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| The Walk Of Life. | Started by: Silent_but_Deadly on Jul 17, '09 08:30 |
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Sile walks around the streets and see's alot of things that are usual and common. She has been working on a poem forĀ a while and decided to bring it to the streets, especially because she has yet to see someone do that. She gets up on a car roof and says: Walk with me, the path of life, After she finishes her poem, she gets down off of the roof, and waits to see what people have to say about it. |
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You have some pure talent there, That actually brought back quite a few memories. |
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| Reply by: The_Shrike at Jul 17, '09 08:42 | |
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wow.......................that's just.......amazing |
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| Reply by: K-Mart24 at Jul 17, '09 08:50 | |
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Rumour has it that if you share those first few lines with our friend Google he recognizes them instantly... Why claiming credit for something you did not wrote? |
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| Reply by: ScipitaRourke at Jul 17, '09 09:00 | |
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Probably because im the one who wrote it, thats one my old peoms hun. |
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| Reply by: Silent_but_Deadly at Jul 17, '09 09:03 | |
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My apologies if thats the case, I recognized the poem and Google directly loaded me with information over the poem. |
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| Reply by: ScipitaRourke at Jul 17, '09 09:11 | |
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Oh, no its no problem, I would be upset if someone did put up a poem that was by someone else. I take poems seriously, because it's my passion. But thanks! ;] |
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| Reply by: Silent_but_Deadly at Jul 17, '09 09:13 | |
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Nice poem. Its always nice to read one but.. personally don't take it to bad but.. I 'dislike' Poetry. |
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| Reply by: Death-Knight at Jul 17, '09 11:41 | |
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Grabs a stray google by the tail and carries it out of the street, releasing it in the alley. Wouldn't want a passing car to run over it ya know. Nice stuff there Sile, well done. Thank you for sharing. I caught your gig down at the coffeshop the other day and particularly like The Gypsy Violin. You should put together a combo to back you up and play out more. |
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| Reply by: Judge_Holden at Jul 17, '09 12:21 | |
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Thanks guys! Smiles, & to Death-Knight- Ha, your fine, some people just dont like poetry, people like different things. But still thanks for reading. & to Judge_Holden - Thank you as well, & I think I did see you in the audience, snapping your fingers for me. I will be sure to bring back the Gypsy Violinist. Smiles |
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| Reply by: Silent_but_Deadly at Jul 17, '09 12:43 | |
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Paisley, after having heard the poem, stares into the emptiness, clearly lost within his thoughts and memories. After a couple of minutes, he blinks a couple of times and says softly I write poetry myself from time to time, but this is way beyond anything I've ever written. amazing. Thank you. |
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| Reply by: Paisley at Jul 17, '09 18:00 | |
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Aww, thank you so much. That means alot. |
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| Reply by: Silent_but_Deadly at Jul 17, '09 18:12 | |
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Old_Bag wipes a tear from her eye as she remembers a long gone love Just beautiful, Silent_but_Deadly. |
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| Reply by: Old_Bag at Jul 17, '09 20:08 | |
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