Before i was in a town of  darkness i was one of  thoose member of the gang!! but i was not a bad gangster i was just doing business as what others do.. i was doing a good deal everyday ...money is fast ..but as i walk into the valley that they called death road..i go there to have business with the BIG BOSS..and then that was a good deal ..PERFECT! but when i go walk and go out of the building and i go to the bridge and someone just came on to me and SAID!!

well well weell!!! ive heard of you boy!!youre so good!!but then the BIG BOSS told me to KILL you ..cause the BIG BOSS was afraid that maybe im gonna take his place...then the guy SHOOT me into the chest!!

BANG!!!

BANG!!!

BANG!!!

and then i fall down to the river ive got shot on my chest 3times..but i was wearing a bullet proof... 

and the news scattered that the GOOD GUY is dead!!!but then i was alive but i was wounded ...someone help me pull me from the river and take me on the hospital and then after that they take me to the secret hideout!!!and then the 3days im awake,,,and a guy just introduce him self...

"IM GAIUS a DON on this PLACE...im glad that youre alive kid!! i just dont want to see a person die...and introduce his family members...

and DON_GAIUS offered me to join his family...

I TOLD HIM THAT WOULD BE AWESOME ...Now i owe you my life...i will be protecting this family with all my heart..

and we shake our hands together and say"""""LONG LIVE GAIUS"

Ahh a heart felt respect and loyalty. But maybe a brief proof read could have helped. Other than that I can tell your loyalty stretches to the gods.