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| Revenge | Started by: Telkin on Jun 28, '09 23:46 |
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Around three AM Johnny got a call from his ex-lover Susan, startled, Johnny answered from a deep slumber, "Hello... who is this? "Johnny it's me, it's Susan... I... I don't know what to do..." Sobs came from the phone and Johnny sat up. It had been months since Susan had called, this must be serious. "What's the matter, what happened?" Johnny tried to act casual, as if he hadn't already known. It was something to do with whats-his-name, little punk ass couldn't keep out of trouble. "It's Bobby, he... he got killed Johnny, they came and they killed him." More sobs came from the phone and Johnny took a deep breath before responding. "Calm down, who's they? What for? Where? Do you need me to come over?" Johnny didn't bother waiting for answers before putting his shoes on and saying "I'll be there shortly, don't go anywhere." It was a cold dark night as the wind howled over the barren streets. People had long since went to bed as it was three in the morning, only the party animals were wondering the streets of Boston. Johnny tried to act casual, but he was almost certain the people down the street could hear his heart pumping. His eyes were sunken into his face and his expressions quite plainly said "fuck off." This was a man on a mission. Part two coming soon, if demanded by the public. |
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for the 3rd time, GREAT READ. :D Can't wait for part 2. |
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| Reply by: Esham at Jun 28, '09 23:47 | |
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I'm demanding ! |
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| Reply by: Elaina at Jun 28, '09 23:47 | |
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Keep it coming |
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| Reply by: Dexter_ at Jun 29, '09 16:32 | |
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Pretty good do some more mate |
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| Reply by: Luca_Blight at Jun 29, '09 16:48 | |
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Really good read! The story has me sucked in already. |
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| Reply by: Hotsheh at Jul 01, '09 21:13 | |
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very nice Quick read dude, sill waiting for more reads from you. |
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| Reply by: Silvio at Jul 02, '09 10:24 | |
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Will you just post it man. I want to read what happen next |
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| Reply by: AlfieJr at Jul 02, '09 10:37 | |
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I really enjoyed reading that. I'd love to see part two. Thanks for taking the time to put that together, it was very entertaining. |
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| Reply by: Sidious at Jul 02, '09 11:35 | |
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Nice! Now lets see what becomes of all this. |
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| Reply by: JamaicanMob_Marley at Jul 02, '09 11:37 | |
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Not a bad read. I'm interested to see what builds onto this. |
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| Reply by: Absolut at Jul 03, '09 00:29 | |
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