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| Words of the Past Part 4 | Started by: Angels on Sep 27, '08 19:47 |
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Hehehe...Well let's get this started... As the three came into the city they saw people bowing smiling and kneeling praying for a thank for some reason.When I asked to stop I walked up to a rich sad man and told him to stand."What is the problem of this city?It looks so peaceful..."I said looking around and back to the man."The king...He is sick...He is said to die and we are hoping you as our last resort,would help..."He said holding on to his cross of sand stone.I looked back to thew others and we went to the palace.Once there we introduced ourselves and the guards showed us to the king's royal Med."I'm glad you are here!"He said in a hurried way."The king needs help as fast as he can!"He said walking out of the room. We nodded to each other and walked up to the king's bed.He was out cold and pale.We though a disease and then I saw a shadow in the corner.But it soon disapeared.I shrugged and faced the king checking his forehead.We looked around for cuts or bruises and found none.After we checked his mouth for any bacterial we shrugged all-together.Then I thought of the plague of 1662.The Plague of No Thoughts...I asked the priestest and she said it was impossible. "How long has he been this way?"I said to the Royal Watch Guard."For about 2 weeks.We are worried it's the spirits."He said and I was wide eyed almost."The Yearly Spirit thanks for a good harvedt was about 3 weeks ago and during it was a fool who decided to act out.He was killed but he wasn't sent to Heaven for his acts so he stayed as a spirit.Now we think he's in for revenge."He said as the 2 other Priests checked for shadows anywhere that wasn't suppose to be there."None"tey said to the Priestest.We had to give one nights rest and check again tomorrow so we asked for a kind room and they allowed.The next morning we brought our food to the Kings room and ate off and on. "I think it's a spirit...I saw a shadow yesterday in the corner and it wasn't an objects.Infact it moved around as if an spirit."I told the others secretly.We thought we should secretly move the king somewhere else so the spirit won't find him.We moved him down to the bunkers for safety of the king incase of war.It was beautiful for it was never used before.When we layed the king on the bed in the middle we checked him and found he was at same state as yesterday.I checked his teeth and to my surprise found a grain of sand.I figured he got it from a trade.So I flicked it away.When we were about to give up I saw the shadow again.And so did the other.When it grew it formed a man but moed around the king. We pulled our crosses out to show our holy ranks to this spirit and it moved faster until we saw a uprise on the shadow.It was forming and fast!We knew it was bad and we had to do something.The guards could even hear a whistle from the shadow and they rushed down staring at it in curiosity.When the spirit was half formed we pulled out our demon Guards which can weaken a Evil Spirit if attacked.We readied ourselves behind the first set of 3 guards and waited.We were about to face a true evil possibly... To Be Continued... P.S:Sorry its geting short...I'm just busy lately...It shall soon get more words in... |
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Love the story so far Angels. Keep up the great work! I know sometimes things get in the way. Going through that problem myself, but hang in there and keep the writing going! Respectfully, ~BB |
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| Reply by: BuddahBear at Sep 27, '08 19:49 | |
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Well done old friend, Very nice read.. Looking forward to more man. :) |
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| Reply by: Shadow at Sep 27, '08 20:00 | |
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| Thank you all!From here on for all people that like my stories so far!I'm going to save all my stories and at the end!I'm gonna make it a book! | |
| Reply by: Angels at Sep 30, '08 22:19 | |
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| Hmm nice read :) i enjoyed it.looking toward to reading more.Keep up the good work. | |
| Reply by: Hallow at Sep 30, '08 22:42 | |
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| Great story...keep em coming. | |
| Reply by: Riley at Sep 30, '08 23:31 | |
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| Good stuff. Pleasure to read. | |
| Reply by: BrutusBeefcake at Sep 30, '08 23:33 | |
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| I enjoyed that, cant wait to see more from you well done. | |
| Reply by: LilWayne at Oct 02, '08 02:29 | |
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