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| Through My Fathers Eyes Pt. 1 | Started by: WickedClown on Apr 04, '09 07:27 |
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My father was the type of person who would put others before himself and he was all about the family. I never really got the chance to know my father while I was a child. He always told me that he had to go away on business trips and that my mother would be taking care of me. He would kiss me on the top of the head and then he would leave. Before he killed himself he told me his whole life story and it went a little something like this. I punched him on the right side following up by a left to the jaw. I got him on the ground and started stomping on him. I hear the sirens blaring and so I look at the guy, kick him one more time in the face for good measure. I booked it around every corner that I could find until I found an alleyway that led to the main street. I ran until I got into the street, where I began to walk and not attract too much heat. As I walked down the streets of Detroit, I noticed a group of guys had been following me. They were a couple of guys that were big in build and had been following me from a fight I had just won against a low ranking gangster from no family what so ever. I turned around and looked at the biggest guy and shot him a mean glare. Eclipse What the fuck do you want? I have seen you following me for the past 20 minutes can I help you with something? I alternated looks between all the men and the smallest out of all of them spoke. I guess he had sensed that I was kind of creeped out by everything, especially since I had just got done with a fight. Unknown Man I'm sorry, I had no intention to scare you . Will you please come have a word with me in a place that's a little more private? Eclipse Hell no, I don't know you. If you want to say something to me you can say it right here. Unknown Man Well let me introduce myself then. My name is Obizzle, I am the Don of the family The Relentless. I have come to you because you have made a name for yourself as a fighter, taking on the biggest and meanest that comes around. At this point I knew who he was, he was one of the captains for godmother Marietta and he was very well known. I let out a small smile because my name had gotten out there and I became known as a brawler. I still had no idea what he wanted with me so I just continued to act smug. Eclipse Ya so what's your point. I do what I have to do to survive around here. If you are really from here, you know its not easy to live out here. Obizzle I do understand, this is where I grew as a kid. My parents and I had a house right next to Vinnie's Pizza parlor. Anyway we came to see if you were currently working somewhere, or if you were unemployed. Eclipse No, I do not. I just finished High School and I have been looking for a job but nobody wants anything to do with someone that JUST got out of high school. Obizzle let out a small laugh and a big smile. I was still confused as to why I was being talked to by one of Lady Marietta's captains, it didn't make any sense to me. They usually have one of their men come down to talk to someone and get their deals done. But not Obizzle, I guessed he wanted to see what I was like first hand. Maybe he wanted me to help him with something, I didn't know so I just listened. Obizzle Good because I know you have no family and I know you have nowhere to live, I was wondering if you would like to be with me and my family. Of course you are going to have to work to earn your money and make it up the ranks. I looked at him with a shocked look on my face. Then a small smile. I looked him dead in the eyes Eclipse Are you serious? Is this a joke? Why would you come to me and offer me a position in your family? I said in a calm voice. Obizzle looked like he was taken back by everything. The questions of his word, and the fact that I was looking him dead in the eyes. But he knew that I didn't know the rules of the Mafia and the respect that needed to be shown to him because of him being the Don of the Relentless Family. So he continued. Obizzle I am very serious, and no this is not a joke. I've heard a lot about you, your loyalties to your friends and the ones you care for most. Plus it would be nice to have someone of your caliber to take my drugs around for me, that way my product doesn't get stolen. I think you would be a great addition to the family. We really need you. I smiled big because I knew that if I joined this family I would be set for life, that I would no longer have to constantly look over my shoulder. I would then be safe and I would finally have a family to call my own. |
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Harold Listens to his member speak of his father Bravo Bravo WickClown.. Very nicely written my friend. You father was a great man for all of his life i knew him. Harold walks upto his member and shakes his hand.. Cant wait for the next bits... |
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| Reply by: Death-Knight at Apr 04, '09 07:41 | |
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| Well written and enjoyable - looking forward to part 2 | |
| Reply by: Alessia at Apr 04, '09 11:54 | |
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