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| The Brothers | Started by: Premier on Oct 08, '08 04:10 |
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em>An abandon factory, dark and damp. The pale moonlight shining dimly through the broken windows. The machines lay still and offices littered with old paper, scattered leaves and filth from animals. The smell of mildew and nature that had over taken the long forgotten location of many workers, but one person remembers it and two brothers will never forget it. I pressed the gun to the forehead of Brylum and said, make the choice now, you or your brother. 18 hours earlier I had received a call from Zoey, the Right hand of Don Marietta; she wanted to meet with me. I assumed it was for a job. I had worked with the Riot family before, many leaders contracted hits out so they could not be suspects. The old saying, you don't pay a whore to fuck you, you pay the whore to leave. Same with out of town hitters, you don't pay them to hit; you pay them to get the fuck out of town after the hit. This way cops and other families don't need to worry about the heat coming down on them. My family was in the south end of Detroit, Don Marietta in the north. I arrived by train at 8:00 AM, and was promptly met by Zoey. We hugged and gave the traditional kiss on the cheek. Good to see you again Zoey, She replied shall we ushering me to the waiting car. I inquired where the Left hand woman was, eepster I had taken quite a liking to her a while back. Zoey informed me she was out of town, Shame. The rest of the ride was quiet. We would wait for the Don before we talked business. Arriving at the Riot's headquarters I was taken back by the beauty and size of the Don's house As we approached the front door one of the Don's bodyguards moved to search me. "JOSE!" Shouted Don Marietta, everyone stopped and looked as she spoke again. "You know Premier is with me, and we have business to attend to." I smiled and walked passed the bodyguard with Don Marietta. Entering the Don's personal office I noticed lavish works of art, and a beautiful fire place that was heating the room quite nicely. She offered me a drink, I declined respectfully declined You know I can't drink before a job, and I assume that is what I am here for. She nodded and smiled handing me an envelope You know after the recent war, there haven't been many families up and running. I nodded and told her I am sorry for the losses she endured during the war, and assured her my friends and family did their best to support her during the war. She replied Yes I know, thank you. As I was saying not a lot of families but still a lot of new blood running around, i've done my best to protect them God knows I have I told her yes Don, you have done many great things and been a very fair person after what happen. I was informed that people without families were pretty much under your protection and can guarantee not a hair harmed by me or any of my associates. She pointed towards the envelope and told me to open it There were two photos one had the name Brylum and the other nicks. They looked familiar, I can recall selling a piece to nicks the week before, and Brylum was his brother. They were a reckless pair, always high on cocaine, or drunk. Known for their lack of regards for respect to higher ups and the code of rules we lived by. I looked up and the don began to speak Those two are quite the bother to me right now, as if I don't have enough to deal with, word got back to me they have killed 3 mobsters so far, and the only reason they coughed up, was they weren't apart of a family, I can not describe how upset I am right now I can do the job for Ten thousand a head. The job will be done by tomorrow She smiled That is a very generous price, thank you Premier I kissed her hand and told her to send my regards to Eepster, she told me to do the same for Doyle my boss. I was escorted out by Zoey and driven back to the train station. I bid her good day as well and boarded the train back to my home town. I'd sleep on the train it would be a long night. I arrived back at the head quarters and met with Doyle. I told him Don Marietta sends her respect and regards. We hugged and sat down to talk about the hit. I gave him the envelope. I told him 10k a head. Finished by tomorrow. He nodded Remember be careful and call me if you need anything. I'm going to head home spend some quality time with the mistress haha |
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Doyle Listens to Prem as he tells his story, then gets up and claps with a smoke in his mouth to the side. Good story my man. I can tell you put some thought into it. Little typo at the start, but a good story and plot none the less. Good job. Good read. |
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| Reply by: Doyle at Oct 08, '08 04:20 | |
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You see Navy begin to slowly clap Wow prem, great read. Good story and great RP. Well don sir. |
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| Reply by: Navy at Oct 08, '08 04:25 | |
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Sc0pe snuffs out his cigarette. Not bad, not bad at all. Was good, very good. I always loved your bloodlines work. Whether threw battle or words, good all around. Sc0pe shakes Premeirs hand and wonders off into the night.. |
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| Reply by: Sc0pe_D0pe at Oct 08, '08 04:28 | |
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BigBoss goes up to Premier and gives him a hug and kiss on the cheek Excellent sir. I am most definitely glad to have you in the family. I can learn a lot from you... Tips his hat to Premier |
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| Reply by: BigBoss at Oct 08, '08 12:21 | |
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Abyss passes by Premeir on the street and hands him a dictionary and a pat on the back. There ya go bud! |
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| Reply by: Abyss at Oct 08, '08 13:18 | |
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| Loved it, seriously loved it so much. More plz plz pl zpzlpzlzplzplz | |
| Reply by: linuxmandrake at Oct 08, '08 17:53 | |
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| Well said Abyss | |
| Reply by: IHaveTheLongestName at Oct 08, '08 17:55 | |
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Eepster grabs the dictionary from Abyss and smacks him with it At least Premeir is putting something positive towards our world that has fallen apart. I can never see you doing the same as you are a selfish pig head. This is the first time I've seen you on our lovely streets, the first time you've made any sort of appearance, statement, etc. Go take your words, including your dictionary, elsewhere. We don't need your negative attitude here. |
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| Reply by: Eepster at Oct 08, '08 18:06 | |
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FU. All I have to say about this. |
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| Reply by: Revster at Oct 08, '08 19:04 | |
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*watches Eepster bashing away with the dictionary* Putting effort in surely means researching what you are saying, It only takes 20 seconds to check, does that seem like too much trouble :/ |
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| Reply by: IHaveTheLongestName at Oct 08, '08 19:36 | |
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| And instead of writing your own story and showing me up, you'd rather come to the street and convince me to kill you. How nice. | |
| Reply by: Premier at Oct 08, '08 22:16 | |
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| Well done. Held my attention for sure. | |
| Reply by: Matos_Black at Oct 08, '08 22:20 | |
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Touche Prem. People tend to forget that these are the streets, not some Mafia Idol where you can sit back and criticize away. Maybe a bullet will send a reality check. |
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| Reply by: Cassidy at Oct 08, '08 22:21 | |
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Holds Premier back Come on boss... he aint worth it...in due time... Looks at Abyss with disgust Maron! You should learn shut your mouth. Disrespect the wrong fellow and you end up dead. Spits toward Abyss' direction |
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| Reply by: BigBoss at Oct 08, '08 22:33 | |
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Prem couldn't hit water if he fell out a boat :/ Acts of god aside. |
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| Reply by: IHaveTheLongestName at Oct 08, '08 22:34 | |
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| Time will tell kiddo. All this time these two kids have been posting in this thread, and others whining and crying about things. Wah wah wah i've looked at all your posts and its full of you crying like a bitch. So here is an idea dont like my thread? Make a better one, don't like the leaders kill them. If not shut the fuck up. | |
| Reply by: Premier at Oct 08, '08 22:43 | |
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Not all of us can get as lucky as you Prem. OOOOH DISSED. OOOOOOH. Lolz. No really. I love you. Marry me? |
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| Reply by: Revster at Oct 08, '08 22:45 | |
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| Shame neither of the two can speak anymore. Part 2 to come soon. | |
| Reply by: Premier at Oct 10, '08 02:37 | |
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| Shame some people can't grow up and leave the past in the past. Ruin a great story with their crap. | |
| Reply by: Thomas at Oct 10, '08 06:35 | |
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