it was a man for a time ago,  A real Gentleman,  He lived in PH,  Before the war,   
He made himself alot of money,  Donated half of it ALLWAYS ,   ( If he had earnd 50.000  He gave his boss 25.000 And so on )
hes rank just keept going,  higher and higer, 

then he made a misstake,   A man was sleeping,  A gangster,  A low ranked basterd Who did take his life for granted, he didnt saw the gangsters face,  burt he didnt cear  This man shoot  the gangster,..   While he was sleeping,

And he told his boss,  

ONE MISSTAKE,
That gangster was in the SAME family,   ( Shit, ) 
but he told the boss,   He was sleeping,  He didnt fellt so much,  But i take my punishment,   ( He gave his boss his own gun )
if your gonna kill me,  Take my gun,  

the boss was in a good moode,   And told him,  

" until now, you have done evrything correkt,  Until now i was proud,   BUT i Wont shoot you, I spare your life,  But This gun im gonna keep,  And  you will no longer have the rank your having etheir,  EARN it back "

A week later, the war brook out,   A High ranked gangmember, Whit no gun,   Cant protect his boss,  
Evrybody Dies.  But that gentleman Didnt,   
He made it true the war,    But noone was left,   All his freind was gone,  

He couldnt take it,  2 days later,  he commits suicide,...     
R.I.P  ....     

Good Story Wesslan, I know you will grow into a great mafioso.

thats a  bummer but good story

Vito appears out of the street and hears the man Speaking.

He stands with a stunned look on his face, he cant quite understand the man, halfway through he turns around and walks off.

Thanks you two,    iMgOoNaMaKUReYezBlEd  and  foxwillkillu ,..

And the third one,  thanks for posting anyway =)  

sad but good story my friend

thanks mate, 

was fun to read

very sad story =/

Nice story,you should write more,You can try and train your grammar skills though.Its a good thing to use when talking in the streets.

fun to read but a sad ending for the guy

Tommy_gato,   Im trying evry day  and thanks evrybody  for all the nice saying .. haha :D

they should make a movie out of that story.

haha,  You think ?   Thanks man, Thats was good to hear,..

A good read my friend.

nice story

Nice story never thought of that before

have you never thought it was a nice story ? :) 

Thankseverybody,  thinks its fun to get great respons.

Well, I know that the writter is dead,..  But it was pretty nice to read it,..  =) 

alot of details and great to read =), Its not good that wesslan is dead, Wonder if someone could write as good as this?

Send me stories at my mail and i will read it =)