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| I Smell A Rat (RP) | Started by: RourkeyRourke on Dec 29, '08 13:24 |
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Walking down the street I notice a few things out of I place. Ignoring them I continue my stroll. Finally upon reaching my destination I pull out a pistol - walking into the home a few people begin to scream - people litter the street and yet everyone pretends they heard nothing. A few shots ring through the alley and still... nothing. Instead they continue their daily routine. "Fill up the bags. We will be out of here in time." As the bags begin to fill with random body parts, the sounds of a siren begin to blare. Within moments, car doors are slammed shut as people circle the home. "Shit... leave the bodies here... we have to leave." Random men begin to scream threats into the home. I run to one of the nearest windows to see the ten police officers standing there, guns in hand. "Goddamnit! Get that window open upstairs! Now! Now! We musn't be caught." As one of my men lock the door, a stray bullet flies from the window and hits him in the eye. His screams are unanswered. "Ignore him. We need to get out. He can't ruin it for us!" The other three men nod and begin jumping out the second story window. "Who told?" my mind comes up blank... worrying about the situation gets the best of me "I don't know. But when we catch him. He is dead." |
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| Very Nice. | |
| Reply by: MIDNIGHTPOISON at Dec 29, '08 17:24 | |
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| Damn good story! | |
| Reply by: The_Person at Dec 29, '08 19:12 | |
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Danny was sitting in a nearby cafwith some of his friends. The coffee was steamy so Danny decided to light a cigarette as he sees a familiar face, the face of the known mafioso RourkeyRourke. Danny nod towards him. A little while after that a rang through the streets. Danny pulled his gun and hid behind the bar. "What the f**k happened?! Danny screamed with anger in his face After a while of silence Danny put his gun away and walked onto the streets. As Danny heared the sirens it hits him, RourkeyRourke was walking by just a few minutes before. Danny was wondering what happened, did Rourkey forget to bribe the cops or why are they here so fast. Rourkey used to be careful. |
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| Reply by: DanielOcean at Dec 30, '08 08:21 | |
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| that was a good story sir | |
| Reply by: jockooooo13 at Dec 30, '08 08:45 | |
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DJ is sitting in his car on the opposite side of the street, engine running. Rourke was late; very uncharacteristic behaviour for a man notorious for his to-the-second planning. Having heard the shots and the sirens he couldn't help fearing the worst; but he couldn't just drive away and leave Rourke and his crew stranded - they could still be on their way back - the sirens and shots may have been totally unrelated In fact they could well account for the delay; perhaps the crew was just trying to stay low to duck the heat - heat that may even be totally unrelated to whatever job it was they were pulling. Suddenly DJ noticed a familiar face across the street. Danny, what the hell was he doing here. DJ sure as hell didn't want Danny finding out that he was driving for another family. Damn it, this day just seemed to keep getting worse and worse... |
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| Reply by: Diamond_Jim at Dec 30, '08 09:49 | |
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| Vince saw DJ and smiled, walking over to the car he pretended to hold him up, having him move over into the passenger seat until the other car was gone. Vince made sure that the others had seen him holding a gun, and then DJ let off a couple of shots over Vince's shoulder as he ran. WOrked like a charm... almost... the only problem was, the thug down the street thought it was real, and vince soon found himself on the recieving end of a 'loisville nap' | |
| Reply by: Vince_DiMartelli at Jan 03, '09 00:33 | |
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| where do you guys think of this brilliance | |
| Reply by: Vito_Rizzuto at Jan 04, '09 01:27 | |
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