CRASH

You look around for the disturbance, it is generally pretty quiet in the headquarters, everyone going about their business. You look down one way before turning your head and seeing the bosses guards all alert like there is an attack.

Then you see Brandon storm out of his office, asking questions to people in the hall, listening more closely you hear the name Calibre, and where is he, only to see the boss storm towards Calibre's office.

The walls shake once more as Brandon kicks open the door, before stepping into the room. Looking around you notice everyone now abuzz with curiosity,since you have never seen the boss this mad before.

"Where is he!" comes from Calibre's office once more, stepping from the office he looks around before pointing at you, and then calls you over.

"Get Persephone, now. I want her in my office now, i don't care what she is doing" he says to you before turning and walking back towards his own office.

You rush off, full of curiosity, only to find persephone's office empty. Quickly you make your way in the opposite direction towards the bedrooms, as you reach the hallway where persephone's room is located, you look up and see her exiting her room followed by a gentleman you had seen around, you think his name was Hades.

As you rush up to her, she looks at you and you wish you werent there.

"Sorry to interrupt you Mam, but the boss sent me to get you straight away, he looks like he is about to kill someone. He wants you to go to his office straight away he told me." As soon as you tell her, Persephone turns and quickly kisses Hades goodbye before sprinting off towards the bosses office. As you turn to leave, Hades clears his throat to get your attention before saying. "This doesn't go any further, if it does, expect a late night visit from me, and it wont be as pleasant as it was for Persephone.

After leaving Hades to find his own way out, you quickly run back to find out what is going on, as you turn into the corridor where the bosses office is, you notice that the door is closed but you can still hear him talking on the other side.

"Do you know where Calibre is" the first words you can make out, in the bosses deep voice.

"I don't Boss, whats up, is there a major problem?" said in a quiter voice, your guessing it is Persephone replying.

"HE IS THE PROBLEM! Did you know he has been stalking ScipitaRourke, STALKING my sister! Is everyone laughing about it behind my back?"

"Did you know he is harassing her, no matter where she goes, that he is flirting with her, flirting with MY SISTER?" He emphasises the last words by yelling them.

"Ive been looking over the books, have a look. Do you see how much he has made in the last 2 weeks, 100 thousand, only 100 thousand. But guess what, i found out where the other 900 thousand went, it was  spent on a gift for my sister, a necklace and a set of earrings he tried to give to her."

"So, did you know about any of this? Have you seen him lately? He is never around, gone at odd hours, always busy, but when you do get him, it is like he is drunk, like he is in another land."

You have trouble making out the reply by Persephone, but you hear a couple of words,  part of the sentence, "How can you stop him", then it is all quiet in the room for a minute, before you hear the boss speak again.

" Find him, I want you to get some people together, and find him. I want him bought back to me, and then i will deal with him, I don't know how yet, but it will be unpleasant".

As you are straining to hear more, the door pulls open fast, and Persephone strides out and looks around and points at the closest group of people also listening into the conversation. Gesturing for them to come over, she quickly tells them what to do before they all split up and go running out of the headquarters.

As the hallway empties of people, you can hear the boss talking to himself, "what to do". "What to do, how to punish him".

He looks out the door, and notices you watching him, he takes a drag of his cigar, before striding around and closing the door.

This is a new competition from the Millennion family, I would like you to complete the story, i want you to describe how Persephone and her searchers find Calibre, and also how he gets punished.

The competition closes at 00:00 on the 5th of August, and there will be a prize of $500,000 and 1 Crackdown.

All Entries should be in RP, and just reply here.

A fine stunning woman walks past the Brandon Heat mansion. With an arrogant twist she throws her hair behind her shoulders. She checks her make-up in the little mirror she always carries with her and notices a man standing behind a car watching her...

Ah if that isn't Calibre she thinks.. he can watch all he wants.. after all he gave her those stunning cartier jewelery... have to please the boy you know !

Without letting Calibre know she spotted him she walks up the stairs to the front door of the mansion and rings the bell.

A few moments later the maid opens the door and escorts her to her brothers office...

Hiya Brandon,

Whats the emergency? She asks innocently.

I want to know whats going on between you and Calibre! Has he been harashing you? Making you feel uncomfortable ? What is going on sister?

ScipitaRourke plays with her necklace whilest listening to her brother ranting and ranting on about family honor...

Brandon Brandon, she sweetly calls his name, relax brother relax ! You know this just happend, really, I didn't do anything to provoke this, honestly! ScipitaRourke pouts. You know me right?

From the corner of her eye ScipitaRourke notices Calibre watching them through the window.

Well sister, Brandon speaks, you're a known flirt and you know it !

Brandon watches Scipita walk to the window...

Now now don't be harsh Brandon, Scipita speaks whilest playing with her hair, it's not my fault the guys like a real Italian girl !

Name one thing to prove I provoked this situation... I am just minding my own business as usual... Uff isn't it hot in here? You should really get some air conditioning installed, ScipitaRourke complains whilest taking off her jacket..

She sits down again at Brandon desk, assuring Calibre is still watching.. Ooh if Brandon only knew..

Pip pulls up to Brandon Heat's mansion and nods at the guard at the front gate as he winds his window down

Hey, is ScipitaRourke inside, important family business, I need to talk to her asap?

The guard nods and opens the gigantic gates to the mansion as he waves Pip up the driveway

Pip speeds up the driveway... and as he gets closer to the mansion, he notices a figure lurking behind the office which he instantly recognises as Brandon's office from previous family meetings.

Pip pulls the car to a halt and continues on foot, as Pip stalks closer to the figure he notices it is Calibre..

Pip sneaks closer to Calibre and as he gets closer he glances through the window of Brandon Heat's office. He sees his boss ScipitaRourke sitting in the office in plain view, not one of her bodyguards in sight.

Pip stalks closer to Calibre with more speed and as he nears Calibre he punches him in the back of the head knocking him clean to the floor.

Pip grabs Calibre by the scruff and shakes him

What the hell are you doing here?? Are you planning a hit on ScipitaRourke??

Pip shakes Calibre for answers, Calibre speaks

Huh? Calibre mutters ... no you idiot.. I was just watching her.. Isn't she the most perfect human being...

Pip glares at Claibre unhappy with his response and grabs him onto his feet and drags him into the mansion

Pip bangs on the door of Brandon Heat's office, without waiting for a response he barges in, pushing Calibre ahead of him.

Scipita and Brandon jump startled from their seats and Brandon draws his pistol

Here, I found this outside spying in on you two.

Pip pushes Calibre towards Brandon, and Brandon lowers his gun

Scipita I need to talk to you immediately, someone has come forward with information about the corpse in the tub...

Pip turns to Brandon

Apologies about the intrusion Brandon, I didn't know what else to do with him.....

ScipitaRourke glares at Pip, first he drives allmost over the guy and then drags him inside...
Oooh if he only knew the fun he just ruined !

She quickly pulls her jacket of the chair and binds her hair together..
I guess play time is over she sighs.

Well Hello Pip, what a coincidence... news on the body? Lovely !

She glares from Brandon to Calibre and back to Brandon...
Her brother just sits there speechless..

Perhaps someone should help him out how to deal with this situation.. rumour has it the person that comes up with the most suitable solution gets a 500,000 award plus a CD...

Surely there are some people out there with some advice what they would do if they were in his shoes?

Visali walks out of a near by alley and lights a cigarette and takes a swig from a flask full of an unknown substance.....he looks around and watches as Persephone and a gang of mafia behind her...

"Somethings going on.." Visali says to a near invisble figure behind him.

The figure comes forward and nods its one of Visali's hitmen...

"shall i get some information then?" the hitmen says already knowing the answer he begins to follow Persephone and her doppelgangers..

2 1/2 hours later

Visali waits in his of

fice when the hitmen finally walks in...

"There after Calibre...Brandon told Persephone to find Calibre and bring him to Brandon...and find a suitable punishment"

"i see...well its none of my buisness then..." Visali spins his chair to face the wall

"Theres a reward.." The hitmen smiles wickedly

Visali turns around in his chair with his eyebrows raised...

"hmm find him and....never mind ill find him my self" Visali puts on his over coat and grabs his gun

Visali sits on a bench in front of Brandon's Mansion and waits for Calibre to show him self...he knew he would soon enough and at that moment Calibre shuffled behind a car..Visali smiled and walked behind Calibre.

"Like what you see?"

Visali hits Calibre on the head with the butt of his pistol and he drops cold. He whistles and gestures towards the dark alley. 2 hitmen come out and pick up Calibre.

Visali walks towards the mansion and opens the door 3 guards draw there guns

"I have a package" Visali says pointing at the unconcious man

The guards nod and Visali continues to Brandons office and opens the door to find brandon there expecting persephone him and his guards draw there guns. Visalie gestures towards the door and a hitman comes in and throws Calibre at Brandons feet

"I heard you were looking for this"

Brandon looks from Calibre to Visali for a few minutes then nods

" Well being your resourceful enough to find him what do you suggest we do with him..he cant go unpunished"

"Eh ill have my boys rough him up a bit and leave him at the front of your mansion"

Visali walks out of the office and whistles for his hitmen to come with Calibre they walk back to the dark alley

"Take care of him just nothing fatal..."

Visali leaves his hitmen and calibre and heads back to his office..hes earned a nice bottle of vodka....

Ive had some good replies so far, 6 days to go before the winner will be announced.

Cecil is Sitting Near a Corner, Slightly buzzed from the 14 shots of Vodka he drank over at the Club, Persephone walks up to him,"i need your help" Cecil looked up and said Doubtfully, "what does a Powerful Dame like yous need help From a Shulb like me?" Persephone Replies with "i need help Tracking this guy down" and hands Cecil a Picture of Calibre, Cecil Says Confidentially,"Interesting, how much do i get paid?" Persephone Replies With "nothing, He just wants to see Calibre" Cecil says "heh, oh well, am i able to Beat on him?" Perse Awnsers "Yes, but you cant kill him" Cecil Grunts and said "you Peeps always have a Catch to somthing but hey, im in a mood to kick some ass, and i dont think a Defenseless Homeless Person is gunna Do this time" Cecil Grins his Demonic Grin while he Grabs his Ball-peen hammer.

6 1/2 Hours later....

Outside Brandon Heat's Driveway Cecil Parks his Car, He gets out, he's Covered in Blood, His Ball-Peen Hammer Bloody, Slightly Shimmered, and a Bloody Bag inside, He also has an Animalistic Face, The Gaurds Looked and Readied Their Guns, Cecil Said "Calm down i mean no harm, well to Brandon i Dont, to the Possibly dead guy in the Bag, Yes, yes i do" i nodded and they opened the Gates, Cecil Knocked on the Front Door, The Maid is Horrified from the Carnage i fought in, it looked like i kille eighty people, while i nearly Killed off one,She Shows me the Room where Brendon's in and Cecil knock's, no Awnser i Knocked again and Persephone awnsers, She is More Horrified than The maid becaus she knows what i did to look like this... she said "what happend?" Cecil says "i just id what i did, calm down he's not dead, he's got at least 11% of movement in his entire body" Then Cecil walked in and Washed myself off in the Shower, Brandon was EXTREMLY satisfied of what i did to Calibre, the man paid me 2 million bucks! just to swat off any guy that tries to get his Sister.

5 days to go, some nice entries so far.

2 days left.

it sucks =/

na na just joking lol couldnt even be bothered reading it all =/

"it sucks =/ Reply by: Don_Gianluca at Aug 04, '09 00:56

na na just joking lol couldnt even be bothered reading it all =/ Reply by: Don_Gianluca at Aug 04, '09 00:57 "

These are further examples of what NOT to do, for the record. I will hit you wish the multiple violations of the Renaissance Street Conduct thread later. My apologies, Mr. Heat.

no problem Miss Kate.

Success! You have transfered 1.00 credits to Pip

Your accountant makes note that $500,000 has been wired to pip from your account.

Thank you to everyone who entered, the winner of Millennion's first contest is Pip.

Tips his hat

Thanking you sir, great story :)