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| The Man Behind the Ghost Ch. 2 | Started by: Fantom_Ghost on Oct 10, '08 20:42 |
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Fantom_Ghost throws down his cigarette and steps on it to put it out. Okay, now I'm ready to continue. He steps back up on to the box and clears his throat to continue his story. That day, Daera showed me the way to his head quarters in downtown New York, and it was a very nice building. Looks as though it was recently built. He took me on a tour of the HQ, showed me his office, and all the other places I would need to see on a daily basis. As I wandered through out the HQ I found the lounge where the Mafiosi stayed when they had no business to take care of. From across the room I saw a strange figure, kind of mysterious looking, quite like myself. I creeped my way over to get a better look at the man. As I got closer he looked more and more like me. When I got to him he looked exactly like me. "FANTOM" he yelled as soon as he saw me. I didn't know the man, even though he looked exactly like me. We spoke for a few minutes before he told me that he was my brother; not only my brother, but my twin. He told me that our father brought him into the business as soon as I left town. Which was strange, because my father told me he didn't want me in the business. Phantom_Ghost and I began talking about our father. I had many questions to ask him about our father, due to not seeing him for a good 6 years. I also had many questions about how I never knew I had a twin. It turned out that we were separated at birth, he went with our mother, I went with our father. My father kept in touch with Phantom and even brought him into the Mafia to spend more time with him. I always wanted a brother, but my father wasn't really the dating type, so it was always us sitting alone at our house. Phantom continued to explain that our mother was a cheap whore who would sell her body just to get drugs to pass through the night. One night she ran across the wrong type of people, she tried to steal their drugs but they turned and shot her. She died before she even hit the floor. That is when Phantom turned to our father and joined Daera and served him. Fantom yawns and steps down from the box. All of this story telling is wearing me down. I must take another break and continue with my story at a later time. I thank you all again for listening, I will be back shortly. |
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Listens and smiles Once again Great work! Can't wait till you finish it :P |
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| Reply by: `Naamah` at Oct 10, '08 20:47 | |
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| Good work there ghostly one. The next one will be just a good I bet! Hopefully it comes up soon, i'm dieing to hear the rest. | |
| Reply by: CharlieScene at Oct 10, '08 20:51 | |
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Phantom listens to the story, cringing when the part about their Mother was mentioned. He pulls out his own cigarette and goes to get a light from his brother. |
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| Reply by: Phantom_Ghost at Oct 10, '08 23:22 | |
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| Nice work once again mate, Am really enjoying them. | |
| Reply by: SaulSilver at Oct 11, '08 05:40 | |
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| VERY GOOD STORY | |
| Reply by: Ireland_123 at Oct 11, '08 06:10 | |
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Takes a drag off his smoke as he listens to the story. When he finished he spoke up. Nice story Fantom. Hope to hear more from you. |
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| Reply by: Doyle at Oct 11, '08 13:03 | |
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