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| Mysterious Diary | Started by: Dynin on May 21, '09 17:26 |
| You're walking along the streets of New Orleans, whistling a happy tune to yourself. The city's beauty is clearly visible as the sun goes down, and the buildings spring to life as they light up. You feel content and safe in the city, since you think you know the city inside out. Well, you don't. Inside the older buildings dark secrets are kept, that reveal how the city once was. As your walking down the endless street, you notice an alley that you've never noticed before. Being as curious as you are, you decide to explore. You reach for your gun, and slowly make your way through the alley. The buildings here are forgotten, crumbling and falling apart. Some of those lights flicker now and then, but does anyone care? At the end of the alley, a large factory stands. In front of the locked door, you see a little briefcase, which was commonly used 13 years ago. Opening it, you spot some cash, a picture of a smiling family, and a small, bent diary. You pick it up, and decide to have a closer look. On the first page, there is a single line, indicating the owner of the diary. Sadly, the name is unreasable. But the diary isn't empty. Inside, a whole thrilling story awaits, revealing how hard it once was. | |
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| HAHA WRONG CITY | |
| Reply by: Dynin at May 21, '09 18:06 | |
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looks puzzled and then says to the young man What? |
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| Reply by: Premier at May 21, '09 18:25 | |
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The first page is covered in blood, but you can still make out the scribbles. February 3rd, 00:00 Oh god.. OH GOD.. OH GOD!. They just.. they just killed them.. They just killed my mom and dad. Just like that.. why? WHY? Oh god, I have no idea what to do.. They're looking for me.. damn, I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHO THEY ARE!! It went by so fast... I walked upstairs to his office, and I heard him being questioned, and then gunshots rang. I heard both of my parents scream.. they're dead for sure. I'm lucky enough that I wasn't caught running to the cellar.. I could actually just run as fast as I can, but I see armed people through the windows.. I'm gonna die. why?. WHY??? I don't deserve this! I was doing better in school, and I'm right about to finally graduate.. Oh wait, I see a car driving up to the house. Oh crap, there goes the gunfire.. |
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| Reply by: Dynin at May 21, '09 18:30 | |
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February 3rd 06:00 six hours ago I was hiding in the cellar, and now I'm suddenly in another mansion. What happened was that my uncle came, and killed every armed person in my house. I never knew my uncle was capable of that. To be honest, I actually didn't know anything until now. My Uncle is the godfather of the town, and my dad never wanted me to see him. I guess I understand him. And I really miss him, I really do. And my mom. Oh, I still feel like shit. My parents are gone, and its only after they died is when I realize how I need them. My uncle told me more though. These strangers were actually another mafia family in New York, and the Don decided to become the godfather. He didn't know where my Uncle is though. My Uncle is a smart Godfather, moving all the time, so nobody can track him. He only appears when the city really needs him. But his intelligence cost the live of my family. The Don decided to ask us, his relatives. How he knew that, beats me. I only know he was an ass, and good riddance to him. I just don't understand why my dad didn't tell him, because then they wouldn't be dead. Shit, I have no idea what to do now.. I'll think tomorrow, I haven't slept all night. |
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| Reply by: Dynin at May 21, '09 18:39 | |
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February 6th 13:00 I must say, this place is cold. Yeah, I'm not at my uncle's anymore. He sent me away from New york, says its to dangerous. So now I am in New orleans, and I have no fucking clue what to do. Im probably going to check out the different stores, since my uncle actually gave me a thousand dollars. I can live off of that easily. |
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| Reply by: Dynin at May 21, '09 18:50 | |
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February 12th 16:00 New Orleans is actually a very nice town. I've got a job as a constructor, and I'm getting a decent salary. Not like I want to become a millionaire. First I have to get everything straight. I actually got some friends. Recently, while I was at the bar I met this Italian guy name Michael. He seems very nice, and he actually some money so I can rent my appartment. I asked him if I should pay him back, but he just shook his head. Well, I'm off to the bar again to meet with him and Tony. |
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| Reply by: Dynin at May 21, '09 18:57 | |
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February 18th 12:00 Awww shit, I'm on the run. Again. Michael actually wanted me to pay him back. When I told him that he shook his head when I asked him if I should pay him back, he simply punched me in the face and said that I SHOULND'T give him the money. Instead, he expected me to know that I HAVE to give him back. After a real hard beating he offered me a deal. I do a little job for him. I rob a liqor store, and bring him all the money. Well, Today I decided to do it, and I managed. But the cops saw me. Now I'm running away. Oh crap crap crap crap crap CRAP! Hopefully another miracle will happen.. |
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| Reply by: Dynin at May 21, '09 19:02 | |
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February 23rd 23:00 I just came out of jail today. I was caught, but it wasn't just that. It was more than that. I managed to escape, and I snuck into the bar. I found Michael, who greeted me with open arms. I told him everything, and I saw his face change for a split second. Then he told me he wanted to show me his reward, and lead me through an alley. The reward was as bad as a lump of shit. He said that I would be to dangerous to be his friend, and he and his friends beat the crap out of me with crowbars and baseball bats. Then he called the police, and I was arrested... Bastard. Well, my sentence wasn't that long, and Jail wasn't that bad. Now I need to get back at this shithole Michael. I asked around, and I found out he's actually a Capo of the Savorani family. Well, I got myself a threat already, but I want back the fuck down. He' gonna get it allright. |
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| Reply by: Dynin at May 22, '09 05:45 | |
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The next page of the diary is spluttered with blood, and this time, you can't read anything. Fortunately, the next page is somewhat in perfect condition March 1st 15:00 Well, the meeting went well. I am a part of the Spetiato family. The Don told me it means ruthless, so they do anything to get to the top. Wiping out other families counts, so I'm in luck. All of this happened thanks to Luigi. I wrote about him before, but I'm not kidding, he's the Luigi everyone imagines if someone says Mafia. A man with his hair slicked black, and a nice, armani suit. Unlike Michael, Luigi isn't a two faced bastard. He introduced me to the Drug market, and showed me where I can rob places and how to get to money. He's got my back, and I got his. All is going well for now. For now... |
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| Reply by: Dynin at May 22, '09 05:53 | |
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March 5th 19:00 We tried to rob a post office, but with little success. Michael's crew showed up, and we had a gang fight right in front of the postal place. Until we finally beat the bastards, the cops came and we had to flee ourselves. Damn. I heard that Mike is now the Don of his family. This is becoming real dangerous. I'm not protected. I'm just a mere goomba, and random Hitmen are trying to kill me. I think I need to go somewhere else. But where? Not in New York, because my uncle won't allow it. I think I know. Philly. My family exists there too, so I won't have to buyout or some shit. But I can't just run. I have to fake my death or something, so Michael will relax and won't take notice of our family anymore. I hope... |
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| Reply by: Dynin at May 22, '09 07:42 | |
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| feed back please :D | |
| Reply by: Dynin at May 22, '09 08:43 | |
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On the next page, you find an old newspaper article, which is still wet. The articles are blurred out, except one. You can barely read it, but you figure out that it's about a tragic death of four people who were killed by a car bomb. Under it, it says that New Orleans had erupted in a humongous gang war. March 7th 22:00 First of all, I was completely wrong. Right now I'm in Philly, yeah, but still. I think I ruined New Orleans. Two days ago, me and some mates of mine were driving up to collect some protection money from the gentleman's club. While we were driving though, I heard some strange ticking. I knew straight away it was a car-bomb, and I wanted to use this chance to fake my death. I sped up, so I could go on to a bridge before the bomb explodes. My mates started getting worried, and I told them to calm down. When we were above the bridge, we were technically safe, because if we would jump out of the car, we would land in the water. Damn, I'm such a klutz. I forgot to tell them when it was too late. I quickly yelped "CAR BOMB", and jumped out. If I jumped a split second later, I would be where my mates are right now. Swimming with the fishes. While I was falling, I saw the car explode, and the bodies of my family members were flying down into the water like me. But they were motionless, pale, and all the blood was pouring out of them until they smashed into the water. I landed pretty safe I must say. I escaped unnoticed, and I flew over to Philly. Before I left, I managed to pick up this Newspaper article. Seems like my Don got pretty angry. Oh shit, what have I done? |
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| Reply by: Dynin at May 22, '09 10:09 | |
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March 13th 12:00 A lot has happened since I wrote. The gang war is still going on, and now it has escalated so much that whoever wins, gets control of the city, since the Godfather of New Orleans was killed by one of Michaels men. The Spetiato family is now only in New Orleans too. The Philly part was abandoned, so Philly won't get involved with the war. Now I'm a part of the Esticoloni family. Frankly, I have no idea what that means. Now I need to work my way up before I can do anything else. |
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| Reply by: Dynin at May 22, '09 12:02 | |
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| Its pretty good, well structured, lots of interesting events. Not sure about Michael being promoted from Capo to Don in a month though. | |
| Reply by: NewBestFriend at May 22, '09 12:11 | |
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well, he's a backstabbing son o a bit**, thanks though |
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| Reply by: Dynin at May 22, '09 12:20 | |
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| New posts are coming soon.. | |
| Reply by: Dynin at May 22, '09 12:30 | |
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March 23rd 15:00 Sometimes I just zone out and think how my life was before the assault on my house. Like right now. I was doing pretty good in school, my teachers didn't beat me as much, and I had good grades. I also met this nice young lady, which I really liked. But now everything is gone. Man, I really should stop zoning out. Like yesterday, it could have been fatal. We were robbin' a jewelery shop, I suddenly stopped running and was standing still for a while. The cops almost caught up to me. Damn. But thank god that jewelery owner was as stupid as a sack of shit. He still is giving us protection money, even though we totally sacked his place. Well, I have another meeting at the social club. Better get going. |
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| Reply by: Dynin at May 22, '09 14:05 | |
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March 30 14:00 They say that your first killing is the hardest. It's not. It's the easiest, it's just as you imagine it. Today, a new guy turned out to be a lie telling fuck. He was actually a part of a small Philly family that tried to make it big by jumping our don. Well, I was lucky to notice that he was pulling out his piece before he actually got the chance to shoot at the don. I simply pulled out my gun, and popped a cap in his ass. Serves him right anyway. Now I'm a made man, but our family is in danger now. All the small families are teaming up on us, but hey, they can swim with the fishes together if they really want it. |
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| Reply by: Dynin at May 22, '09 15:09 | |
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April 12th 15:00 Damn, being a Capo is pretty hard. And those bitches really want it don't they. Our businesses our suffering greatly, and it's just because of the goddamn new guy. I don't know why Boss gave him to me, but if he actually brought his piece along, he could have taken care of those shitheads straight away. But NO, he just HAD TO FORGET. Oh crap, maybe I am letting this get to my head to quickly. I've read some news reports about New Orleans, and it just got worse. The Savorani's made a huge gain by taking over the casino. Now all the money is wired to them, and they'll be bribing the hell out of the cops in no time. I just hope the Spetiato's come up with a back up plan or something. It hurts even more when I know I can't show my face when they are in need of help. Seriously, I really have the urge to let go of Philly, and move back to New Orleans with my mafia, so we can aid the Spetiato's. But right now we have our own war to wage. And we ain't going down, that's for sure |
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| Reply by: Dynin at May 22, '09 16:05 | |
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