I took a step out of the car and signaled at the driver to park in the nearest spot to the bar.As i entered the bar i noticed a man staring at me,i was going to teach him some manners when the bartendergreeted me,and made me forget all about it.

"Hey Loui let me get a beer" I say to him lighting a cigar. The bartender brought me a beer and went on with his business. I took a big gulp of my beer when that strange man approached me.

"Are you Koolaidmann?" The strange man asked."Who wants to know?" I reply. And hesitantly he answers,"Don WilliamDeSantis would like to speak with you." He replied yanking me from my seat before I could protest.

We walked out of the bar and the man shoved me into the trunk of his car.It seemed like hours before we stopped,nearly suffocated the trunk popped open and i was pistol whipped."Who the fuck are you?" I demand,blood running down my face. "Thats not important" The man replied. I was feeling kind of woozy from suffocating half to death and being pistol whipped,everything was blury,but I know my HQ when i see it. When i saw all the unfamiliar men outside my HQ i knew something was wrong.

The man started to take into the main doors of the family compound when i saw blood on the concrete outside of the main entrance,i started to freak out,I pulled out my gun,not hesitating to pull the trigger,unloading a whole clip on the strange mans crew,And i noticed i was out of ammo and the man and driven away,but i had to find the Don.

Running through the compound looking for my Don and the rest of the family,i heard a ticking noise,And i then noticed,IT WAS A BOMB! I ran into the Dons room and saw Don WilliamDeSantis sitting in his chair,wires though his throat,barely breathing,i ran to him,quickly but carefully removing the wires out of his throat,I then ripped my tie and used it to stop the blood,I ran down the stairs of the HQ with the Don in my arms,i made it to the door and then...

BOOM!

The Bomb had exploded, i woke up hours later,under police custody. Being Convicted of over 20 murders,one of them being Don WilliamDeSantis.

I now spend the rest of my life,rotting in jail,for a crime i didnt commit,besides defense,i killed nobody,they set me up,destroyed my family,and my life.Even if i did get out,Id be considered a trader and end up being whacked.

I dont know what happened to that man,but i tell myself everyday,"Ill get out someday,and I will get my vengeance and prove myself innocent of killing the Don.

Nice action filled story, but I have to say I'm a bit confused about "unloading a whole clip on the strange mans crew" -> "i killed nobody" I guess you ment you didnt kill anybody execept them (minus the guy who drove away).

I hope next story will be about you getting out of jail and getting your vengeance!

yeah i know that was a typo...haha and i thought you could edit after you post...but i guess not,and yeah there is gonna be a part two on this. what i meant to say was:

I killed out of defense,i didn't murder anyone.

so..yeah...

Great story, I am looking forard to read more.

Interesting story

Ah I see. Thanks for clearing that up :P

Good thing that will continue your story. Feels like first part in the movies "where everything began" :)

i really like the story

Thanks...yes Koolaidmann (writer of the story) is my grandfather...