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| The Return of Nobody in Particular | Started by: Jeffrey_Lebowski on Nov 09, '25 22:40 |
The rain was doing its best to clean Chicago, but the city wasn’t having it. A man came in out of it; long coat, scuffed shoes, hat tugged low. He looked like he’d walked too far for too little, but somehow didn’t mind. The door closed behind him with a creak that sounded like it missed the old days. Inside The Lucky Strike, the air was warm and tasted faintly of smoke and lemon polish. The radio crooned something slow about missing trains and losing faith. Three drunks argued over pool balls in the corner, but no one paid him any mind. He made his way to the bar and sat like he’d done it a hundred times before. The barmaid looked up.
“You look like you’ve been rained on and robbed twice,” she said, drying a glass.
He smiled, faint but genuine. “Yeah, well, one outta two ain’t bad.”
She poured him something amber without asking, the kind of pour you give a man who looks like he’s been missing for a while.
“First time in?” she enquired. “Mm. Let’s call it a reunion.” He said with a sly smirk. “We don’t get many reunions round here. Just regulars and regrets.”
He took a sip, eyes drifting to the far wall. There, framed behind the bar, hung an old photograph; smoke-stained, edges curling. A man in sunglasses and a cardigan, grinning beside a bowling trophy. He leaned back, chuckling under his breath. “Guy had style.” “They say he got shot right here,” Marlene offered. “Over a debt or a dame, depending on who’s talkin’. You believe in ghosts?” “Sure,” he said, setting down his glass. “Some of ’em even tip.”
She smirked. “You remind me of him, y’know. Same grin. Same way of sittin’ like the chair owes you rent.”
“Yeah? Must’ve been a handsome devil.” He joked.
Marlene poured herself a small one and raised it. “To handsome devils, then.” “And to second chances,” he said softly, clinking his glass against hers.
They drank. The jukebox changed songs. The rain outside didn’t quit, and neither did the city.
After a moment, she asked, “So what’d you say your name was, mister?”
He smiled, eyes half-shut, voice barely above the hum of the bar. “Jeffrey… Lebowski. But folks just call me The...”
He stopped himself. Grinned. “Never mind. Just Jeff’ll do.”
He slid a few crumpled bills across the bar, just enough to cover the drink and a little memory. “Keep the change, Marlene. Rain’s gonna ease up soon. Always does.”
And with that, he stood, coat heavy with the weather, and stepped back into the wet Chicago night, leaving behind the faint smell of smoke, whiskey, and something everyone swore they’d smelled before. |
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The funeral was about as lively as a rain puddle in November. A few hats tipped, a few shoulders shrugged, a few debts silently cleared. Nobody sang. Nobody cried loud. TheDude hadn’t been that kind of man. He’d have hated a fuss. When the crowd thinned, the last car doors slammed, and the priest’s cough faded into distance, a figure remained by the gate, motionless but familiar in posture. The coat was rumpled, collar turned up against the drizzle, and his shoes… slippers. Not the kind you bury a man in, the kind you live in. He wandered up slow, hands buried in pockets, whistling something off-key and half-forgotten. A jazz tune, lazy as cigarette smoke. The casket sat quiet under a cheap bunch of lilies, the brass plaque gleaming faintly:
Someone had written that second part in pencil. Nobody claimed it. Nobody erased it either. He huffed out a dry chuckle. “Hell, that’s dramatic. I never was much for final frames.” A breeze kicked up, tugging his coat aside. Underneath, a faint flash of colour; a knit cardigan, frayed at the sleeves. Old-timers would swear it looked just like the one he wore the night he vanished. He crouched, joints complaining, and brushed a bit of mud from the corner of the stone. “Figured you might still appreciate the good stuff. Not that filtered garbage they sell now.” He stayed quiet a long moment, rain starting to slick his hair. Then, softly “They tell me you went down swingin’. That’s somethin’, huh? Truth is… nobody really goes down for good. Just gotta wait for the next frame to reset.” He grinned faintly, more to himself than the grave, and fished a lighter from his pocket, same Zippo, same worn engraving:
The flame sparked once, then went out. He didn’t bother trying again. Just placed it beside the flowers, let it sit there shining dull in the gray light. Before leaving, he muttered something almost drowned by the wind: “They say a man dies twice, y’know? Once when he stops breathin’… and again when someone says his name for the last time. You? You ain’t even close to number two. Don’t worry, man. I’ll keep the lane warm.” He tipped his hat low and walked off, slippers squelching in the wet grass. Later, the groundskeeper swore he saw smoke curling from that unlit lighter. And for a split second, thought he heard laughter; soft, easygoing, and far too alive. |
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| Reply by: Jeffrey_Lebowski at Nov 10, '25 13:44 | |
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I had never believed in omens, but tonight, as I walked into The Lucky Strike, I reconsidered. I pushed open the door, letting the warm buzz of jazz and the smell of cheap whiskey overcome me. The Lucky Strike was one of my favorite spots. A dim, narrow room with sticky floors, creaky stools, and a friendly bartender named Marlene. The kind of place where people minded their business, and the world felt quiet for a few minutes. I stepped inside, brushing rain from my jacket, when someone brushed past me on their way out. I didn’t look at him at first. Just a shoulder, a coat, the faint smell of aftershave, and cold air. Then something clicked in my memory, something in the way he walked, the tilt of his head I’d seen a hundred times. My heart stuttered. I turned. And there he was. TheDude. Alive. Alive and walking out of the bar like a man with someplace better to be. My breath caught in my throat. I blinked, hard, because the dead weren’t supposed to move like that. They weren’t supposed to adjust their collar, or tug a cigarette from their pocket, or glance over their shoulder just enough for me to see the scar above his eyebrow, remembering how it got there years ago. For a moment, the world compressed into a narrow tunnel. He didn’t see me, or he pretended not to. My heart pounded so loud I almost didn’t hear Marlene call my name. I stepped out of his path, staying just inside the doorway as he pushed into the street and vanished into the rain like a ghost trying its best to look alive. I just kept staring at the empty doorway, the rain sweeping across the street outside, and only the fading scent of the man I believed was buried days ago was left. Marlene finally said, “Girl, you look like you've seen a ghost.” I asked, "Do you have any idea who that man was?" She said, "He called himself @Jeffrey_Lebowski." |
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| Reply by: MsRain at Nov 11, '25 04:51 | |
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South Side Chicago – Midnight The rain had eased to a drizzle by the time he turned down Halstead, but the streets still shone like black glass. At the end of the block, wedged between a pawn shop and a shuttered tailor, sat The Blue Pin. He stood across the street for a long minute, hands deep in his coat pockets, listening to the muffled jazz leaking through the door. Then he crossed. Inside, the air hit thick and sweet, gin, sweat, and second chances. “Evenin’, friend. Somethin’ simple. Maybe somethin’ that remembers what whiskey used to taste like.” The barman looked him over, the coat, the cardigan under it, the slippers that squished softly on the tile, and poured without a word. He lifted the glass, studied the amber swirl, then the mirror behind the bar. “Funny joint,” he said quietly. “New name, same ghosts.” The barman frowned. “You been here before?” “Long time ago. When the pins were red, not blue. When they still had a jukebox that worked half the time.” The barman grinned. “Old Lucky Strike, huh? Burned down fifteen years ago.” “Yeah,” he murmured, “places like that got a habit of resurrectin’ under new names. Guess people do too.” He slipped a matchbook from his pocket and set it on the bar, Lucky Strike Lounge embossed in fading gold. “That’s a relic, pal.” “Depends who you ask,” he said with a shrug. “Some folks think relics still work if you strike ’em right.” He tapped the side of the glass, listening to the soft chime, then added, almost to himself: “Someone told me I was dead once. Nice thing about rumors, they don’t breathe long without oxygen. City’s got plenty of that.” A laugh, low, lazy, the kind that didn’t need an audience, rolled from him before fading into the music. At the far table, MsRain’s lighter clicked. She watched through the curl of smoke, trying to decide if she was staring at a miracle, a ghost, or just Chicago’s best con. He finished his drink, left exact change plus a nickel for luck, and started toward the back door. “Hey, what’s your name, stranger?” He paused, one hand on the door, rainlight catching the line of his grin. “Lebowski. Jeff Lebowski.” He hesitated, then added with that trademark drawl, soft enough that only the walls might remember it, “But the lanes used to call me somethin’ else.” Then he was gone again, swallowed by the neon and the drizzle, leaving behind a matchbook that smelled faintly of smoke, coffee, and old victories. |
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| Reply by: Jeffrey_Lebowski at Nov 13, '25 00:33 | |
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| Reply by: Jeffrey_Lebowski at Nov 16, '25 23:59 | |
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The night had settled into one of those heavy silences the South Side only knew after midnight. Jeff drifted south, past blocks Rain hadn’t walked in months. But he walked them like he’d never left. He turned onto Ludlow Street. Ludlow held one thing. One place. One wound that hadn’t fully scabbed over. The old Gutter Saints Headquarters. It stood exactly as it had the day TheDude vanished, shutters down, sign half hanging, windows boarded like they were trying to forget what they’d seen. Jeff stopped. MsRain froze in the mouth of the alley. Jeff reached into his coat and pulled out a small object. MsRain stepped forward, unable to hold back any longer. “Jeff.” He didn’t turn. “Why are you here?” A long pause. He finally glanced over his shoulder, smirk soft and tired. “Funny thing, MsRain… He held it up between two fingers — the brass catching just enough of the streetlight to make the engraved initials glint.
MsRain’s breath hitched. Jeff walked up to the shutter, pressed the key into a tiny, barely visible slot near the corner, one only someone very familiar with the building would know existed. It turned with a quiet, smooth click. Not rusted. The shutter rolled upward with a tired groan, revealing darkness behind it that smelled like dust, spilled whiskey, and old decisions. He stepped inside without ceremony. Just… returning. MsRain stood there watching the empty doorway, the rainfall gathering on her coat shoulders. Then, under her breath; more to the city than to him, she murmured: “…Damn it. I knew it.” The shutter clattered fully open behind Jeff, and for a moment she saw his silhouette against the dim interior. MsRain shook her head, a slow, disbelieving smile tugging at the corner of her mouth. “If this really is you… But she stayed outside. Some doors weren’t meant to be walked through just yet. |
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| Reply by: Jeffrey_Lebowski at Nov 19, '25 21:23 | |
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| I don’t know if TheDude is alive, dead, resurrected or on a bowling-themed sabbatical, but at this point even I’m invested. Carry on, you dramatic bastards. I’m invested. | |
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