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| The Hit | Started by: johndillanger on Aug 19, '08 23:00 |
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JD's plane landed in New York City, just as everything was planned. The flight wasn't too bad, the air was smooth, and the service was good. The city itself was really nothing more than a giant tourist trap, except to those who had business to take care of, JD has just that. He was sent to this city on a job, a hit. His mark was a banking executive named Mery Ianskie, he was to be found in a fancy little French hotel in Manhattan, JD already had reservations. Now JD knew, the first thing he needed to do was get a decent suit, he had to look like every other man on the streets or else his mark would notice him before he could get the shot off. His gear was already waiting in his room, under the bed was a set of briefcases where his specially modified pistols had been sent up, along with a vest, and a suit to cover it all up. The suit was really a work of art, as he put it on he noticed how well it fit, and it's customized holsters in the coat. As JD prepared his guns he heard a knock at the door. "Room service." JD hadn't asked for room service, but he knew exactly who it was. As he opened the door another man joined him and passed him the rest of his information. It turns out, Mr. Ianskie was also a big time drug lord with several hired guns at his back, whoever wanted this man dead obviously had larger intentions. Of course, this was of no concern to JD, he was hired and already paid to do a job, he had to see it through. Before the other man left he quickly turned back. "We've arranged for a backup, just in case you can't pull it off." JD just grinned at the man. "You won't need it friend." JD's eyes followed the man out the door as he shut it behind him. This setup was huge, JD waited by his window for the marked limo that was to pick Mr. Ianskie up at the hotel and take him to dinner, he was to miss his reservation. As JD saw the limo pull up he hastily made his way down the steps and into the limo, ahead of his target, and made himself as small as he could in the shaded area behind the door. Suddenly, the door opened again and two men began to climb into the limo, this had to happen fast, before anybody could realize what had happened. Quickly JD drew his gun and shot the front man square between the eyes, then grabbed the second, his target, by the collar and dragged him to the floor in the limo as the driver hit the gas and the door slammed shut. JD gave the man a final look before sticking his knife into the man's stomach spilling his warm blood all over the limo. As the limo sped down the road the front window began to roll down... |
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Ohhhh. Love it man. Truly a work of art. I like all of the descriptions, and how realistic it sounds. "the front window began to roll down..." Is that a setup for a part two? Can't wait! |
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| Reply by: The_Falcon at Aug 20, '08 01:11 | |
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| Thanks bro :) | |
| Reply by: johndillanger at Aug 20, '08 13:11 | |
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| That was great, bravo | |
| Reply by: pizza_man at Aug 20, '08 17:18 | |
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| I cant wait to see more man, you have a talent. | |
| Reply by: PDiddy at Aug 20, '08 17:36 | |
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