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Menaux Incorporated: Realty And Construction Started by: LaceyMenaux on Mar 10, '09 00:12
Lacey walked the streets as she normally would at night. It was wet out. Not soaking wet, raining for days kind of wet, but damp enough so the water covered everything. She awaited her walk signal and began to cross State Street. Initially there for a business trip, she decided to make an announcement.

As she walked toward the soapbox where her Father unveiled the same idea, she faintly saw a mirage of him and his associates in the slush and snow talking to a crowd of people. She imagined him and his clumsy self walking the same path stumbling and tripping no doubt, as was his "style.

As she neared the soapbox she looked up at the rain and dark sky. It was slightly late, a weird time to make such an announcement- but she was the nervous type. Word would circulate eventually anyway. Not sure her father would approve of a late night business announcement for a "gift to the city", as he once explained it to a young Lacey.

Lacey gripped an envelope in her hand before beginning to speak.


Excuse me everyone. I have an important announcement regarding a new business venture. The first in the line of privately owned businesses I hope for you to see from Menaux Incorporated.


All too often I stroll to the empty and lackluster business districts of our wonderful cities and I think to myself, what happened to this place? Now, I'm not saying there aren't a few stand out businesses that I frequent myself, but I can't help but wonder what it would be like if there were so many more. Businesses from goods to services. Yeah, that's the ticket.

Lacey thinks back at her words cursing herself for not having the same confidence her Father had, but she continued.


Well, I've come up with a solution that gets to the heart of what its all about, business. Money. Moolah. Dough.


I now present to you, the first business in the line of Menaux Incorporated's own:

Menaux Incorporated: Realty and Construction


For a nominal fee, explained on the pamphlets in the newspaper machine... Lacey pointed to a couple of broken newspaper machines she had taken upon herself to fill with the fliers. A few men tipped their hats and began handing them out. Graciously Lacey continued.


For a nominal fee, Menaux Inc's line talented architects will construct you your very own business in the city of your choice. Whether it be a straightforward bar, or a intricate smoke shop. Perhaps tattoo parlors are more your style and you just don't have the time to plan out the building and architecture on your lonesome. This is no longer a worry for you.


You may be thinking to yourself: "What are the benefits of working with Menaux Incorporated as opposed to privately building?" - You will have access to our options making your business as successful as possible.


Please take a look at your pamphlets and I will explain each point directly.


Lacey reads slowly..




Menaux Inc. Realty and Construction

January 28th, 1941


Lacey Rixau Menaux


Menaux Inc. Presents MIR&C


Upon opening [posting], the customer is required to use the title agreed on during discussions before and during construction of the building. Titles will include "Menaux Inc's" before the name to enhance business, failure to do so will result in a breech of contract and the building will be repossessed or demolished. Owners will be punished under the fullest extend of the law in their chosen city.


Prices are as follows (50% of the final total is to be issued in LaceyMeaux's name before construction begins. Upon sending this down-payment the customer agrees to pay the final price in full after completion):


-+- Base Price................................$300,000

(Includes sign [Title] and a building not exceeding 1000 square feet [words])


-+- Additional Square Footage................................$25,000 Minimum

(Most additionals will be taken on a case by case basis picking a price manageable by both parties)


-+- Emancipation Payment................................$500,000

(Payment can be made to remove all ties to Menaux Inc, allowing buyer to remove "Menaux Inc." from the name of the structure)


-+- Guaranteed Customers................................$5,000 / Visit

(Payment can be made to ensure customers [posts] in your establishment. Payments can be made at any time during ownership and visits will be made in the order they were received. May be bought in bulk up to 10)


-+- Liquor License................................$25,000

(In order to have a bar that serves alcohol built buy Menaux Inc., you must pay a liquor license, figured into your total)


Menaux Incorporated would like to stress that once you have paid for your business, we have no say in what is said inside it. We will not attempt to regulate your business outside of the rules set in place by payments and contract.


Menaux Inc. offers a $100,000 bonus payment made in your name if your thread reaches 50 posts aside from "Guaranteed Customers" employed by Menaux Incorporated.


If you would like to make an order please use the form below and mail to:


731 Plymouth Ct.

Los Angeles, CA

C/O LaceyMenaux
[Mail to Me]

Click to Mail


FORM TO USE:


Name Of Business: ____________________

Options (Check all that apply)

[] Exceeding 1000 Square Feet? [words]

[] Emancipation Payment?

[] Guaranteed Customers?

[] Liquor License?

Small explanation of your business to get us started: ____________

__________________________________________________________________


We will get back to you as soon as possible with your total, once half of which is paid we will begin work on your establishment.


Not in affiliation with any established "businesses" in the seven fine cities.




Well, I guess that pretty much covers it. Lacey looks left and right and then up at the rain.


Now taking requests and questions...

Lacey watches some people raise their hands and begin to speak.
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Sao listens to Lacey speak about the old business that both of their fathers worked on. He approaches Lacey after her speech is done.


It's nice to see that you're trying to bring our fathers idea back into play. I'm totally down with this and do whatever I can with the business. Effing w00t.

Sao lights a cigarette and walks away.
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good luck with this bussiness adventure of yours, it must have worked in the past for you ti be bringing it back so I hope it pays off for you again.. good luck! :D
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Thank you, A-Mac :)
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