As Toni stood there, inside the dealers house he remembered the calling card. He went over and puck it up, suprisingly the police hadn't been here, but the body was removed. Toni flipped the card, there was a number on the back it was increadibly small. Toni knew straight away who the number belonged to.

As he arrived outside the house, he heard screaming. He cautiously pulled out his colt 44. and opened the door. Toni saw him the man he was sent to kill. Toni was'nt a very good shot, but he raised his 44. and lined his sight, no wind to interfere and the target was less than 40ft away. Toni pulled the trigger a split second too late and the hitter had moved his head.

Toni fired 3 more shots, only one hit, but it hit his shoiulder. Toni ran out the door knowing that he had'nt completed his duty. He got in his car and drove off. About half a mile down the road he noticed a suspicious car had been following him for quite a while. Toni pulled into a bar and went inside for a drink, he knew the boss wouldn't like what had happened. Two men then entered the bar, each with one of their hands inside their coat pocket. Toni got up and went into the bathroom to sneak out the window, but it was too narrow. He had to take the risk. He pulled out his 44. and stepped out of the bathroom. He fired at the men as they dived for cover. Toni ran out and got in his car, driving back to the hitters house. He knew something had to be done.........

To be continued once again........

Rj applauds

I'm loving your story keep up the good work.

Ive got another coming...Third time lucky, things get a litle better but Im not going to give it away.

Dont worry Ive hired a proof reader, hes gunna help me put some detail into things

Toni walks off and comes back with a popcorn cart

"Free popcorn for everyone!"