Its rhyme time so if you think im playing ill get to spraying with my glock nine and watch them bullets hit you like theres no stop sign because im one of a kind i got homicidal thoughts on my mind..

Boy's got an obsession with guns, that shit won't ever be fun, you ain't never gonna boast when you've gotta get in real close and badda bing blow brains over your nice ivy league suit.

You're toe to toe with a rap battle brute now,  I'll turn you into a mute now, ain't no way you can dispute I've called your rhymes into disrepute.

Guns are fun unless you don`t own one/ then i guess your a no one no need for boaston/ cause we hold it down on the East coast son/ now you fu*3d with the wrong one/ put the steel in ya mouth and blow the back of your brains out with my long gun/ empty the clip reload that s*it with something longer than kiss tongue/ follow up an let the hollow tips hit up rip you up change the story and f*k up the script/ i`ll smoke ya dumb a$$ like im burning a spliff full of dat piff...

one word for this thread.....GAY

Wow what a hatter. Only a faggot would come along and say some sh*t like that. F*k outta here pu$$y..

If you don`t like writting poems or rhymes don`t write sh*t. Jus view and continue like everyone else.

i like poems...just not eminem wanabes

Okay who said we were white or even trying to be like Eminem.. He`s one of my favorite rappers.

What i wrote was a freestyle and it is original, my flow is alot different than Em i cant see why you would even say that sh*t ??

I support striving lyricist, so to have people like you come out and try and shut down something that people do for entertainment is pretty low.

I agree with Max, if you don't like what they are trying to do then keep on your way, but don't belittle others.

I Respect what Toby is saying, i also know alot of people that would say the same and i think you could learn a thing or two from him. Just cut all that hate out the picture..

Thank you Toby.

~MadMax~

okay okay

watch ya rapin about no 'o ya can rap cause yr moma so fat she sat on 3 cat' an yr dada is on m cat and thats that ya come toe toe in a rap that ya cant finnish so shut ya mouth befor ya all pass out! gunz gunz gunz its al' about gunz. because of them ive had lots of funz me an ma crew go around pop a few niggas in the allyway then we blast out so ya better watch out. were comming 4 u. watch ya back. from the front to the back we attack deffiying all means. so i dont smoke crack an none o' me hommies touch da' so watch ya back and thats that.

the history of me is fuckin legendary, bitches call me scary cuz my back too hairy...

:(

you type out the word faggot, prehaps the second most offensive word ever used, but you dont spell out fuck or pussy. your moral compass is way off track

What are you crying about, who the fu*k are you talking about don`t spell this and that i don`t belive i did so please fall back if you don`t have any thing good to say then don`t leave a comment. This is rhyme time not the school of morals.

Cant understand why this thread is getting so miuch flak...before the name calling...hiphop is legendary.

True

these mobsters a never catch me slippin...ya see imma gangsta killin kats as i insert the clip in....makin moves my g i am never finished...the judge only sayin numbers but still givin you a sentence (get it)...thats why i keep it low keep wit mo keys a shipment...gun holstered fo sho kid please keep ya distance...man i clap dudes wit no screws no resistence

You can call me Max with Two Guns on the track these dudes moving like a pack full of some rats so as a matter of rap we aint serving no chesse but me an 2gs serving some crack we flip to get mo stacks no beat but the DJ bringing it back back to the trap we ballin where are you at no where to be found on my google map these pussy mobsters foul like a over the back get ya shortii to my crib and now im all in her back so we close like two balls in a sack this was a simple performance of rap...

(no beef just a friendly battle)......mad_max get beat bloody till he look like used tampax.....you aint want it wit me son ....i've been known da leave flashbacks on how i smash kats...shiiiit my gun go off like heavy cheese on rat traps....so please believe i'll put money on ya head like a dollor signed starter cap....gun barrel in ya mouth cock that while you swallow caps...breath easy and watch who you lookin at...shells a leave you crip walkin but the holes a make you hollow back.....rap game easy but i run da trap...ya girlfriend need me i give her packs and tell her bitch bring my money back...she like how i fuck her balls deep  scrotum sack...

lol   (ya turn max)