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| A proposal that smells like trouble | Started by: Stefan_Babic on Dec 09, '25 16:04 |
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Late evening in the Iron & Oil Garage. In the background, Vito is beating on a half-dead alternator, while Ezio flips through a catalog that’s probably older than both of them. Then— Babs lifts his eyes slowly. The door opens, and in walks a man who looks painfully out of place in this part of town. He steps in like he owns the room. “Gentlemen… forgive the late intrusion. My name is Marcel DeLuca.” Vito lowers the hammer, but only so his hand is free to slide toward the pistol tucked under his belt. Marcel raises his palms slightly. Babs stands, flicks the cigarette into the ashtray, and mutters: A faint smile — polite, but not sincere. “I’m not here to sell. I’m here to offer.” He steps forward, pulls a leather folder from his bag, and spreads a map across the desk with crisp precision. “Three hectares,” he begins. Vito narrows his eyes. “How do you know what we do?” Marcel interrupts him with a single raised finger — calm, effortless authority. “I know enough to understand you’re growing. And I know you need… more space.” He then produces another document — a rough design of a facility: part scrapyard, part industrial hub, part shadow operation. “My proposal is simple,” he says, tapping the center. He slides his finger left. “Here — a legitimate scrapyard. Tow trucks, salvaged vehicles, parts sales, paperwork clean as a nun.” Then he taps on the right. “And here… a crusher. A big one. Industrial grade. Ezio gulps. Marcel continues, undisturbed: “I bring the land. I bring vehicles. I bring business. He lifts his gaze to Babs. “You do me a favor when the time comes.” “What kind of favor?” Babs asks, voice flat. “Not now. Not soon. But the moment will come.” The sentence hangs in the air like a heavy piece of machinery waiting to fall. Marcel calmly folds the map, slides it back into his bag, and steps toward the exit. “Think about it,” he says. He pauses at the door, glancing once more through the dim, cluttered space. “I’ll be back soon. Hopefully next time, we speak as partners… not strangers.” Then he leaves, opening the door just enough for the cold night air and rain to spill inside before everything goes quiet again. The door shuts. Vito: “Boss… what do we do with this?” Ezio: “I don’t like the feel of him… but the opportunity is huge.” Babs stands silent, eyes fixed on an oil stain on the floor, mind racing through everything he just heard. “Vito…” he says quietly, not turning. “Call MsRain ...” |
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When I answered the phone, it was Stefan_Babic. Unbelievable, this was his business, his domain. I couldn’t understand how someone could walk into someone's business, thinking they had something to offer. DeLuca, DeLuca, the name kept running through my head, but I couldn’t put a face to the name. Using the term “hectares” instead of acres made me wonder where he was from. The last time I heard hectares was in reference to a diamond mine in South Africa. When he told me he said, “I know enough to understand you’re growing, and unofficially whatever else you need, it didn’t sit well with me. Usually, I don’t trust people like him, people who see too much, people who don't play dumb. In the real world, cockiness and overconfidence are acceptable. It’s a long road from being a retired assassin to living as a civilian, and I didn’t trust my judgment. Stefan, we need to vet him. The man coming alone doesn’t mean jack shit to me. I will follow your lead on this one. |
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