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| The Bank Job | Started by: Jay-C on Nov 04, '07 18:07 |
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Jay is sitting in his house, wondering weather he should go through with what he's about to do. He has played it over time after time in his mind, yet he can't seem to come to a decision. He walks into the kitchen, and makes himself a shot of whiskey, maybe this'll help him think. After taking the shot, Jay comes to a decision. He's going to go through with it, he's been talking about it for days, and today is the day he must make his words become actions. Jay walks up the stairs into his bedroom, where his gun lies dismantled on his bedside table, he walks slowly over to the bed and sits down, picking up each part of the gun, every so carefully, and putting it back together the way he had dismantled it 2 hours previously. After finally fixing the last of the parts in place, Jay bends down and tucks the gun into his sock, covering it over with his trouser leg. Jay stands back up, and picks up his overcoat, wrapping it tightly around himself. It was a cold afternoon in winter, and it had gotten dark around 5:30 PM, so Jay needs to be dressed up warm. He walked out his bedroom, and closed shut the door behind him, walking down the stairs, he shivers, as the cold as already hit him. Jay walks to the front door, opens it, and walks out, onto the cold Chicago streets, looking left, then looking right, and finally walking straight on, into the night After five minutes walk, Jay stops, turns to his right, to face the Chicago Bank. Looking up at it's tremendous height, Jay starts to consider going home. But he pulls himself together, and looks at the doors to the bank. He was robbing that bank tonight, or he would die trying. Jay couldn'e pull off a complex job like this though, he needed some accomplices, it was a big job, as the bank was always heavily guarded, right through the day and night Jay walked a little further, to come to a street corner, he turned around and walked in the building, whose door was diagonal to the corner of 5th street. He walked inside, and took a seat, 3 chairs away from the door, just as planned. The room was quite small, and Jay had only ever been here once before, but it was not a good memory, so he tries never to speak of it Jay had been waiting a little over 15 minutes, when someone came from the back, and walked straight past Jay, without acknowledging him, he walked straight out the door, onto the cold streets. So Jay waited some more, another 15 minutes past, which became 30 minutes. Then finally, as Jay began to give up hope, footsteps could be heard just outside the window, and the door slowly began to open, triggering off the bell on the top. His first accomplice, had finally arrived... |
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| slipping through the door, head down, looking at the black and white tiles on the floor, I nearly run into Jay. He reaches out to steady me, I briefly look up and smile at him, then continue through the door to the ladies room. Where I enter a stall, step onto the commode after locking the stall door. Waiting for the building to empty. | |
| Reply by: bite_me at Nov 04, '07 20:35 | |
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| Georgio walks up...nods at Jay and enters the bank and sits on over in the corner next to a window...with his hand resting on his .44 | |
| Reply by: -Georgio_Dugas- at Nov 04, '07 22:29 | |
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Jay sits still, waiting for his accomplices to arrive. Mad with the fact that they hadn't already got here. "Maybe they got confused, and went to the bank instead. Oh my gosh, here I am sitting in the old corner cigar shop, while they are in the bank. I pray to god they haven't done that" Jay shifts in his seat, and reaches into his inside pocket to take out a flask filled with a little something. He swigs the flask back not once, but twice, and replaces it back in the left inside pocket of his jacket. |
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| Reply by: Jay-C at Nov 05, '07 02:55 | |
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as Jay looks around a bit more he notices something in on a chair in the corner and as the ligth flickers a bit he notices a man in a rather well tailored suit and an extraordinary watch on his left hand before the figure hi Jay. wondered when you were gonna see me... but then again i allmost fell asleep. what's taking them so long? i've been here for over an hour allready. |
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| Reply by: LaughingJack at Nov 05, '07 03:58 | |
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Jay looks round to see LJ, one of his close friends, and someone he often doesn business with, he stands up and walks over to him, taking a seat two chairs away, as to not atract any unwanted attention "They should be here soon, hopefully. I've been here for 40 minutes now. I just hope they haven't gone to the wrong place. If they aren't here in 20 minutes, I think we'll have it do it on our own. You up for that?" |
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| Reply by: Jay-C at Nov 05, '07 05:05 | |
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| *Guardian makes his way threw the front doors,He takes a deep breath and see's his buddeys sitting there waiting to make a move.He looks at the nods his head and moves towards the oposit side of of them to keep things on the low.As he's sitting there he notices a camera in the corner,In his pocket he has a can of black spray paint.He stares to his friends to wait for the right time to make his move on taking out that camera so that the faces don't get caught on camera.* | |
| Reply by: -TheGuardian- at Nov 05, '07 05:11 | |
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| With all three men facing away for the camera, it was the perfect oppotunity. Jay held out his hand, in which Guardian put the black spray paint. Jay shifted back wards, and quickly darted underneath the Camer's view. He sparyed the face of it until none was visible, he moved silnetly back to the two men, gave Guardian the spray paint back. And sat back down. They still needed one more person | |
| Reply by: Jay-C at Nov 05, '07 06:50 | |
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Georgio walks over to the three guys and sits in a chair 3 chairs away Im here...you guys ready? |
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| Reply by: -Georgio_Dugas- at Nov 05, '07 07:10 | |
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Jay looks to his right, then again to his left. To catch eyesight of the other three men, he would be pulling the bank job with. He gave them each a quick shift of his eyes, and they all got the message, Jay made his way to the door, and stepped out onto the cold Chicago streets, the bank was just 100 yards away, and Jay quickly scanned the area for civilians, there was just one, a young man he had never seen before, so he stepped back, so he was out of sight, instructing the others to do so too. "Right guys, this is it, the time we have all been waiting for. We will be entering the Bank, in 15 minutes. Does anyone need me to run over the plan again?" |
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| Reply by: Jay-C at Nov 05, '07 10:50 | |
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| Jack is kneeling by the. saying only one thing before he goes into his prayer you know me jay | |
| Reply by: LaughingJack at Nov 05, '07 13:12 | |
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Jay looks around once more, and seeing that no civilians are there, he raises his voice a little, just enough do the three men can hear him "Here's what we're going to do. First, I will walk in casually, and check how much security is there, I was pretend to look at something else, and then casually walk back out, telling you three how high level the security is. Next, LJ, you will walk in, and sit down on the chairs to the left hand side. After 2 minutes, Georgio will follow, and take a seat next to you. 5 minutes after that, Guardian will walk in, and LJ, you will stand up, and walk over to the queue for a withdrawal, I will then walk in, and as I do, Georgio, you must walk to the queue also. 1 minutes after this, Guardian's, you walk into the quese, and I shall follow." Jay pauses, and takes a deep breath, while gulping some of the excess saliva in his mouth. "Is everyone following me so far?" |
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| Reply by: Jay-C at Nov 05, '07 13:52 | |
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| *Guardian looks to Jay-c with a calm look.He nods his head assuring him he understood the plans.He looks to the other 2 guys ok guys this is the big day.Be smart and we should all get out ok.Guardian kisses his cross and says AMEN!.Alright guys im ready when you are.* | |
| Reply by: -TheGuardian- at Nov 05, '07 20:14 | |
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"Right after we are all in the queue, we shall wait until one of us it at the front, at which time, we will tilt our heads down, and all 4 of us shall appaoch one withdrawal window. The person behind the desk should then say something, which at that point, we each take out our guns, and we each take one clerk hostage, just by merely pointing the gun at them. Hopefully, from this they should co-operate, but in times like these, they might not, at which point I shall raise my gun up and take a warning shot towards the ceiling. If still o co-operation. One of us will have to kill a clerk. After that they should forfeit over the money. If they don't, well, We'll cross that bridge when we get there." Jay sighs "Right, I need the OK from each one of you before we go into this." |
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| Reply by: Jay-C at Nov 06, '07 03:22 | |
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Jay listens to Guardian "Nice thought mate, but I think with all four of us taking a hostage, there won't be any reason for the guards to shoot us, if they do, we pop onr in the Clerk's head. This is a violent approach I know. However, you can't rob a bank without having a little bit of violence in you. "Right, now, I need the OK from all three of you on the plan. Ok?" |
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| Reply by: Jay-C at Nov 06, '07 11:59 | |
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Jack, still in prayer suddenly stops and turns. both eyes wide as hell and looks straigth at guardian no fucking way mait. NO FUCKING WAY!. we're not going in like a slaugtherhouse! have you LOST YOUR GOD-DAMN MIND?! seeming to have snapped Jack's hand flies from his foot to to guardians head, pistol in hand and hits him hard, knocking him down. Jack now stands over Guardian with a pistol aimed straigth down to his face- why the breathing hell do you want a massacre? WHY?! seeming to have regained some control of himself Jack shakes head and puts his gun back in his belt, then proceeds to help Guardian up now here's what we'll bloody do. we walk in a little after each others, i sit down as close to the door as possible. jay, you walk up to the counter, get in line do whatever and wait til you get to the front. then you calmly in a low voice explain to the teller that you're there to make a forced withrawl. you'll show her your gun without letting anyone else see it. if she gives you shit, laugh out loud. i'll come over and ask if there's something wrong. i'll keep it calm as long as i can. guardian i need you to get to the back. they'll have surveilance. Bite_me should allready be there if he hassn't been fucking about, in witch case you'll have to improvise. NO BODDIES. no fucking dead bodies unless you absolutley HAVE to. ok? you'll meet us back at the Skylar bar. do not loose those tapes. if you have to, burn them. just don't let anyone else get to them. if possible, don't let anyone see you. we just need ANY random person to hear ONE gunshot and the police will be here in just a few minutes. Giorgio. i need you near a guard. if the teller gives any troubble you'll put a gun at the back of his head. i'll also be backup. i'll lock the door if anything happens. and besides my outrage, don't doupt i'll have your back. even if i have to shoot one of the guards. if you need a hostage imidiatley you'll take me. make it look real if you have to. try not to let the bluff show. allrigth? everyone got that? in and out. no fucking around or killing people over no good reason. everyone agrees? |
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| Reply by: LaughingJack at Nov 06, '07 15:14 | |
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Seeing Jack fly off the hook at guardian, Emachines steps over to the both of them. He points 2 guns, one in each of there directions.He gives Jack a kick and pushes Guardian back. Jack you better learn that JayC is running this here shindig. I catch you trying to take things into control without speaking to JayC you may find yourself Swimming. We have enough to worry about right now, to have to deal with you to boneheads acting up. Lets get things settled.Do the job, come back and count our earnings Capishe?! Emachines lowers his gun and waits for JayC next orders |
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| Reply by: Emachines at Nov 06, '07 15:24 | |
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Jay, having being sat down on the window ledge of the building, looks up to Jack, to see him telling else what to do. So he stand up, and steps nearer to him "As a matter of fact, I don't agree with that. For a start, don't go blowing your mouth off at anybody, not me, not Guardian, not nobody. Understand that first please. Secondly, I have already gone over the plan, my plan involves no dead bodies. As I have explained before, and it kills me to have to explain myself twice, when I thought I made it prefectly clear the first time, we go in, in the order I have said, then we will queue up, naturally, acting casual, as we approach the withdrawal window, we get out guns ready, and, when we reach the windows, we each take a Bank Teller, not kill them, take them hostage, just by pointing out guns at them, there is no need to grab them by the throught and what not, just merely point the gun, and explain to them that we are making a forced withdrawal." Jay takes another deep breath, seeing Jack's face pull some puzzled looks at Jay plan "I'll say it now, if you don't like my plan, you don't have to be apart of it, you can walk away right now, and have nothing more to do with the money we make after it. Right, now that's cleared up, after we have the hostages, we can order one to open the bank vault, at which time, Guardian, you walk around to the vault, and start shifting the money into the bags I have prepared. Me, Georgio and Jack will keep out guns on the remaining Teller's, making sure they make no sudden movements. "After you have all the money, give each of us a bag, and, still keeping you guns on the Teller's, we walk slowly backwards out of the bank, and out onto the streets. Once out, we run, basically, that seems to be the wuickest way, so we'll do it, just run, straight away, the bags will be tied up, so no money will be lost. "Now, we need a place to meet up afterwards" Jay scrathces his chin, trying to think of a place. "The HQ, we'll meet up in the HQ, there should be a room spare, so we'll go into their and count our findings, spliting the cash evenly between us all." Jay sighs, and looks between the other men, taking a deep breath "Everyone understand all of that?" |
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| Reply by: Jay-C at Nov 06, '07 15:40 | |
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| you asked for suggestions, Jay. i only gave mine and guardian had a planned that INVOLVED shit hitting the fan. just thougth my idea was better but i guess we'll do it your way. you're running the show after all. | |
| Reply by: LaughingJack at Nov 06, '07 16:08 | |
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"I'm just saying I didn't agree, seeing as though you blew your mouth off at him, when it wasn't needed. Anyway." Jay looks to his right, where Emachines is stood, minding his own business "We have a new addition to the team, Emachines will be the getaway driver, so, instead of us running off down the street, which I must admit, was a pretty poor idea, we will be jumping into the back of the van that will be parked outside the Bank when we get out. "Emachines, you good with that? Being our getaway driver an' all?" |
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| Reply by: Jay-C at Nov 06, '07 16:11 | |
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