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| Hotel Havoc (Part 1) | Started by: McKnighter on Jul 28, '09 10:48 |
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It was a dark night in Detroit, and McKnighter was walking on the streets. He kept both his eyes observing the surrounding area. He checks that his trusty Tommy Gun and his Colt .45 was still in his coat, and he spots the building. It was a normal hotel, a few floors of rooms. A bit older than some of the other ones McKnighter been to, but that doesn't change anything. McKnighter spots a black car parked across the hotel. A driver and a passenger. "TBK- and The_Hulk" McKnighter thought. He waves at the car, and the lights flicker. A woman steps out of the passenger side and walks towards McKnighter. They both give each other a hug, while TBK whispers into McKnighter's ear. "It's a go, the target is in his room." McKnighter pats her back, replying "Then lets get to it." The pair walk into the lobby. It was empty, besides a man behind the front desk. The two walk up to the desk, and TBK- ring the bell. The man looks up, annoyed. "May I help you two?" McKnighter puts his arm around TBK- and replies. "My lady friend here and I need a room, one night." The man grabs a key and hands it to McKnighter, which gives him a handful of cash. The man was confused and looked up, but they two were gone. TBK- pushes McKnighter into the wall, smirking. "Me? With you? In your dreams." McKnighter, looking hurt, snaps back. "Oh come on, it was the first thing that came to my mind." TBK- sighs and the two reach the third floor. They both stop when they see a man standing outside of a room. Here we go, the target is a wise ass guy leading his little gang to wreck havoc on some businesses that is protected by the Detroit Family. McKnighter was told to take care of it. Of course, he had to drag in a few friends to help him out, McKnighter hates to do things alone. McKnighter pokes TBK- and heads to the room number listed on the key. TBK- walks over to the guard, and begins to talk to him. McKnighter unlocks the door leading to the room that he bought. He takes out his Tommy Gun, and puts a barrel clip into it. He walks back outside of the room to find the guard dead. TBK- was cleaning off a knife. "There's at least five men in there, this one makes six, this is the right room." McKnighter nods to TBK-, which she pulled out a .45. McKnighter goes up to the door and kicks it open.... To be continued... |
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Great story mate, you never were good with the ladies lol. |
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| Reply by: -Soniix at Jul 28, '09 11:37 | |
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the tbk charactor owns. |
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| Reply by: TBK- at Jul 29, '09 13:40 | |
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Good story, when is part 2 coming out? |
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| Reply by: JoeTheGun at Jul 29, '09 16:00 | |
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In a week or so. Maybe longer. Things are starting to come up. |
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| Reply by: McKnighter at Jul 29, '09 20:47 | |
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Part 2 coming up tonight. |
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| Reply by: McKnighter at Aug 08, '09 20:54 | |
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Epic |
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| Reply by: try-6 at Aug 11, '09 14:14 | |
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I can't wait for Part 2. Nice story. :) |
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| Reply by: Xena at Aug 11, '09 14:16 | |
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part two is out |
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| Reply by: try-6 at Aug 11, '09 14:32 | |
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