift jab to my face, a crowd forms around me and Frankie cheering him on i am engulffed in this new formed cage. I stand with a blood dripping from the new fat lip that is forming, things have gone too far now... "I never answer to anyone outside my family" With that i land 2 hooks to his face BAM! BAM! And The Bull hits the floor like a sack of spuds "You want something of mine you better make sure you take it" The crowd erupts "MAJOR MAJOR MAJOR" they sing and i feel like the champion of the world, it is short lived as i am dragged off to the principal's office My Uncle sat there listening to the Principal go on about how terrible of a job he was doing raising me, how my father would be disappointed my uncle is not even listening and interrupts the old frail man "Hey the kid did good, he never gave in" With that my Uncle stands up and grabs my hand and walks me down the halls of which i was victorious just moments before "Steak for dinner champ??" I never heard too much more from Frankie nor did i have any trouble from anyone else. I suppose my father would be proud of me i never let someone take from the family. |
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| Another brilliant lesson to be learned. I am starting to see how you grew from just a boy into a well-rounded (and smart) individual. Perhaps a part three in the future? I like watching the picture of your life form! | |
| Reply by: TestRank3 at May 15, '08 19:52 | |
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| Very well done! A great read | |
| Reply by: TestRank1 at May 15, '08 23:47 | |
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| Very Good Major :P love the pictures!! | |
| Reply by: RobinBanks at May 17, '08 05:20 | |
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| Thanks! :) <---Drew that myself! | |
| Reply by: Major_Jerkovski at May 19, '08 21:28 | |
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