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| The Fall of a Godfather Part I | Started by: Gregory_SpitZ on Sep 05, '08 21:32 |
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a(OOC:This story may sound like some people in the game, however it does not pertain to anybody that is playing the game) You come upon a man standinig on the corner telling a story about his great grandfather. He was reading from a list of papers he had printed out on the press, and the story read Gregory was walking down a street in Chicago. When he came across a Leather bound diary. He checked the book and saw that it had belonged to Sir Gregory the Third. He had relized that this powerful little book was like holding one of the biggest crimelords lifes in the palm of your hand "I wake up to the sound of my window being shot at, with a cold sweat on my face i know instantly what was going on, Antwoin must have been double dealing. I had a suspision the whole time" "Now lets back up a little bit, Hi my names Sir Gregory, you may call me Greg. I'm your local guy that gets shit done. I run the city of Detroit as the Godfather of mafia. Lately i've noticed things that were happening that were quite unusual. Take Gino last week, why the fuck couldn't he remember the last shot he took? That bastard hasn't screwed up his numbers on that shit in years. Still, i gave him the benifet of the doubt, due mainly to the number of times he's saved my ass. If it wasn't for that man, the security of my family.. no, not just my family, the whole city. The whole city's safety in time of war, sitting in that mans skull. The man standing on the corner clears his voice and continues "Anyway, without a doubt someone is trying to kill me. The number of bullets that have failed to pierce my bullet proof glass windows is enourmous. I could smell my getaway cars beinig burned, the burnt rubber smell piercing my nostrils... You turn the page of the story the man was handing out and see Come back for Part Two of this Godfathers fall and comeback. |
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| Excellent story. Can't wait for the continuation. | |
| Reply by: mr_jointsworth at Sep 06, '08 11:38 | |
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| same here,buetifully executed | |
| Reply by: gameownage at Sep 06, '08 14:56 | |
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| Thank you, waiting for more reply's until the second one gets posted. | |
| Reply by: Gregory_SpitZ at Sep 06, '08 18:25 | |
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Really enjoyed this man, Hope to see the second part out on these streets soon. You really have some talent, take advantage of it. |
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| Reply by: Shagggyd at Sep 06, '08 18:28 | |
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| Uh-oh... Didn't he just buy those cars? Someone isn't going to be happy. Though i don't think he'll mind the broken beer bottles in his yard. I missed the windows... | |
| Reply by: Mikey-McKnight at Sep 06, '08 18:50 | |
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| i cant wait for the secound part of this story whens it coming out | |
| Reply by: Hawiian_Punch at Sep 06, '08 22:27 | |
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| Trying to get a few more reply's. Glad you liked it. | |
| Reply by: Gregory_SpitZ at Sep 06, '08 22:29 | |
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