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| An Introduction to the Mafia | Started by: Mafioso on Jan 03, '09 09:06 |
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It was a cold night in the month of January and I was in a house, in the house where my family was murdered, I was defenceless, they came in with guns and they shot my son in the forehead, they thought it was funny, they found it fun, I managed to get out....just, here is what happened We were sitting around the table in preperation for a meal when it happened,we were praying to god and thanking him for it but then they just came in and shot everyone... everyone except for me. They just held me hostage and made me watch as they killed them, one by one, but then I was saved, I didn't know his name but he came in and he shot them all but still the damage was done, I got down on my bloody knees and begged for him to shoot me but he just said "You are of use to us, so you will come with me" "What do you mean use, useful for what?" I replied "You will see" He told me I followed him out into the cold winter night of December 16th and he took me through an alleyway, we went through a couple of doors and back outside, we took so many different routes I didn't know where I was anymore, then we went into a lush office and at the front was a chair, it swivelled around to reveal a man, I turned around to see where my saviour went but he was gone, the man in the chair then spoke to me "Welcome to the Pharmacy..." "The Pharmacy, what the hell am I doing in a Pharmacy, my Family's been murdered and, and!" I repled in anger "You can shut up or I can get you shot, now this is no ordinary Pharmacy, see we are a branch of the mafia and I am leader of this fine crew, my name is Prozac and I invite you to come and join us, join the mafia, so what do you say" I was thinking about this in my head, would I be able to avenge the deaths of my family, would life ever go back to the way it once was, I thought about it long and hard and said "I have to avenge the deaths of my family, I will join you, you are my family now" "Good, here take this gun, you'll need it, now go and get aquainted with the rest of the crew" So here I was standing inside the house, preparing the funeral for them, I still hadn't found the killers but I would never forget them, I had been made and I knew that there was no going back and that was my introduction to the mafia |
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| quite a nice RP, the punctuation could be improved, but overall v. good :) | |
| Reply by: Adieu at Jan 03, '09 09:52 | |
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| Ah, such is the journey of every Mafioso amongst us. Nostalgia fills my heart. You portray the situation very well Mafioso. Very nice RP I must say. | |
| Reply by: WildTurkey at Jan 03, '09 13:04 | |
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| Thanks for the comments, guys | |
| Reply by: Mafioso at Jan 05, '09 15:54 | |
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| It could be better but it was all right | |
| Reply by: v_antek at Jan 05, '09 23:18 | |
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Whats all this RP, you're talking about? Did this not just happen before our eyes? |
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| Reply by: Phantom-Ghost at Jan 06, '09 03:17 | |
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