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VanizOne Started by: VanizOne on Aug 26, '09 01:44

Addressing his thoughts in the streets has always been tough for Vaniz, but he knows he needs to share this thought with the people.

He smiles when he spots the dumpster in which his grandfather had once stood in.

I'm going to try and keep this one simple, he thinks to himself as he stands on the dumpster.

He clears his throat in order to gain the people's attention. He smiles at the sight of familiar faces.

I might seem new to some of you, and the purpose of this story is for you all to know who I truly am.

At first, for him, it was just entertaining. Now, it's become a routine. He wakes up, puts on his glasses, and makes his way to the kitchen to eat breakfast. After that, he goes upstairs to his room and takes a bath. He puts on his contacts, his black As I Lay Dying shirt, black pants, black Converse shoes, and then dries his long scene hair. He looks at himself at the mirror for a long time, contemplating his own face, and finally exits his bathroom.

Almost instantly, he grabs his iPod from his shelf. He slides the earphones under his shirt, lifts both of the straight sides of his hair, and puts on his earphones. Closing his eyes, he lets the music take over him.

He's listening to music 24/7, with no exception what so ever. While hangs out with his friends, at school, and even when he's sleeping. It's so amazing how someone who is deeply in love with his own music can maintain his very good grades. For people in his own school who cannot figure who he is, one simply says "The dude who's always listening to music and wears metal band shirts".

It is also very true he has gotten into a lot of fights because of who he is. His parents disapprove his looks and music, but he knows that they still care for him. People on the streets look at him like a freak on a sideshow. Only who actually make an effort to walk up to him and say "hi" will found it that he's very handsome indeed, and the funniest, most caring person someone has ever met. Most of his girl friends enjoy being around him. It's more than obvious that he is treated differently in his society that's all about looks, but surprisingly enough, he is considered one of the most popular guys on school.

But aside from everything, he's still happy. As long as he keeps his music, his family, friends, and does not forget who he truly is, he is capable of being the happiest man alive.

Well I hope you all liked it, as it has been hard for me to tell the story in an understandable way. I would like to know what you think about it.

He smiles

Thank you for your time.

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What is an I..Pod?

Hades asks with a confused look on his face

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Vaniz looks down at Hades and smiles

Portable music player

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Metal music? is the fair construction workers of our fine DFP's banging there tools together?

Recro has a confused look

"Converse shoes is there some new modern counter fit going on past our noses?"

Wrong Era Vaniz No ipods no converse shoes, no metal in 1930

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Clears his throat

It was only storytelling

I apologise for any confusions...as reading this thread may be very confusing for you

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Slaps himself in the face

And again I'm sorry for not expressing myself in an appropriate manner

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OOC
Vaniz, the point everyone is trying to make is that this is the 1930's.  There are no threads posts ipod or anything of future tellings.

When you come to the streets you make a speech, the people speaking after are commenting in a verbal manner.   Next time try and stick with the times

Oh and never any ":)" or "lols"   I'll personally steal your lunch money if I see it done

Good luck with future speeches pal, I hope this helps.

LessThan smiles and walks off

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Nice dream. Maybe one day these 'portable music players' will exists.

Adriano chuckles to himself knowing that of course this will never happen

now stop dreaming and go back to selling drugs, there are people with needs ya'know.

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Straz thinks to himself and wonders what's an iPod.

"Good luck with the future rides space man!"

Straz laughs and apologizes: "It's quite alright VanizOne, next time you'll know and I'll be waiting for it."

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