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| Hotel Havoc (Part 2) | Started by: McKnighter on Aug 08, '09 21:50 |
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McKnighter nods to TBK-, which she pulled out a .45. McKnighter goes up to the door and kicks it open....
"Fuck! Russians followed us! TBK-, the door!" TBK- face stiffed when she heard that Russians were here. "Is our driver dead?" McKnighter nodded, but as TBK- turned to face the door, a Russian was there. He fired a round into TBK-'s chest, and time froze. McKnighter watched as time slowed the fall of TBK-, as she hit the floor. He looks up to see the Russian point his gun at him. McKnighter squeezed off the remaining rounds in his Tommy Gun and the Russian flew back towards the door. McKnighter, still in shock, walked over to TBK-'s body and kneels down. Her eyes went to McKnighter's face, and his eye's went watery. She smiled, that kind of smile that you know that the person is moving on. The smile weaken, then became blank. McKnighter, at this point, was shedding tears over his fallen friends. He put his hand on her face and closes her eyes. He then kisses the forehead and whispers "Rest in peace." McKnighter comes back to reality and realizes that the Russian is still alive, coughing. In a rage, he picks up TBK-'s .45 and walks over to the Russian. "You fat fucks are going to burn in hell!" The Russian coughed, then laughed. He was resting on the side of the wall. McKnight shoves the barrel of the .45 into his left eye socket and fired. The Russian's brains painted the wall. McKnighter walks over to the living room and takes a seat on the couch there. The two whores run out of the room as he wipes his tears away. "How could I have let this happen, my friends, killed. All because of me." McKnighter took the .45 to his chin, and put his finger of the trigger. He then looked back to the body of TBK-. He stared in sorrow. He slowly lowers the gun. A 'ding' was heard and McKnighter stands up. His eyes burned in revenge. He picks up his Tommy Gun and reloads it. He puts the .45 in his coat. Thinking quickly, he takes the phone book by the wall phone in the room and takes the belt of one of the fallen gang members. He places the phone book on his chest, and uses the belt to strap it on. As he finishes, he turns with his Tommy Gun to meet the Russians. Two of them run into the room, guns blazing. McKnighter fells two slugs hit the phone book, but do not make contact with his body. He fires his Tommy Gun into the bodies of the Russians. They fell, only for the other three to rush in. McKnighter jumps behind the couch and blindly fires into the crowd. His bullets hits their mark, dropping one of the Russians. The other two tear up the couch with bullets. McKnighter crouches down and peaks around. He fires at the shins of the Russians, and both fall to the ground. McKnighter then stands up and empties the rest of the barrel of bullets into the two Russians. Having killed the Russians, McKnighter takes the stairs down to the lobby, where the man behind the desk hides under it. McKnighter slaps down a few dollar bills and walks out of the hotel. He sees The_Hulk laying in the street. McKnighter sighs, and opens the get-away car's door, and hops in. He drives off towards his Jazz Hall. "The job is done, but at a horrible cost." McKnighter thought.
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That was really sad. |
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| Reply by: -TBK at Aug 08, '09 22:01 | |
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On the bright side my death owned the hulk's. |
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| Reply by: -TBK at Aug 08, '09 22:02 | |
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I'm sorry I take back all other compliments this was the best damn story i ever read. |
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| Reply by: Jackson-Jax-Teller at Aug 09, '09 10:15 | |
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