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| A Short Poem | Started by: Baby-Face-Nelson on Aug 29, '09 11:54 |
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A Boy Misunderstood by the world, speaking his reasons but being taken as excuses, hoping one day that someone would hear him out, instead of doubting his thoughts and feelings, staying up only from his high self esteem and wild imagination, being his own person and not interfering with others, I stand for change and nothing else, with the recession this world been through and nothing holding us down, I stand for love because that's the feeling I'm getting now, being through it all and that special someone still there, saying I love you and not going no where, I stand for Baby-Face-Nelson because of who I am, with everything I have experienced and still staying strong, in the direction of thinking everything I do is wrong, I stand against fantasying, instead of just sitting there dreaming y don't you just get out and realize this reality, I stand for freedom of speech only with a few slurs, instead of keeping everything inside I let it all free, so while you trying to hate and bring me down, I'm going to always stand for me |
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Nice man I like the poem. It's deep. |
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| Reply by: ricob514 at Aug 29, '09 14:19 | |
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Aint nothin wrong wit dat Baby-Face-Nelson... let dem words swet out chor pores... |
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| Reply by: Pele_ at Aug 29, '09 14:22 | |
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yea man nice poem like ricob said it deep. |
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| Reply by: -ZERO- at Aug 29, '09 14:37 | |
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thanks and i will have more poems coming when i write some more |
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| Reply by: Baby-Face-Nelson at Aug 29, '09 14:54 | |
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nice! look forward to seeing more poems from you. |
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| Reply by: Vito_Fennuci at Aug 30, '09 02:12 | |
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yea, good!! |
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| Reply by: foxwillkillu at Aug 30, '09 02:16 | |
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thanks every one for their support and anazlyzes of my story..more will be coming in the near future |
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| Reply by: Baby-Face-Nelson at Aug 30, '09 11:28 | |
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Yep nice goin I liked that Baby-Face-Nelson. |
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| Reply by: The_Messiah at Aug 30, '09 11:44 | |
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" instead of keeping everything inside I let it all free, so while you trying to hate and bring me down, I'm going to always stand for me " i like that line i wanna see more |
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| Reply by: OJ-DA-JUICEMAN--FDP at Aug 30, '09 14:01 | |
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ill probably have another one up today |
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| Reply by: Baby-Face-Nelson at Aug 30, '09 14:03 | |
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Very Nice |
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| Reply by: BigMike at Aug 31, '09 14:23 | |
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Nice poem. I enjoy the use of language. |
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| Reply by: Skaarn at Aug 31, '09 17:17 | |
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Deep poem Baby-Face-Nelson, Very nice indeed |
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| Reply by: DonPardo at Sep 13, '09 10:52 | |
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Pretty good poem man. Never really like poetry at all or enlish in that case. But it was pretty good man. Keep on writin. Maybe try some other stuff. Like short story or and speech or somethin. |
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| Reply by: Tony-Castelli-Jr at Sep 13, '09 15:39 | |
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Star, who is a big fan of poetry, applauds Nelson. Well written and I hope maybe one day to see more of this fantastic poetry. |
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| Reply by: Starshine at Sep 13, '09 15:49 | |
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Great work Baby-Face-Nelson. |
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| Reply by: LilWayne_ at Sep 15, '09 06:35 | |
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good read, looking forward to reading your other stuff |
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| Reply by: druglrd at Sep 15, '09 06:59 | |
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Penguins Penguins all around, Penguins slide along the ground, Penguins eat a lot of fish but Penguins don't use a dish.. Seagal bows at his deep poem about metaphorical penguins |
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| Reply by: PrinceSeagal at Sep 15, '09 08:38 | |
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