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| War:A poem about it. | Started by: Made_Man_Hopkins on Jun 14, '09 13:43 |
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After the sun rises many bow there heads. The dead is buried forever lying in their caskets which is now there permanent beds. Solders,capos and even the family heads are all now Dead,Dead,Dead.We mourn their deaths but we must move on for another day comes and another chance for the dollar.We look around and there faces are no were to be found. They ask what happen to them,so and so all we say is war. Then the heads drop with the mouth wide open.Some say they are better off left dead.The others forever cry in their minds about it but others celebrate about after the fact they shot up and killed peoples family and friends. In the end both lose people they cared for,even get tattoos of peoples names and faces.War can't be described because you remember the loved ones which are now amongst the dead. War can also bring a new just like a wildfire for it makes way for new changes and even some familiar faces. But the ones who surived the war are glad there still alive....... R.I.P the dead. |
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*stands and watches as Hopkins recites his poem* *feeling good to be alive, Marley lites a joint, but thinks, "Hell, I would have lite one even if I wasn't feeling good"* *looks at the joint because once again Marley is having these conversations in his head* *looks up a Hopkins* Nice poem man! *heads off down the alley* |
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| Reply by: JamaicanMob_Marley at Jun 14, '09 13:50 | |
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| Thanks and I don't even do poems irl... | |
| Reply by: Made_Man_Hopkins at Jun 14, '09 13:57 | |
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| A fresh start I like it. | |
| Reply by: Giovanni_Verrazano at Jun 14, '09 13:58 | |
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Johnny stops to hear the poem. Not too shabby. May the fallen R.I.P. Johnny lights up a smoke and continues down the street. |
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| Reply by: Johnny_Kraven at Jun 14, '09 14:02 | |
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Thanks and I don't even do poems irl... Well then, this war has helped you unleash your inner poet. Good job. |
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| Reply by: JenifferAlison at Jun 14, '09 14:04 | |
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Nice poem bro, nice seeing someone else with poetry skills =D Keep on writing bro. |
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| Reply by: Skitzo at Jun 14, '09 15:09 | |
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| I do love seeing poetry in the streets- thank you for your efforts, sir | |
| Reply by: Kates at Jun 14, '09 18:39 | |
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| very nice poem, thanks for it. | |
| Reply by: SirVico at Jun 14, '09 18:41 | |
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| Thank you all for your kind words! | |
| Reply by: Made_Man_Hopkins at Jun 14, '09 22:01 | |
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Nice poem, It means alot. Thanks |
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| Reply by: Alice at Jun 14, '09 22:04 | |
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| nice | |
| Reply by: Evil_Blac at Jun 14, '09 23:03 | |
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