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A short walk. Started by: Juancarlo on Aug 18, '09 02:33

As you walk past the "Dark Alley Way" as it is known around these parts, your curiosity get's the most of you and you slowly start walking down it's creepy hallway like walls. All around are bums, hookers, drug dealers and everything else that can be found in the dark parts of New York City. A man comes running up to you obviously high on something or just drunk he starts screaming at you..."Dude i need a hit man, please just $50 i really need a hit! "You feel sorry for this man and you carefully slide him a fifty dollar note making sure none of the other people see you, as soon as the man gets his fifty dollar note he runs of into the direction you came from.  You make your way towards an empty warehouse you hear loud gunshots erupt from it "I am so not going in there" you say to yourself, as you quickly pass it without making a noise. As you near the end of the Alley you think to yourself what a good walk this was, getting ripped of by a junky, watching deals go down and hookers sell themselves you thought you've pretty much seen everything a late saturday night in the N.Y bronx can throw at you, but your thoughts are interupted by shouting and screaming, you run upahead to see what's going on and there it was, a hooker trying to wrestle something out of a mans hand "Probably Money" you thought as you withdraw your pistol and aim at the man, just as your about to pull the trigger someone or something slaps you on the back, you flinch pull the trigger  and spray a storm of bullets ahead, you turn around to see the junky you've given the money before stare at you in horror and make a run for it, you turn around wondering what was wrong and there it hit you, when the junky slapped you on the back you accidently fired a shitload of bullets into the hooker and mans direction, you see them lying in a pool of blood "Fuck'' you say, as you turn around and run like the wind. You sprinted about two blocks before stopping and catching your breath, you see the ambulance and about three cop cars racing past you, you lean up against the wall and nervously pull a cigarette from your pack and light it up. "Oh man that fucking junky, he knows that it was me!" you quickly snuff out your cigi before racing back the way you came from to see if you can find the homeless fuck. As you sprint to the Alley Way, dodging women, children and old men you, freeze in a sudden halt as you see the junky talking to police men. Your head feels heavy and you feel sick when you see the junky spot you and hear him yelp "That's him officer, get him" six policemen coming bolting straight at you, everything suddenly goes slow, you loosen the grip on your pistol holder and see the policemen grind to a sudden halt, they all reach for their pistols but it's to late you've already withdrawn your's and start blasting another shit storm, that's about all you remeber as you wake up in St. Alba's Hospital and notice a very old doctor writting notes on a pad, he looks at you and smiles before saying "Your very lucky to be alive my friend, those bullets could of easily killed you, but luck was on your side apart from a few broken ribs and a fractured right arm you'll be just fine" he smiles again and looks like he's waiting for a response, you slide your left hand across the bandage on your ribs and lift your hand up and give him the finger's, " Fuck you" you say as you drift of back to sleep.

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Nice,i hope to see more writing from you.

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Mean piece of writing.

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Nice one Juan keep it up

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I liked it alot. Keep writing more, but I gotta say in the future make some chapter divisions to make it easier to read. One big blob of text is never really inviting :). But about the context I did really like it, more more more! :D

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Thanks guys for the feed back, and in the future i will make spaces in between.

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