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| A flaw in the plan (life's a bitch 4) | Started by: Rj-Fuller on Aug 28, '09 17:59 |
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As the last member of the Hitsquad filed in the heavy oak door slammed shut. "We move on the cartel tomorrow, i've set up a drug deal with Jorge handing over the drugs.now he doesn't know who we are lets keep it that way. The plan is we go to the meet but only me and Rj are going to show. the rest of you are going to be set up on surrounding buildings each armed with a Sniper rifle of your choice. The Change over will take place at 15:29. as soon as those drugs touch Rj's hands you terminate your man so that me and Rj can safely contain and kidnap Jorge Martinez. at 15:45 we will all meet back here. you will be given a map of the local area shortly. Are we all clear?" "YES BOSS!" "Good i want to see you all in the Cafeteria in 10 minutes to receive your gun then after dinner we have target practice. We must get this perfect if we cock up Rj Dies and i die." Me and Tony smiled at each other these Scummy, low down, hoodlum wannabe's were getting what they were owed. Fuller style. As the day came to close. I assembled the HitSquad on the field. "Right Guys, tommorrow we move on these bitches. We have to get this right. Meet me and Tony in the Cafeteria at 12:00 tomorrow for the final run through." As i bid them farewell a rush of excitement took over. I was back! When i got back to my room something seemed wrong. the room seemed to be disturbed. I took out My colt and slowly eased open the door. Nailed to the bathroom door was a note. It read: Mr.Fuller, i know you and your men are coming for me. That is if my men don't get you first. If you don't want to end up like your wife i suggest you back off now. Signed Jorge Martinez. I turned on the spot and ran down the hallway banging on all the doors. "Downstairs Now!" I jumped the last couple of steps and banged ferociously on Tony's door. Tony hurriedly opened the door. "Read it." I thrust the note into Tony's hand. he surveyed it closely. As he finished reading the note the hitsquad arrived guns in hands ready for action. "What is it boss?" Jimmy spoke calmly and cooly gun held by his side. "It's Martinez, he knows we're here i found this note in my room." I passed Him the note and he passed it amongst the hitsquad. "So what do we do now? if these guys know we're here then the plan isn't going to work. Is it?" "Jimmy's right. We need another plan. We can't show at the meet now. It'd be suicide." My eyes wandered as i spoke. So did my brain. how did they know i was here? "Martinez runs a small lap dancing bar and prostitution ring On the Main street. What about if we hit him there?" As Tony caught my eye i knew it was our only option we had to move now. "Tony's right! i want you lot mobilized and ready to leave in 10 minutes. Bring everything your pistols, rifles and knives. And meet us outside." |
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this story is great,cant wait till part 5...good job keep it up. |
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