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| Biting the Hand That Feeds You (MODERN STORY) | Started by: Darkhawk764 on Jun 26, '09 19:30 |
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Joseph Michael Moretti stood in the front row of the boxing gym, yelling at the ref from outside. He'd paid money from his own pocket got the referee to call bad calls so that Joseph's boxer won. The ref was now calling bad calls against Joseph's boxer. Finally, Joseph's boxer hit the canvas after plenty of torment from his opponent AND the ref's calls. Joseph quickly climbed up into the ring after the KO and got the boxer back on his feet. After his two thugs got up on the stage, Joseph turned on the ref. "What the fuck? Why the hell did you do that shit?" asked Joseph, getting in the ref's face. "Somebody else paid me more," said the ref quietly. Joseph was pissed off, and he had a right to be. He had five grand riding on this match. God knows how he was going to get more money. He got his boxer into the car with him and the two thugs, and they went to the small office that Joseph had rented with the winnings from the first fight. He threw himself down in the comfortable leather chair he'd recently bought. The boxer stood before his desk, with a thug standing by the door as a bodyguard. "I thought you had that fight rigged, you asshole!" yelled the boxer. "I did, idiot! Someone else paid him more, though. I was double-crossed by somebody, because I made it known to my contacts it was rigged," said Joseph. "Fuck you, I'll get someone else!" said the boxer angrily, and he walked out. Joseph sat there with his chin on his hands in a steapled fashion. "Giovanni, kill him. I don't give a fuck how you do it, I want his ass DEAD. If anything gets found out, I'll get an investigator to 'miss-place' the evidence. Go, now, and send Alessandro in," said Joseph. "Got it, boss," said Giovanni, who left. Alessandro came in after the door shut. "Yes boss?" asked Alessandro. "Teach the referee a lesson. I don't want him to fuckin' double-cross me again," said Joseph. More parts coming soon. |
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oooo nice begining Darkhawk. I can't wait to read the rest :D |
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| Reply by: Death-Knight at Jun 26, '09 19:37 | |
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Giovanni walked up to the boxer's apartment. He picked the lock to the front door and walked in. He could hear the sound of a shower. Thinking quickly, he grabbed a toaster from the counter in the living/dining/kitchen room. He made sure his gloves did not leave fingerprints on the aluminum surface. He opened the door to the bathroom quietly and plugged the toaster in. He ripped aside the shower curtain and threw the toaster into the tub and ran. He heard the screams of the boxer as electricity coursed through his veins, hitting his heart. And it was all over. Giovanni escaped through the fire escape after closing and locking the door, and returned home. Boxer Commits Suicide was the headline. Alessandro had located the referee and proceeded to bust his knees with a tire iron, breaking them in as many ways possible without taking his ability to walk permenantly. He and Giovanni met up at a cafe and went to Joseph's office. A red Mercedes Benz was parked outside. They knew from there something was wrong. They drew their pistols and went inside to the office. Two men in suits stood outside the closed office door, holding double-barrel combat shotguns. "Sorry, you cannot enter this office, by order of the renter," said one of the guards. "The man who owns this office is my boss, Don Moretti," said Giovanni. "No, my boss is Don Moretti. He owns a compound in the high-rises," said the guard. Alessandro lifted his gun and dispatched the two guards in anger, and he kicked the door open. A caporegime in a finely-tailored suit stood there with a pistol to Joseph's skull. "Take one fuckin step and he dies," said the capo. MORE TO COME. |
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| Reply by: Darkhawk764 at Jun 27, '09 10:34 | |
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very good. |
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| Reply by: XxSoniixxX at Jun 27, '09 13:01 | |
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Nice read,keep it coming |
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| Reply by: AlfieJr at Jun 27, '09 13:09 | |
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Very interesting. Your are keeping me hooked. Can't wait for more to come. |
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| Reply by: Dexter_ at Jun 27, '09 13:27 | |
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"Put your guns down. NOW!" yelled the ordered the capo. Giovanni kneels down to put his gun on the floor. But, when he goes down, he pulls a knife from his sleeve and points it at the capo, who began to laugh. "I have your boss in a choke-hold with a gun at his skull, and you can only come up with a knife? Pathetic," he said. "This knife is special, though," said Giovanni, who pressed a little button that was hidden beneath the hilt, that couldn't be pressed accidentally. The blade shot from the hilt and struck the capo in the face. "You fucker...you motherfucking son of a bitch..." said the capo, as he released Joseph. The capo fell backwards, as blood squirted from the injury. Joseph stood up. "Thank you, both of you. You really deserve a promotion. Giovanni, you are officially my underboss. You are a very intelligent man, and you have made your bones here. As have you, Alessandro. You are now my first official capo. Before I give you the land to control, we have to get a neighborhood or place for us to inhabit," said Joseph. And that they did. Over the course of two years, through extortion and bribery, they took control of five neighborhoods and one business district, which brought them plenty of cash. Yet the promise he'd made himself never left his head. Joseph would avenge the murder attempt on his life, and called all his contacts. Finally, the consiglegie of Don Esposito's family called him. "Joseph, I found out who put the hit on you. You won't believe me, either," said the consiglierie. "Who?" asked Joseph. ONE MORE PART. FIND OUT WHO BETRAYED JOSEPH. |
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| Reply by: Darkhawk764 at Jun 27, '09 14:37 | |
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"Put your guns down. NOW!" yelled the ordered the capo. Giovanni kneels down to put his gun on the floor. But, when he goes down, he pulls a knife from his sleeve and points it at the capo, who began to laugh. "I have your boss in a choke-hold with a gun at his skull, and you can only come up with a knife? Pathetic," he said. "This knife is special, though," said Giovanni, who pressed a little button that was hidden beneath the hilt, that couldn't be pressed accidentally. The blade shot from the hilt and struck the capo in the face. "You fucker...you motherfucking son of a bitch..." said the capo, as he released Joseph. The capo fell backwards, as blood squirted from the injury. Joseph stood up. "Thank you, both of you. You really deserve a promotion. Giovanni, you are officially my underboss. You are a very intelligent man, and you have made your bones here. As have you, Alessandro. You are now my first official capo. Before I give you the land to control, we have to get a neighborhood or place for us to inhabit," said Joseph. And that they did. Over the course of two years, through extortion and bribery, they took control of five neighborhoods and one business district, which brought them plenty of cash. Yet the promise he'd made himself never left his head. Joseph would avenge the murder attempt on his life, and called all his contacts. Finally, the consiglegie of Don Esposito's family called him. "Joseph, I found out who put the hit on you. You won't believe me, either," said the consiglierie. "Who?" asked Joseph. ONE MORE PART. FIND OUT WHO BETRAYED JOSEPH. |
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| Reply by: Darkhawk764 at Jun 27, '09 14:37 | |
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Looking forward to the last part |
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| Reply by: Dexter_ at Jun 28, '09 01:33 | |
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Com' on where is the last of it. |
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| Reply by: Giovanni_Verrazano at Jun 28, '09 22:02 | |
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Well I guess we aren't gonna be getting an ending to this story unless he can write from beyond the dead. It's a shame, I was looking forward to it |
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| Reply by: Dexter_ at Jun 30, '09 03:26 | |
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WORKING ON THE END. ENJOY THIS TEASER. Giovanni drew his gun and put it to the back of the man's skull. The man smiled, and even began to laugh like a madman. With the speed of a cougar, he spun and grabbed the gun. He aimed the golden-plated Desert Eagle at Giovanni's face, the other gun aimed at Alessandro. Joseph walked into the room with his own pistol pointed at the man. "Looks like someone's about to die, Joseph." |
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| Reply by: Mr_Fever at Jul 01, '09 16:44 | |
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Still waiting for the last part, can't wait. |
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| Reply by: XxSoniixxX at Jul 01, '09 17:43 | |
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AHHH write faster. I am really enjoying this. |
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| Reply by: vito_the_bull at Jul 01, '09 21:12 | |
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Great story, love to see some more later down the road. |
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| Reply by: crypler at Jul 01, '09 21:34 | |
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"Who?" asked Joseph. "Your uncle, the one who introduced you to the boss. The one that got you started in business." "Ah fuck...not...not Uncle Vinnie?" asked Joseph. "Yeah. He's planning an attack on your neighborhoods. Don Esposito is sending as many men as he can spare to protect your land. Take a few men and go confront Vincent." Joseph hung the phone up and put his men at his most important buisness. He, Giovanni, and Alessandro, met up at a restaraunt and headed out to Vincent Moretti's mansion. The car stopped outside the open gates as cars poured out, not paying any attention to them. Joseph's car pulled inside and parked. The trio split up and went in search of blood... Lied, there's one more part. |
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| Reply by: Anthony_de_Luca at Jul 09, '09 18:41 | |
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hahaha uncle vinnie XD nice story by the way i like the suspense |
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| Reply by: Visali at Jul 09, '09 19:40 | |
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Thank you, there is definately going to be another part. The above part is only another teaser. |
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| Reply by: Anthony_de_Luca at Jul 09, '09 21:08 | |
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The last part Should be up by Saturday. |
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| Reply by: Anthony_de_Luca at Jul 10, '09 03:05 | |
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this is a great story, fasted pasted action, i look forward to the next installment. |
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| Reply by: miste_crumpetos at Jul 10, '09 03:12 | |
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