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The Lone Wolf (ch.1) | Started by: KHAOS on Nov 28, '12 01:58 |
Written by: BADWOLF
Panting almost out of breath. Leaning against his bedroom door, .22 pistol in his hand. Lupo stares at his hands covered in blood. |
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Deadpool reads the story with much excitement in his face.
Thank for the read, I enjoyed it. I only wish it was longer. I'll be waiting for part two!
Strolls away looking for an easy mark. |
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Reply by: Deadpool at Nov 28, '12 02:06 | |
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WannaBanana pulls a huge bean bag and plops down on it, careful not to step on her peel in doing so... Hmmmm.....Something is missing for times like this.
AHA!!!! I know what is is! WannaBanana exclaims and brings out the popcorn and passes it to Deadpool seeing that people have stopped by to check out this good read.
I like the introduction already and just like Deadpool, I wish it was longer too. When can we expect the next part so i can tell my friends and family about this. I am sure they would also love a good read.
By the way, do you charge anything for me to park my butt and my bean bag here while we listen to you? If you do, then I gotta run now and make some money so I can pay for the next portion of your story. |
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Reply by: WannaBanana at Nov 29, '12 04:29 | |
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Of course not WannaBanana your butt is always free to park around here.
KHAOS chuckles, and smooths out his pants while looking at all the listeners.
The next part is coming soon mam |
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Reply by: KHAOS at Nov 29, '12 04:32 | |
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Great first chapter, looking forward to the rest of it!
I actually don’t mind that its not terribly long, for the short read it was excellent, to the point and painted a perfect picture in my mind. Well done!
Sephiroth reaches into his jacket where he then pulls out a note pad and jots down a reminder to check out part two... |
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Reply by: Sephiroth at Nov 29, '12 07:29 | |
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I fell It keeps the reader interested when its not so sorely long |
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Reply by: KHAOS at Dec 01, '12 00:50 | |
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