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Charley " Introduction " | Started by: Hotstuffs on Jun 19, '12 14:40 |
New york 1956, A women named Amanda gave birth to this little kid named Charley.
See, when Charley was first born his mother ran had ran off with him. He was seperated from his dad... well, more like left.
Charley was to young to remember his father. Thats the worse thing you do to a kid is to take away his papa.
But anyways. Him and his mom live with with his grandma. Which is her mom. But soon after they moved in her mom died
by lung cancer. Her mom ended up becoming a drug dealer. It had broke her heart. So they had move because she had no money.
They lived on the side walk for several months. But one day it turned everything around. She found a hard building man. We all know
about the building men. His name was David. He had combed black hair, sometimes in a poney tail, and has a bushy beard but well neat.
This guy makes alot of money at this time. So they find a nice 3 bedroom house. so they settle in.
Now people this is not like a happy ever after story. See, Charley resents David. He never liked people with money or authority. He thought
they were people who thought they were better than everyone else. In some ways maybe but he would disagree. What pissed him off the
most was when he go less attention from his mom every day. She has less to do with him as he grows up. He gets all lonely, and mushy.
Until he meets 1 man that will change his life.
If you want more stories please keep commenting i need at lease 3 to start the story. Thx
-Hotstuffs
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Mooshie claps his hands
This story has interested me to read more, please continue it!! |
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Reply by: Mooshie at Jun 19, '12 15:14 | |
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Interesting....do the right thing Charley |
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Reply by: Joe_on_Rum at Jun 19, '12 15:25 | |
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Good story. |
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Reply by: Tricky at Jun 19, '12 20:03 | |
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The story will be on tonight. |
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Reply by: Hotstuffs at Jun 20, '12 21:18 | |
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Should I remake or Should i continue this story I made? |
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Reply by: KingJoker at Aug 26, '12 17:14 | |
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Personally.. your whole story's flawed.
Born : 1956 , games set in the 30's
Time traveler , are we?
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Reply by: Renekton at Aug 26, '12 18:22 | |
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Sorry This has been canceled! Thank you Renekton! |
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Reply by: KingJoker at Aug 26, '12 19:57 | |
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