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Buisness District Competition Final Started by: Death-Knight on Jul 25, '09 16:21

Harold steps out of his car and slowly makes his way to the stage where he will announce the winners of his competition

Good Afternoon everyone. I am here this evening to annouce who will be taking what title and what prizes home with them today, but first off I would like to apologise for my lateness of this announcement of the winners as I was needed elsewhere.

As you might of known over the last 2 weeks I have been hosting a Detroit District Buisness Competition. Which is where good mafioso's like yourselves have had to come up with a blue print for any buisness you like. Send that blue print to me and myself and my other 3 judges have judged them to deicde which three will be going into the district. However after those entries where entered the total of those entries where just two. So us judges decided to just let those two run wild for a week long in the Buisness district for three titles. Those titles were

# Best Presented Business.

# Best Customer Support.

# Most popular Business.

The two people that were choosen for their buisness blueprints to be place were Starshine and Toni_Sipriani these two lovely people had thier buisness run for a whole week with customers entering and leaving the building. These two buisnesses have been watched closly by myself and my judges and that are by far very good buisnesses and I would suggest anyone to visit them if they stop by the wonderful city of Detroit.

So.. after more then twentyfour hours of judging from the four judges we all came with our final descion. We have decided that for

Harold signals for the drum roles

Best Presented Business goes to....... Starshine. Congratulations Starshine, your buisness was the best looking one from the outside and the inside. Nicely designed I must say, and the next one for

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Best Customer Support goes to..... Starshine once again. Congratulations Starshine, you dealt with your customers the best and you are by far one of the nicest managers around, also if you are wondering who that mysterious man sitting in the corner by the window of your buisness he was one of my men watching how you dealt with your customers. The next title is

Harold looks at his driver and signals for the drum roles to begin

Most popular Business and this prize goes to..... Toni_Sipriani. Toni won this prize because he had the most customers visit his buisness. However Toni himself is no longer with us. The angels of Heaven have taken him and may his Soul Rest In Peace, as for his prize I shall not be having it for myself and Starshine will not be reciving it either. Toni doesn't have any offsprings either so I am generously going to give it to Toni's family leader who looked after Toni while he was alive.

ScipitaRourke shall be taking Toni's prize as he is no longer with us and im sure it was in his will to give it to his family if he was to leave this world. Rest In Peace Toni may the angels of heaven guide you safely to a peaceful afterlife.

Well done you Starshine and ScipitaRourke. You both walk away today Seven Hundred Thousand Dollars better off and my local police sherif Bob, has also agreed to lock away a big bunch of criminals for you whenever you want in any city and you can ask Bob to do this favor for you at least ten times. Congratulations once more and I will be sure to be visiting your winning businesses the next time I am in Detroit.

Harold gets his check book out and writes the checks and hands Starshine her check and ScipitaRourke Toni's check. He shakes their hands firmly and heads back to the front of the stage

Now with all that said I must return home to my office to finish off all the piled paperwork on my desk. Goodbye everyone and have a safe journey home.

Harold heads down off the stage to go pour himself a well needed glass of Scotch

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Your accountant makes note that $1,400,000 has been wired to Starshine from your account. Success! You have transfered 10.00 credits to Starshine

Your accountant makes note that $700,000 has been wired to ScipitaRourke from your account. Success! You have transfered 10.00 credits to ScipitaRourke

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Congratulations Starshine and ScipticaRourke.. Very well done and very well deserved.. :)

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Congratulations ScipticaRourke and Starshine

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Congrats Starshine and ScipticaRourke

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Yaay CONGRATZ mom, and og scipticaRourke

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Congrats Scipita for Toni's bar.  I am sorry that he is no longer with us but I surely enjoyed visiting his place.  And thank you DK for allowing me to join this competition.  I am excited to bring in new customers to Detroit!

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Congrats Startshine and ScipticaRourke

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Congratulations ScipticaRourke and Starshine, Well done great work.

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Great work StartShine and ScipticaRourke.

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