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A Short Poem Started by: Baby-Face-Nelson on Aug 29, '09 11:54

A Boy Misunderstood by the world, speaking his reasons but being taken as excuses, hoping one day that someone would hear him out, instead of doubting his thoughts and feelings, staying up only from his high self esteem and wild imagination, being his own person and not interfering with others, I stand for change and nothing else, with the recession this world been through and nothing holding us down, I stand for love because that's the feeling I'm getting now, being through it all and that special someone still there, saying I love you and not going no where, I stand for Baby-Face-Nelson because of who I am, with everything I have experienced and still staying strong, in the direction of thinking everything I do is wrong, I stand against fantasying, instead of just sitting there dreaming y don't you just get out and realize this reality, I stand for freedom of speech only with a few slurs, instead of keeping everything inside I let it all free, so while you trying to hate and bring me down, I'm going to always stand for me

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Nice man I like the poem. It's deep.

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Aint nothin wrong wit dat Baby-Face-Nelson... let dem words swet out chor pores...

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yea man nice poem  like ricob said it deep.

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thanks and i will have more poems coming when i write some more

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nice! look forward to seeing more poems from you.

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yea, good!!

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thanks every one for their support and anazlyzes of my story..more will be coming in the near future

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Yep nice goin I liked that Baby-Face-Nelson.

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"

instead of keeping everything inside I let it all free, so while you trying to hate and bring me down, I'm going to always stand for me

" i like that line i wanna see more

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ill probably have another one up today

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Very Nice

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Nice poem. I enjoy the use of language.

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Deep poem Baby-Face-Nelson, Very nice indeed

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Pretty good poem man. Never really like poetry at all or enlish in that case. But it was pretty good man. Keep on writin. Maybe try some other stuff. Like short story or and speech or somethin.

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Star, who is a big fan of poetry, applauds Nelson.  

Well written and I hope maybe one day to see more of this fantastic poetry.

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Great work Baby-Face-Nelson.

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good read, looking forward to reading your other stuff

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Penguins Penguins all around, Penguins slide along the ground, Penguins eat a lot of fish but Penguins don't use a dish..

Seagal bows at his deep poem about metaphorical penguins

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