Beep, Beep I honked my horn because the driver in front of me was taking all day.
Finally when the driver moved on I sped up to Langley Avenue. My first stop was to collect from the Sweet Life Bakery which my father owned. This was no hassle. I wanted to surprise my father by saving him the trip of getting his collections on his own. When I arrived at his house I noticed the front door was open, as well as a mysterious car outside. As a precaution I went back into my car, and removed my Tommy gun hidden from plain sight. I silently crept into my father's house, and there it was his lifeless body with a huge puddle of blood under him. There was a man hovering over him with another one in the corner. I fired ballistically like a mad man. As far as I could tell one man was dead, and another was wounded.
When I confronted the wounded man I asked him who sent him to kill my father he replied with fuck you. So I aimed my Tommy gun straight at his private area. I told him this was his last warning, and he spit in my face. So I squeezed the trigger and said bye bye to having kids. Since I realized I was getting no where I put the Tommy gun in his mouth, and emptied my entire clip. I picked up the shell cases from my tummy gun, and called some family. I contacted Sidious he told me not to retaliate until we knew who was responsible. Some family helped me dispose of the dead thugs bodies. Then we drove the abandoned car to a nearby chop shop. I then cleaned took up the Bloody carpet. Later I contacted the paramedics. The sheriff then questioned me. I claimed I did not see the attackers after that the police questioned a few of the family then left.
After pulling some strings around, Larry the corrupt government official told us that the Fat Taco family was behind the murder. They were an up and coming family trying to make a name for their selves so they murdered my father. After word got out an extremely huge wave of violence occurred. My families, along with the Corleones torch all of their businesses so they retaliated in drive-bys killing thirty of our family members combined. Then I had brought some of my most trusted members, and we had bombed their main compound. Which all of them happened to be in for their Don's birthday. Sidious was facing life for racketeering, extortion, murder, and leading a criminal organization.
I knew it was a huge wait lifted off of his shoulders when he found out the informant trying to lock him up was in that mansion. We didn't have any problems with another family for a long time after that.

What do I say to this?

I'm very fortunate to have someone such as you take care of my light work, Luciano.

Even more impressive, you did this all while ranked Thug.

Bravo, sir.

From: beckybamacat

it was neat

KingBenny enters the house his firend MrLuciano once lived. He sees his son standing inside. He steps over the corpse of his old friend, a couple of dead Fat Taco Family mobsters, and a pair of balls to where MrLuciano_is standing

"How's it goin', kid? I was a friend of your fathers. He was a good man."

KingBenny puts his hand on MrLuciano_'s shoulder and the two begin to weep openly.

"Unfortunately, I have some bad news MrLuciano_. That snitch informant you tried taking out... he made a file before he was killed! It's being kept in a safety deposit box downtown. If that file gets into the wrong hands, I don't need to tell you what could happen. MrLuciano_, you gotta get that safety deposit box! One way or another! I wish I could help but I need to fly out of town for business that requires my immediate attention. Good luck, MrLuciano_. Your father would have been proud."

Your stories Mr.Luciano_ are umm...different. Kinda hard to read with it all bunched up and nearly looking like one huge sentence. Maybe you should read LittleEveys little flyer you can find it under Help. Titled Rules of Engagement or something like that.

wow i thought it was pretty good...it maybe could have been a ltl longer but i donr know how long these stories are suppose to be i just would have liked to known how you found out wat family attacked your dad

but other then that i enjoyed it :)

Nooo! MrLuciano_ shouts out this cannot be happening.
I will have him taken care of if it costs me my life!
MrLuciano_ is so upset he empties an entire bottle of vodka in twenty minutes.
He receives more Intel from King Benny and locates the safe house. A new up, and coming member is a former Military World War one sharp shooter. So he is asked to do the job. He succeeds, and makes a name for his self in the Mafioso world.